Sab Jaanti hoon...........magar phir bhi !!!!!

by Talat on June 07, 2005, 11:40:34 AM
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Khabar hai ki tum mere kabhi ho nahin sakte
Yeh baat magar main dil ko samjhoon bhi kaise
 
Khabar hai ki maine chaand ki tamanna ki hai
Zameen ka ek zarra hoon, nazar aaungi kaise

Khabar hai mujhe ki tum mera naseeb nahin ho
Aur jiska ho tum naseeb usse churaaun bhi kaise  

Khabar hai ki zindagi me sab kuch nahin mila karta
Yeh baat bata do ki tumhe bhulaaoon bhi kaise !!!
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«Reply #1 on: June 07, 2005, 11:54:04 AM »
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Very nice Talat ji............................. Usual Smile  Usual Smile  Usual Smile  Usual Smile
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«Reply #2 on: June 07, 2005, 12:09:57 PM »
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Thanks !! Suhas.......................................!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #3 on: June 07, 2005, 03:40:55 PM »
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bhut hI khoobsoorat nazm hai!!!!!!
keep it up
sarika
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«Reply #4 on: June 07, 2005, 03:46:47 PM »
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Bohot bohot shukriya!! Sarika..........hausla afzaai ka !!!
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«Reply #5 on: June 07, 2005, 03:53:28 PM »
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Khabar hai ki tum mere kabhi ho nahin sakte
Yeh baat magar main dil ko samjhoon bhi kaise
 
Khabar hai ki maine chaand ki tamanna ki hai
Zameen ka ek zarra hoon, nazar aaungi kaise

Khabar hai mujhe ki tum mera naseeb nahin ho
Aur jiska ho tum naseeb usse churaaun bhi kaise  

Khabar hai ki zindagi me sab kuch nahin mila karta
Yeh baat bata do ki tumhe bhulaaoon bhi kaise !!!


wah!!!!!!!!  bahot  khoob  talat.......................  do  line mein  main bhi  kuch  kah  doon  aap  ke liye......

khusboo  ki  tarah  tere  harsoo  bikhar  jaonga  "Talat"
apne  ehsaas  ke  andaaz  ek  baar  badal ke  dekh..........
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«Reply #6 on: June 07, 2005, 03:58:58 PM »
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Shukriya Waheed...............aur bohot achcha likha hai!!!

Khabar hai ki aur bhi chaahne waale mil jaayenge mujhe
Mohabbat to maine karli, kisi aur se dil lagaaoon bhi kaise!!!
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«Reply #7 on: June 07, 2005, 04:24:34 PM »
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ur  welcome  talat..........  very  nice  reply.........

hum  apni  kahani  kaise  sunaye  ask bah jaayega
lab  khamosh  ho jaayenge dard  badh jaayega
ek shaks hai jo teri dahleez per sadiyon se khada hai
gar  use  teri  mohabbat na mili  to kidhar jaayega..
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«Reply #8 on: June 07, 2005, 04:34:37 PM »
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Thanks Waheed..............n nice one again..........

Humne to mohabbat ki hai ibaadat ki tarah
Aur ibaadat to ki jaati hai bas ek Khuda ki
Zindagi bhar chahe tanhaaiyan mile humko
Kisi aur se mohabbat ab nahin ho paayegi!!
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«Reply #9 on: June 07, 2005, 11:54:54 PM »
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inn nazron ne jo dekha, khwab tumhara hei
inn labbo ne jo kaha, naam tumhara hei

dil ke darwaze tak, band lifafei mei aaya
aur ish dil ko chu gaya, pegaam tumhara hei

andhero se nikaala, ujaalo mein jo le aaya
ek pal mein jisne badla, pyaar tumhaara hei
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«Reply #10 on: June 08, 2005, 03:44:08 PM »
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wah wah talat!!!!!!!! its simply beautiful!!!!!!! waheed ne bih bohot acha likha hai! tum dono ka muqabla kar nahin sakhti isslyie bas chota sa kuch likha hai!

Hume bhi arzoo thi tere sang jeevan bitane ki,
Par saath tera humne paya bhi to nahin...

