saaye jalne lage haiN .....mamta bajpai

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saaye jalne lage haiN raahoN me
dhoop aayee hai kin panaahoN me

roshanee ne bhee saath chhor diyaa
bhar rahe haiN andhere baahoN me

khushq hothoN pe jaam hai phir bhee
tishnagee hai meri nigaahoN me

khushnaseebee ya badnaseebee kahen
hum bhee shaamil haiNunkee aahoN me

mujhse raNjish wo kyaa nibhaayeNge
naam unkaa hai khair khwaahoN me

Mamta Bajpai
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«Reply #1 on: March 21, 2011, 09:53:13 AM »
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Quote from: mamta bajpai on March 21, 2011, 08:40:42 AM
saaye jalne lage haiN rahooN me
dhoop aayee hai kin panaahoN me

roshanee ne bhee saath chhor diyaa
bhar rahe haiN andhere baahoN me

khushq hothoN pe jaam hai phir bhee
tishnagee hai meri nigaahoN me

khushnaseebee ya badnaseebee kahen
hum bhee shaamil haiNunkee aahoN me

mujhse raNjish wo kyaa nibhaayeNge
naam unkaa hai khair khwaahoNme

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akhri sher bahut acha laga
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«Reply #2 on: March 21, 2011, 12:25:15 PM »
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khushnaseebee ya badnaseebee kahen
hum bhee shaamil hai Nunkee aahoN me

Kya Umdaa Khayal Hai ... Mamta Ji ! bahut khoob !!
ek umdaa peshkash .... ! aur asardaar bhi ... !

tahe dil se daad hazir hai ...  Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: March 21, 2011, 12:52:41 PM »
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bht bht khoob mamta ji...
sply last one....
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«Reply #4 on: March 21, 2011, 01:44:14 PM »
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Aap k kalaam ki taariff karne ko ab lafz he nahi bache Mamta-di....
Aap itnaa achha likhti ho k g chahta hai haath chumloo aapke... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause hello hello wave wave hello2 hello2
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«Reply #5 on: March 21, 2011, 03:40:32 PM »
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Waah ji waah mamta hi behad khubsurat alfazo se likhi apki ye ghazal dil ko chhu gyi...
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«Reply #6 on: March 22, 2011, 01:36:55 PM »
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SHIHAAB JEE ! KIS TARAH AAP KAA SHUKRIYAA ADAA KAROON ....... SAMAJH NAHEE AATAA.....SHAIRY KEE RAAHON ME AAP KAA SAATH HAMESHAA SE HUMAARAA HOUSLAA BARHAATAA AYAA HAI.........BEHAD SE BHEE ZAYAADAA SHUKRIYAA......
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«Reply #7 on: March 22, 2011, 04:48:03 PM »
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Kya Khoob Andaz e Bayaan Hai
Bohat Hi IBadhiya Peshkash Mamta Ji

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«Reply #8 on: March 23, 2011, 08:10:25 AM »
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Bahut bahut shukriyaa Yaash jee!
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«Reply #9 on: March 23, 2011, 08:12:18 AM »
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Aadil jee! gazal ke maqte ko sarahane ke liye behad shukriyaa!
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«Reply #10 on: March 23, 2011, 08:13:26 AM »
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Naresh jee ! khaas tawajjo ke liye behad shukriya!
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«Reply #11 on: March 23, 2011, 08:15:50 AM »
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mamtaji...kamal hai.... bahut khub...... bahut bahut daad.....

 Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #12 on: March 23, 2011, 08:25:34 AM »
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LAST ONE IS VERY NICE MAMTA JI Applause Applause
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«Reply #13 on: March 23, 2011, 12:56:20 PM »
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bahut khoob mamta ji ,achha likha hai.
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«Reply #14 on: March 23, 2011, 04:12:34 PM »
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shukriyaa Kamal!
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