Sab Jaanti hoon...........magar phir bhi !!!!!

by Talat on June 07, 2005, 11:40:34 AM
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Meena
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«Reply #15 on: June 08, 2005, 06:50:37 PM »
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thanxxx talat for liking my poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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«Reply #16 on: June 08, 2005, 06:53:12 PM »
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Khabar hai ki tum mere kabhi ho nahin sakte
Yeh baat magar main dil ko samjhoon bhi kaise
 
Khabar hai ki maine chaand ki tamanna ki hai
Zameen ka ek zarra hoon, nazar aaungi kaise

Khabar hai mujhe ki tum mera naseeb nahin ho
Aur jiska ho tum naseeb usse churaaun bhi kaise  

Khabar hai ki zindagi me sab kuch nahin mila karta
Yeh baat bata do ki tumhe bhulaaoon bhi kaise !!!


abb main kya kahun....lagta hai kisi ne meri emotions ko apne shabdon mein dhaal diya hai.....TOOOOO GOOD, YEH TARIKHA-E-DARD-E-BAYAN...BAHUT KHOOB, BAHUT KHOOB....


Shukriya Nikki.......ye dono poetries jab maine sochi theen to pata nahi tha ki itni taareef milegi..thanks a ton yaar !!!!
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«Reply #17 on: June 08, 2005, 06:55:18 PM »
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wah wah talat!!!!!!!! its simply beautiful!!!!!!! waheed ne bih bohot acha likha hai! tum dono ka muqabla kar nahin sakhti isslyie bas chota sa kuch likha hai!

Hume bhi arzoo thi tere sang jeevan bitane ki,
Par saath tera humne paya bhi to nahin...

Yuh to zindagi me bohot gum hote hai ansoon bahane ke liye,
Par tere jaise pehle kisi ne rulaya bhi to nahin...

Aisa nahin ke tere ane se pehle hum kabhi muskurate na te,
Par tere jane ke baad phir waisa kisi ne hasaya bhi to nahin...

Badakte rahe is duniya me humsafar ki talash me,
Par tujh jaisa yaar phir doobara mila bhi to nahin....

Tere yaadon ki peredari mere ashk dete hai aye dost,
Koi aur inke peredari ke kabil bhi to nahin…



superb....sis, kamaal likhti hain aap..
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«Reply #18 on: June 09, 2005, 10:30:32 AM »
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wah wah talat!!!!!!!! its simply beautiful!!!!!!! waheed ne bih bohot acha likha hai! tum dono ka muqabla kar nahin sakhti isslyie bas chota sa kuch likha hai!

Hume bhi arzoo thi tere sang jeevan bitane ki,
Par saath tera humne paya bhi to nahin...

Yuh to zindagi me bohot gum hote hai ansoon bahane ke liye,
Par tere jaise pehle kisi ne rulaya bhi to nahin...

Aisa nahin ke tere ane se pehle hum kabhi muskurate na te,
Par tere jane ke baad phir waisa kisi ne hasaya bhi to nahin...

Badakte rahe is duniya me humsafar ki talash me,
Par tujh jaisa yaar phir doobara mila bhi to nahin....

Tere yaadon ki peredari mere ashk dete hai aye dost,
Koi aur inke peredari ke kabil bhi to nahin…


wow meena sis,superb work :D
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«Reply #19 on: June 09, 2005, 01:58:38 PM »
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Is Khauf se wo saath nibhaane ke haq main hai
Khokar mujhe ye ladki kahin dukh se mar na jaaye!!!

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«Reply #20 on: June 09, 2005, 06:41:24 PM »
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wah wah talat!!!!!!!! its simply beautiful!!!!!!! waheed ne bih bohot acha likha hai! tum dono ka muqabla kar nahin sakhti isslyie bas chota sa kuch likha hai!

Hume bhi arzoo thi tere sang jeevan bitane ki,
Par saath tera humne paya bhi to nahin...

Yuh to zindagi me bohot gum hote hai ansoon bahane ke liye,
Par tere jaise pehle kisi ne rulaya bhi to nahin...

Aisa nahin ke tere ane se pehle hum kabhi muskurate na te,
Par tere jane ke baad phir waisa kisi ne hasaya bhi to nahin...

Badakte rahe is duniya me humsafar ki talash me,
Par tujh jaisa yaar phir doobara mila bhi to nahin....