Yuh to zindagi me bohot gum hote hai ansoon bahane ke liye,
Par tere jaise pehle kisi ne rulaya bhi to nahin...

Aisa nahin ke tere ane se pehle hum kabhi muskurate na te,
Par tere jane ke baad phir waisa kisi ne hasaya bhi to nahin...

Badakte rahe is duniya me humsafar ki talash me,
Par tujh jaisa yaar phir doobara mila bhi to nahin....

Tere yaadon ki peredari mere ashk dete hai aye dost,
Koi aur inke peredari ke kabil bhi to nahin…
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«Reply #11 on: June 08, 2005, 04:57:16 PM »
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Khabar hai ki tum mere kabhi ho nahin sakte
Yeh baat magar main dil ko samjhoon bhi kaise
 
Khabar hai ki maine chaand ki tamanna ki hai
Zameen ka ek zarra hoon, nazar aaungi kaise

Khabar hai mujhe ki tum mera naseeb nahin ho
Aur jiska ho tum naseeb usse churaaun bhi kaise  

Khabar hai ki zindagi me sab kuch nahin mila karta
Yeh baat bata do ki tumhe bhulaaoon bhi kaise !!!


wah Talat,such a beautiful work.Ek ek lafz me dard hai.jitni tareef ki jaaye kam hai,its so nice.
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«Reply #12 on: June 08, 2005, 06:40:33 PM »
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wah wah talat!!!!!!!! its simply beautiful!!!!!!! waheed ne bih bohot acha likha hai! tum dono ka muqabla kar nahin sakhti isslyie bas chota sa kuch likha hai!

Hume bhi arzoo thi tere sang jeevan bitane ki,
Par saath tera humne paya bhi to nahin...

Yuh to zindagi me bohot gum hote hai ansoon bahane ke liye,
Par tere jaise pehle kisi ne rulaya bhi to nahin...

Aisa nahin ke tere ane se pehle hum kabhi muskurate na te,
Par tere jane ke baad phir waisa kisi ne hasaya bhi to nahin...

Badakte rahe is duniya me humsafar ki talash me,
Par tujh jaisa yaar phir doobara mila bhi to nahin....

Tere yaadon ki peredari mere ashk dete hai aye dost,
Koi aur inke peredari ke kabil bhi to nahin…


Thank Meena.....taaref ke liye....aur bohot hi khoobsurat likha hai..very touching....i can feel the pain of the emotions !!
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«Reply #13 on: June 08, 2005, 06:44:26 PM »
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Khabar hai ki tum mere kabhi ho nahin sakte
Yeh baat magar main dil ko samjhoon bhi kaise
 
Khabar hai ki maine chaand ki tamanna ki hai
Zameen ka ek zarra hoon, nazar aaungi kaise

Khabar hai mujhe ki tum mera naseeb nahin ho
Aur jiska ho tum naseeb usse churaaun bhi kaise  

Khabar hai ki zindagi me sab kuch nahin mila karta
Yeh baat bata do ki tumhe bhulaaoon bhi kaise !!!


wah Talat,such a beautiful work.Ek ek lafz me dard hai.jitni tareef ki jaaye kam hai,its so nice.


Thanks a lot Nidhi....thank you so much....... !!!!
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«Reply #14 on: June 08, 2005, 06:46:12 PM »
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Khabar hai ki tum mere kabhi ho nahin sakte
Yeh baat magar main dil ko samjhoon bhi kaise
 
Khabar hai ki maine chaand ki tamanna ki hai
Zameen ka ek zarra hoon, nazar aaungi kaise

Khabar hai mujhe ki tum mera naseeb nahin ho
Aur jiska ho tum naseeb usse churaaun bhi kaise  

Khabar hai ki zindagi me sab kuch nahin mila karta
Yeh baat bata do ki tumhe bhulaaoon bhi kaise !!!


abb main kya kahun....lagta hai kisi ne meri emotions ko apne shabdon mein dhaal diya hai.....TOOOOO GOOD, YEH TARIKHA-E-DARD-E-BAYAN...BAHUT KHOOB, BAHUT KHOOB....
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