sabab tanhai ka (RUBAI)

by bekarar on February 27, 2009, 08:22:32 AM
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jo khud hi poora gulshan tha, wo baharon ka kya hota,
jo sabki najar me tha kabhi, wo najaron ka kya hota

tere jaane ke baad, na ho saka fir mai bhi kisi-ka
jise chand hasil tha kabhi, wo sitaron ka kya hota,
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«Reply #1 on: February 27, 2009, 08:34:29 AM »
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meri burai-yon se hi, teri achchai ka wajood hai
na hota mausam khija-on ka, to baharon ka kya hota,
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«Reply #2 on: February 27, 2009, 08:36:48 AM »
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ameeron ka shouk "mitana" hai, humari kismat mit jaana hai,
na hote sar garibon ke, to khanjar-talwaaron ka kya hota
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«Reply #3 on: February 27, 2009, 08:42:08 AM »
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na ilm shayri ka, na koi tahjeeb shayar si,
tumhaari daad na hoti, to bekarar-se ganwaron ka kya hota Grin
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«Reply #4 on: July 01, 2009, 10:39:54 PM »
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Wow so beautiful creation Bekarar ji,excellent,bahut acha likthe ho aap. Thumbs UP Applause Applause :clap:too good.
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«Reply #5 on: July 01, 2009, 10:46:00 PM »
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Thanks madhu from bottom of my heart.....
ye chand panktiyan   kisi ki najar ko arse se tarsin hain aapne kam se kam in par nigaah to daali.....banda shukrguzar hai aapka Usual Smile
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«Reply #6 on: July 01, 2009, 10:53:33 PM »
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Waah Waah aap ne to rubai kehkar puri ghazal hi keh daali, bohot khoob bekarar ji.....

Quote from: bekarar on February 27, 2009, 08:36:48 AM
ameeron ka shouk "mitana" hai, humari kismat mit jaana hai,
na hote sar garibon ke, to khanjar-talwaaron ka kya hota

ha..ha.. ye bhi khoob he..
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«Reply #7 on: July 01, 2009, 11:12:48 PM »
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bahoot shukriya randeri sahab....aap aaye aur housala afzai ki...
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«Reply #8 on: July 02, 2009, 05:21:48 AM »
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Quote from: bekarar on February 27, 2009, 08:22:32 AM
jo khud hi poora gulshan tha, wo baharon ka kya hota,
jo sabki najar me tha kabhi, wo najaron ka kya hota

tere jaane ke baad, na ho saka fir mai bhi kisi-ka
jise chand hasil tha kabhi, wo sitaron ka kya hota,



KYAA KHOOB BEKARAR SAHAB....BAHUT ACHCHEY...!!
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«Reply #9 on: July 03, 2009, 05:23:46 PM »
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Wah Sanjeev Bhai.. Har Ek Sher lajawab Likha Hai Dost.. bahut Bahut khoooooob.. Applause Applause


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«Reply #10 on: July 03, 2009, 05:28:16 PM »
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Nice ones Bekarar Ji
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«Reply #11 on: July 03, 2009, 05:34:08 PM »
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Quote from: bekarar on February 27, 2009, 08:22:32 AM
jo khud hi poora gulshan tha, wo baharon ka kya hota,
jo sabki najar me tha kabhi, wo najaron ka kya hota

tere jaane ke baad, na ho saka fir mai bhi kisi-ka
jise chand hasil tha kabhi, wo sitaron ka kya hota,


wah kaya baat hai ek ek line kamaal@dhamaal.com
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