' SAATH APNA TO BUS SAFAR TAK HAI ' *................ HASAN

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           (  Tarahi  Ghazal *)


Kaun   kahta  hai  Umr  bhar   tak  hai  ,
'Saath  apna   to  bus  Safar  tak  hai'


GaaoN-GaaoN    ,  Nagar-Nagar   tak  hai  ,
Baat  abb  phaili  har  Bashar  tak  hai


Kaise  tujh  bin  guzar  rahi  hai  Hayaat  ,
Tujh ko  Zaalim  naheeN  khabar  tak  hai


Ab  woh  nikleiNge  ,  abb  woh  aayeiN ge  ,
Har   Nazar   unki  Rah-guzar  tak  hai


Hai   Wasee  ,  aur   bhi   Wasee   Dunya  ,
HaaN , bazaahir  ye  Bahr-o-Barr  tak  hai


Be - gharaz   kaun   saath   deta   hai  ,
Shamma   se    dosti   Sahar   tak  hai


Hum  itaa'at  kareiN  na  kaise  'Hasan'  ,
Jab  Mutee - e - Nabi (saw) Qamar  tak   hai


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Wasee=vast ; Bahr o barr = Ocean and Land ;
itaa'at= Obedience ; mutee = Obedient

*Yeh Ghazal Shameem Faruqi saheb  ke  ooper  
quoted misra e tarah pe 31 May 2013 ko munaqid
Tarahi Mushaire mein pesh ki gayee thee
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«Reply #1 on: July 08, 2013, 09:45:26 PM »
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वाह-वाह,बहुत खूब जी.
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waah waah waah hasan ji.. bahut bahut bahut khoob likhe ho. aur maqta toh bahut pyaara hai. hazaron dili daad aur ramzan mubarak ho aapko..
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«Reply #3 on: July 08, 2013, 10:17:49 PM »
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waah waah waah Hasan Saheb, bahut hi khoob, 5th aur maqte ke sher khususann bahut pasand aaye.
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«Reply #4 on: July 08, 2013, 10:52:49 PM »
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Superb... waaaaaaaaaaaaaaah waah  Applause Clapping Smiley Applause
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waah waah hasan jee bahut khoob..dhero daad..happy9
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«Reply #6 on: July 08, 2013, 11:09:08 PM »
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on July 08, 2013, 09:05:25 PM
          (  Tarahi  Ghazal *)


Kaun   kahta  hai  Umr  bhar   tak  hai  ,
'Saath  apna   to  bus  Safar  tak  hai'


GaaoN-GaaoN    ,  Nagar-Nagar   tak  hai  ,
Baat  abb  phaili  har  Bashar  tak  hai


Kaise  tujh  bin  guzar  rahi  hai  Hayaat  ,
Tujh ko  Zaalim  naheeN  khabar  tak  hai


Ab  woh  AnikleiNge  ,  abb  woh  aayeiN ge  ,
Har   Nazar   unki  Rah-guzar  tak  hai


Hai   Wasee  ,  aur   bhi   Wasee   Dunya  ,
HaaN , bazaahir  ye  Bahr-o-Barr  tak  hai


Be - gharaz   kaun   saath   deta   hai  ,
Shamma   se    dosti   Sahar   tak  hai


Hum  itaa'at  kareiN  na  kaise  'Hasan'  ,
Jab  Mutee - e - Nabi (saw) Qamar  tak   hai


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Wasee=vast ; Bahr o barr = Ocean and Land ;
itaa'at= Obedience ; mutee = Obedient

*Yeh Ghazal Shameem Faruqi saheb  ke  ooper  
quoted misra e tarah pe 31 May 2013 ko munaqid
Tarahi Mushaire mein pesh ki gayee thee



Waah Waah Waah Waah Waah......

Kya kehne Saheb...Har Ek Sher Lajawaaab

Bahut Bahut Khooooooooob...


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«Reply #7 on: July 08, 2013, 11:21:33 PM »
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Kaun   kahta  hai  Umr  bhar   tak  hai  ,
'Saath  apna   to  bus  Safar  tak  hai'

Kaise  tujh  bin  guzar  rahi  hai  Hayaat  ,
Tujh ko  Zaalim  naheeN  khabar  tak  hai

Be - gharaz   kaun   saath   deta   hai  ,
Shamma   se    dosti   Sahar   tak  hai

Wah,Wah,Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah Hasan Sir,
Really nice
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«Reply #8 on: July 09, 2013, 12:26:54 AM »
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Hai   Wasee  ,  aur   bhi   Wasee   Dunya  ,
HaaN , bazaahir  ye  Bahr-o-Barr  tak  hai


Be - gharaz   kaun   saath   deta   hai  ,
Shamma   se    dosti   Sahar   tak  hai


Hum  itaa'at  kareiN  na  kaise  'Hasan'  ,
Jab  Mutee - e - Nabi (saw) Qamar  tak   hai

is naayab ghazal ki taareef kaise karun..
Alfaz hi naheen mil rahe..
aur quoted ashaar ...bas wah wah aur wah
Bahut umda Sir
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«Reply #9 on: July 09, 2013, 12:31:56 AM »
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on July 08, 2013, 09:05:25 PM
           (  Tarahi  Ghazal *)


Kaun   kahta  hai  Umr  bhar   tak  hai  ,
'Saath  apna   to  bus  Safar  tak  hai'


GaaoN-GaaoN    ,  Nagar-Nagar   tak  hai  ,
Baat  abb  phaili  har  Bashar  tak  hai


Kaise  tujh  bin  guzar  rahi  hai  Hayaat  ,
Tujh ko  Zaalim  naheeN  khabar  tak  hai


Ab  woh  nikleiNge  ,  abb  woh  aayeiN ge  ,
Har   Nazar   unki  Rah-guzar  tak  hai


Hai   Wasee  ,  aur   bhi   Wasee   Dunya  ,
HaaN , bazaahir  ye  Bahr-o-Barr  tak  hai


Be - gharaz   kaun   saath   deta   hai  ,
Shamma   se    dosti   Sahar   tak  hai


Hum  itaa'at  kareiN  na  kaise  'Hasan'  ,
Jab  Mutee - e - Nabi (saw) Qamar  tak   hai


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Wasee=vast ; Bahr o barr = Ocean and Land ;
itaa'at= Obedience ; mutee = Obedient

*Yeh Ghazal Shameem Faruqi saheb  ke  ooper 
quoted misra e tarah pe 31 May 2013 ko munaqid
Tarahi Mushaire mein pesh ki gayee thee


gr88888888888,sir
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«Reply #10 on: July 09, 2013, 02:19:44 AM »
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Mind blowing.... SuperB.... Spaech less
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वाह-वाह क्या कहने.
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«Reply #12 on: July 09, 2013, 10:23:12 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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Quote from: Advo.RavinderaRavi on July 08, 2013, 09:45:26 PM
वाह-वाह,बहुत खूब जी.
shukkriya,Ravinder ji.
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Quote from: aqsh on July 08, 2013, 10:13:16 PM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP
waah waah waah hasan ji.. bahut bahut bahut khoob likhe ho. aur maqta toh bahut pyaara hai. hazaron dili daad aur ramzan mubarak ho aapko..
bahut shukriya aqsh aur duaaein. aapki housla afzai ke liye tah e dil se mamnoon hoon.
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