Tere yaadon ki peredari mere ashk dete hai aye dost,
Koi aur inke peredari ke kabil bhi to nahin…


hey meenu................wonderful..................y aar  hum  log koi  shayar  nahi  hai........

very  nice  talat....................

ab jo  laut  ke  aaogi bhi  to kya  paaogi
ek  bikhara  hua  aashiyana  yahan  paaogi
ek  hi  pal mein  meri  jism  ki  deewar  giri
sonch  lo tum mujhe  ab kaise sambhaal paaogi............ :oops:
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«Reply #21 on: June 09, 2005, 10:13:08 PM »
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Unki yaad mein sab kuch bhulaye bethe hain ....
chirag khushio ke bhujaye baithe hain...
Hum to marenge unki bahon mein...
maut se bhi sharat lagaye baithe hain.. .......
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«Reply #22 on: June 10, 2005, 06:53:58 AM »
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Thanks Waheed...n nice one..... nice Fakhar.............
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«Reply #23 on: June 10, 2005, 07:09:47 AM »
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Khabar hai ki tum mere kabhi ho nahin sakte
Yeh baat magar main dil ko samjhoon bhi kaise
 
Khabar hai ki maine chaand ki tamanna ki hai
Zameen ka ek zarra hoon, nazar aaungi kaise

Khabar hai mujhe ki tum mera naseeb nahin ho
Aur jiska ho tum naseeb usse churaaun bhi kaise  

Khabar hai ki zindagi me sab kuch nahin mila karta
Yeh baat bata do ki tumhe bhulaaoon bhi kaise !!!


waah .....

Khabar hai ki zindagi me sab kuch nahin mila karta
Yeh baat bata do ki tumhe bhulaaoon bhi kaise !!!

yeh sher aap ka bahoot khoob hai ...... ped ke Ghalib ji ka ik sher yaad aa gya.....

"jaana paDa raqeeb ke dar par hazaar baar
'ei kaash jaanta na teree rahguzar ko maiN "

bahot acha likhti hai aap mohtrma !!

khabar hai ke tuney ki bewffai mujhse, lekin
yeh bta ke dil-e-nadaan ko samjauN kassey

jo garmi-e-kangar jo rhi hai mehsoos dil ko
teri nazrooN ko woh nazara dhikauN kaseey

chahat ko ker ruswaa jo diye hai zakm tuney
yeh bta un zakmooN pe marham lagaau kaseey

na aati hai saans mujhey na nikta hai dum hi mera
yeh bta ke qayaamat ko bhulau kaseey

khabar hai ke na lout ke aayegey  kabhi
woh pal jo sath bitaye tere, bhoolau kaseey!!
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«Reply #24 on: June 10, 2005, 07:25:34 AM »
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wah wah talat!!!!!!!! its simply beautiful!!!!!!! waheed ne bih bohot acha likha hai! tum dono ka muqabla kar nahin sakhti isslyie bas chota sa kuch likha hai!

Hume bhi arzoo thi tere sang jeevan bitane ki,
Par saath tera humne paya bhi to nahin...

Yuh to zindagi me bohot gum hote hai ansoon bahane ke liye,
Par tere jaise pehle kisi ne rulaya bhi to nahin...

Aisa nahin ke tere ane se pehle hum kabhi muskurate na te,
Par tere jane ke baad phir waisa kisi ne hasaya bhi to nahin...

Badakte rahe is duniya me humsafar ki talash me,
Par tujh jaisa yaar phir doobara mila bhi to nahin....

Tere yaadon ki peredari mere ashk dete hai aye dost,
Koi aur inke peredari ke kabil bhi to nahin…


waah ..... bhoot khoob !!!
Yuh to zindagi me bohot gum hote hai ansoon bahane ke liye,
Par tere jaise pehle kisi ne rulaya bhi to nahin...


yeh sher aap ka kaffi wajandaar lga ....


koshishen naa-kaamiyaab hui talab se kuch na hua
keh do un yaadon se aaj se na sataaye humey

ro ro ke guzaara hai teri judaai ka har ek saans
thakgayi nigaahe meri aur na rulaaye humey

sholaa-e-dil bujhtaa hai na jaltaa hai
kab tak yoon sulgegaa koi batlaaye humey

Sharmsaar hai hum khud apni wafaao pe 'HumTum'
Dikhaai nahi kuch deta ab unki jafaaye humey!!
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«Reply #25 on: June 10, 2005, 09:48:31 AM »
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Thanks Humtum ji...........!!! and bohot khoob kaha aapne.... !!!!!
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Meena
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«Reply #26 on: June 10, 2005, 02:12:29 PM »
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oye thank u dosto thank u!  :D

waheed aur humtum mundeya bohot acha likha!!!

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«Reply #27 on: June 10, 2005, 10:30:33 PM »
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Thanks Waheed...n nice one..... nice Fakhar.............


Thanx

NA CHAHO KISI KO KE CHAHAT TUMHARI MUJBOORI BAN JAYAe
CHAHO KISI KO ITNA KE TUMHARA PYAAR USKE LIYEH ZAROORI BAN JAYEH
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«Reply #28 on: June 13, 2005, 05:45:11 PM »
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wah humtum,waheed,naveed.............all have written gr8.
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«Reply #29 on: June 13, 2005, 08:35:04 PM »
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wah humtum,waheed,naveed.............all have written gr8.
Thanx Nidhi Dear
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