SAFAR APNE ANDAR KA..............MAMTA BAJPAI

by mamta bajpai on July 25, 2010, 04:46:27 PM
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SAFAR APNE ANDAR KA JO KAR LIYA HOTA
KHUD KO AAINE ME NAZAR KAR LIYA HOTA

MUD MUD KE DEKHANE SE KOI FAAIDA NAHI
APNI YAADON HI SE KINARA KAR LIYA HOTA

IRAADA-E-SAFAR SAATH TO MANZIL KI KYA FIKAR
SAATH NAQSHA-E-NEK RAAH MAGAR KAR LIYA HOTA

JANA KAHAN HAI KOUN SI MANZIL PE HAI MUKAAM
ITANA TO HAASIL ILM TUNE KAR LIYA HOTA

QAWAID KI RAHGUZAR SE PARE RAAH-E-NOU KI OR
KUCH TO TOUFEEQ-E-BAGAVAT KA ZOUQ KAR LIYA HOTA
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«Reply #1 on: July 25, 2010, 04:54:33 PM »
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wah mamta ji.. wah wah wah ...


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«Reply #2 on: July 25, 2010, 05:18:53 PM »
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BAHUT BAHUT SHUKRIYA JASBIRSINGH JI!
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«Reply #3 on: July 25, 2010, 05:47:23 PM »
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Mamta-di mast likha hai........Pehle do sher bahut achhe ban pade hain...... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Dil ko apne tae-tol liya hota
Aksh ko apne nirakh liya hota

Bhul kar bhoot,bhavishya me kadam jo badhaya hota
Manzil kadam choomti,housla jo tune bataayaa hota


Quote from: mamta bajpai on July 25, 2010, 04:46:27 PM
SAFAR APNE ANDAR KA JO KAR LIYA HOTA
KHUD KO AAINE ME NAZAR KAR LIYA HOTA

MUD MUD KE DEKHANE SE KOI FAAIDA NAHI
APNI YAADON HI SE KINARA KAR LIYA HOTA

IRAADA-E-SAFAR SAATH TO MANZIL KI KYA FIKAR
SAATH NAQSHA-E-NEK RAAH MAGAR KAR LIYA HOTA

JANA KAHAN HAI KOUN SI MANZIL PE HAI MUKAAM
ITANA TO HAASIL ILM TUNE KAR LIYA HOTA

QAWAID KI RAHGUZAR SE PARE RAAH-E-NOU KI OR
KUCH TO TOUFEEQ-E-BAGAVAT KA ZOUQ KAR LIYA HOTA




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«Reply #4 on: July 26, 2010, 05:19:19 AM »
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THANKS KOYAL!TUMHARA ANDAZ BHI BAHUT KHOOB HAI!
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«Reply #5 on: July 27, 2010, 04:14:34 AM »
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kuch mushkil laga samjhna ...itni urdu nahin aati humko...
lekin baki jitni samjh me aai wo achchi lagi ..mamta ji...
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«Reply #6 on: July 27, 2010, 05:04:39 AM »
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KASAK JI MAAFI CHAHOONGI AAP MERE KALAAM KA BHARPOOR LUTF NA UTH SAKEEN.AAP KO JIN ALFAZ ME DIQQATEN PESH AA RAHI HO AAP BEJHIJHAK MUJHSE POOCH SAKTI HAIN.
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«Reply #7 on: July 27, 2010, 05:25:08 AM »
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superb words with great meanind, like me new poets can learn me[one from this poem.  regards   hotchand moryani ajmer  09352917770
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«Reply #8 on: July 27, 2010, 06:30:21 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Moryani ji!aap ne mere kalaam ko apna qeemati waqt diya or saraha.aage bhi aap ki nazar-e-inayat ki muntazir........
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«Reply #9 on: July 27, 2010, 08:57:11 AM »
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Bahut bahut Khoob Mamtaji.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #10 on: July 27, 2010, 10:55:21 AM »
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Quote from: mamta bajpai on July 25, 2010, 04:46:27 PM
SAFAR APNE ANDAR KA JO KAR LIYA HOTA
KHUD KO AAINE ME NAZAR KAR LIYA HOTA

MUD MUD KE DEKHANE SE KOI FAAIDA NAHI
APNI YAADON HI SE KINARA KAR LIYA HOTA

IRAADA-E-SAFAR SAATH TO MANZIL KI KYA FIKAR
SAATH NAQSHA-E-NEK RAAH MAGAR KAR LIYA HOTA

JANA KAHAN HAI KOUN SI MANZIL PE HAI MUKAAM
ITANA TO HAASIL ILM TUNE KAR LIYA HOTA

QAWAID KI RAHGUZAR SE PARE RAAH-E-NOU KI OR
KUCH TO TOUFEEQ-E-BAGAVAT KA ZOUQ KAR LIYA HOTA

BAHUT KHOOB MAMTA JI
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«Reply #11 on: July 28, 2010, 05:06:09 AM »
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KHWAISH JI BAHUT BAHUT DHANYAWAAD!APNI NAZAR-E-INAYAT ISI TARAH BANAYE RAKHEN.....
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«Reply #12 on: July 28, 2010, 05:07:39 AM »
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RAJESH JI ISI TARAH HOUSLA AFZAI KARTE RAHEN .BAHUT BAHUT SHUKRIYA.........
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«Reply #13 on: July 28, 2010, 05:45:49 AM »
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Quote from: mamta bajpai on July 25, 2010, 04:46:27 PM
SAFAR APNE ANDAR KA JO KAR LIYA HOTA
KHUD KO AAINE ME NAZAR KAR LIYA HOTA

MUD MUD KE DEKHANE SE KOI FAAIDA NAHI
APNI YAADON HI SE KINARA KAR LIYA HOTA

IRAADA-E-SAFAR SAATH TO MANZIL KI KYA FIKAR
SAATH NAQSHA-E-NEK RAAH MAGAR KAR LIYA HOTA

JANA KAHAN HAI KOUN SI MANZIL PE HAI MUKAAM
ITANA TO HAASIL ILM TUNE KAR LIYA HOTA

QAWAID KI RAHGUZAR SE PARE RAAH-E-NOU KI OR
KUCH TO TOUFEEQ-E-BAGAVAT KA ZOUQ KAR LIYA HOTA


Mamta Saheba aadab ,,


Takhir ke liye mazrath khaw hon ,, Wahhh Kamal ki taqleeq hai apki .. Eak nahi hazarah dad qubool karen .. Umid hai aage bhi issi tarhan Apni nayab taqleeqo.N se bazm ko nawazti rahenge .. Allah apko khush rakhe ..



Dua go


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«Reply #14 on: July 28, 2010, 08:31:09 AM »
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BAHUT BAHUT SHUKRIYA QADEER SAHEB.JAHAN TAK TAKHIR KA SAWAL HAI TO ISI LAFZ PE MUJHE KUCH YAAD AAYA..........
SABRA BAD.A DUSHWAR TALAB
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AAP SE MILI SARAHNA MERI KALAM KO TONIC SA DE JATI HAI.KHAYALON KI PARWAZ BHI BULANDI KO CHOONE LAGTI HAI.ISI TARAH SAATH NIBHANE KI UMMEED HAI AAP SE..........
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