““ sach hai--mera dil bhi sulagta hai ””

by nirala on April 03, 2011, 07:19:17 PM
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na-mumkeen sa lagta hai
sach hai-mera dil bhi sulagta hai…

parwaah parwaah parwaah, zamaaney ki
ashiq fir bhi- kuch kar gujarta hai…

ho!! mausam tez hawaon ki ya tappti dhoop ka
dil tou--rimjhimm bauchaaron ko hi tarass taa hai…

be-fikr sa rahnewale, geet madhur gungunaye jo
tanhai me--‘neer’ chhalkta hai…!!!
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«Reply #1 on: April 03, 2011, 07:27:46 PM »
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Nirala jee Aadaab!

janab kia kahne aapke bahut khoob.. Usual Smile
Behad nirali kalaam kahi hai daad Usual Smile

Aise hi likhate rahiye.. Usual Smile
Khush O aabaad rahiye.. Usual Smile
Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile         

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«Reply #2 on: April 03, 2011, 08:48:05 PM »
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Bahaut khoob dost..
Khush rahiye..!
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manjum
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«Reply #3 on: April 04, 2011, 04:57:53 AM »
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bahut khub niralaji...... badiya....

 Applause Applause Applause
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nirala
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«Reply #4 on: April 04, 2011, 05:13:21 AM »
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sukriya shihab bhaijaan…
aapki pasandgi ka teh dil se sukriya ada karta hu.
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«Reply #5 on: April 04, 2011, 05:17:58 AM »
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parwaaz ji…
aapki maujudgi to shaan se kam nahi humare lie.
behad sukriya ji…
aapne is bejaan kalaam par waqt dia aur saraha…
thanx
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«Reply #6 on: April 04, 2011, 05:21:23 AM »
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manjum ji…
aapki sirkat bht mayne rakhti hai.…
bht saara thanx apka
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«Reply #7 on: April 04, 2011, 05:31:00 AM »
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nice poem niralaji.
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nirala
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«Reply #8 on: April 04, 2011, 06:01:49 AM »
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thanx tamanna ji
sukargujar hu aapka
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«Reply #9 on: April 04, 2011, 08:23:18 AM »
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rahim dost……
maaf kariyega aapka sukriya ada karna bhul gaya---
wese bhi jo dil ke kareeb jada hote he wo ajmsar dimaag se fisal jaate hain.
aapka bht bht sukriya dost
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«Reply #10 on: April 04, 2011, 08:25:50 AM »
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kya baat he nirala ji........

aaj alag mood me dikhai de rahe he......

well jo bhi mood ho apne likha bada hi dilchasp aur umda he........

dil ko baht aachi lagi apki poetry.......keep going this way dear......
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«Reply #11 on: April 04, 2011, 09:33:27 AM »
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nirala mastana ki mastani post......aur padhkar main bhi mastani ho gai....
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
kuch likhe bagair nahin raha gaya

Insaan chaahe zamane me jitna bhi bada ban jaye
Apni takdeer k aage to kabhi na kabhi jhukta hai

Laakh bachna chaahe wo apne haalaton se
Waqt to bura sabka ek baar aakar hi rehta hai

Mat udd hawa me apni manzilon ko paakar kasak
Jo upar udta hai wo hi buri tarah niche girta hai….!!!
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«Reply #12 on: April 04, 2011, 12:42:46 PM »
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bht khoob nirala ji...
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