' SAATH APNA TO BUS SAFAR TAK HAI ' *................ HASAN

by F.H.SIDDIQUI on July 08, 2013, 09:05:25 PM
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«Reply #15 on: July 09, 2013, 06:37:51 PM »
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Quote from: Iftakhar Ahmad on July 08, 2013, 10:17:49 PM
waah waah waah Hasan Saheb, bahut hi khoob, 5th aur maqte ke sher khususann bahut pasand aaye.
iftakhar saheb , bahut shukriya,nawazish,duaaein.
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«Reply #16 on: July 09, 2013, 07:11:58 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob bhaaijaan
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«Reply #17 on: July 09, 2013, 11:20:54 PM »
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waah waah waah waah kyaa kehne Hasan ji, bahut hi khoob likhaa hai aapne.....!!!
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«Reply #18 on: July 10, 2013, 01:43:56 AM »
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Quote from: Iqtedar on July 08, 2013, 10:52:49 PM
Superb... waaaaaaaaaaaaaaah waah  Applause Clapping Smiley Applause
thanks.iqtedar saheb.khush rahye.
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«Reply #19 on: July 10, 2013, 02:03:47 AM »
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Quote from: nashwani on July 08, 2013, 11:08:08 PM
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waah waah hasan jee bahut khoob..dhero daad..happy9
shukriya,nashwani ji
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«Reply #20 on: July 10, 2013, 07:06:41 PM »
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wah wah
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«Reply #21 on: July 10, 2013, 08:50:29 PM »
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Quote from: khwahish on July 08, 2013, 11:09:08 PM

Waah Waah Waah Waah Waah......

Kya kehne Saheb...Har Ek Sher Lajawaaab

Bahut Bahut Khooooooooob...


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khwaish ji, shukriya aur duaaein.
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«Reply #22 on: July 11, 2013, 03:00:10 AM »
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«Reply #23 on: July 11, 2013, 12:28:13 PM »
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Quote from: khwahish on July 08, 2013, 11:09:08 PM

Waah Waah Waah Waah Waah......

Kya kehne Saheb...Har Ek Sher Lajawaaab

Bahut Bahut Khooooooooob...


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bahur shukriya aur duaaein
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«Reply #24 on: July 11, 2013, 11:03:43 PM »
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Quote from: Sudhir Ashq on July 08, 2013, 11:21:33 PM
Kaun   kahta  hai  Umr  bhar   tak  hai  ,
'Saath  apna   to  bus  Safar  tak  hai'

Kaise  tujh  bin  guzar  rahi  hai  Hayaat  ,
Tujh ko  Zaalim  naheeN  khabar  tak  hai

Be - gharaz   kaun   saath   deta   hai  ,
Shamma   se    dosti   Sahar   tak  hai

Wah,Wah,Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah Hasan Sir,
Really nice


sudhir ji,bahut shukriya aur duaaein
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«Reply #25 on: July 11, 2013, 11:05:30 PM »
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bhot khub
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«Reply #26 on: July 12, 2013, 05:56:22 PM »
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Quote from: mkv on July 09, 2013, 12:26:54 AM
Hai   Wasee  ,  aur   bhi   Wasee   Dunya  ,
HaaN , bazaahir  ye  Bahr-o-Barr  tak  hai


Be - gharaz   kaun   saath   deta   hai  ,
Shamma   se    dosti   Sahar   tak  hai


Hum  itaa'at  kareiN  na  kaise  'Hasan'  ,
Jab  Mutee - e - Nabi (saw) Qamar  tak   hai

is naayab ghazal ki taareef kaise karun..
Alfaz hi naheen mil rahe..
aur quoted ashaar ...bas wah wah aur wah
Bahut umda Sir
Zarranawazi ke liye tah e dil
se mamnoon hoon,mukeshji .
duaaein.Hasan
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«Reply #27 on: July 13, 2013, 01:04:15 PM »
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Quote from: marhoom bahayaat on July 09, 2013, 12:31:56 AM
gr88888888888,sir
thanks ,MB saheb
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«Reply #28 on: July 15, 2013, 04:32:47 PM »
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Quote from: Masoom Shahzada on July 09, 2013, 02:19:44 AM
Mind blowing.... SuperB.... Spaech less
masoom shahzada saheb , bahut shukrguzar hoon
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«Reply #29 on: July 15, 2013, 04:38:06 PM »
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on July 08, 2013, 09:05:25 PM
           (  Tarahi  Ghazal *)


Kaun   kahta  hai  Umr  bhar   tak  hai  ,
'Saath  apna   to  bus  Safar  tak  hai'


GaaoN-GaaoN    ,  Nagar-Nagar   tak  hai  ,
Baat  abb  phaili  har  Bashar  tak  hai


Kaise  tujh  bin  guzar  rahi  hai  Hayaat  ,
Tujh ko  Zaalim  naheeN  khabar  tak  hai


Ab  woh  nikleiNge  ,  abb  woh  aayeiN ge  ,
Har   Nazar   unki  Rah-guzar  tak  hai


Hai   Wasee  ,  aur   bhi   Wasee   Dunya  ,
HaaN , bazaahir  ye  Bahr-o-Barr  tak  hai


Be - gharaz   kaun   saath   deta   hai  ,
Shamma   se    dosti   Sahar   tak  hai


Hum  itaa'at  kareiN  na  kaise  'Hasan'  ,
Jab  Mutee - e - Nabi (saw) Qamar  tak   hai


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Wasee=vast ; Bahr o barr = Ocean and Land ;
itaa'at= Obedience ; mutee = Obedient

*Yeh Ghazal Shameem Faruqi saheb  ke  ooper 
quoted misra e tarah pe 31 May 2013 ko munaqid
Tarahi Mushaire mein pesh ki gayee thee

very good bhaijan.
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