SAMAJH.....(updated)

by riyaz106 on March 20, 2010, 07:15:51 AM
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«Reply #15 on: March 21, 2010, 07:28:08 AM »
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Behad behad shukriya, Adil sahab ke aapko mere ye ashaar pasand aaye. Main aapka tah-e-dil se mashkoor hun.
kyaa baat hai riyaz sahab....bahut khoob
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«Reply #16 on: March 21, 2010, 07:50:12 AM »
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Wah Riyaz bhai aur bhi khoobsurat ho gayi aapke ye kavita,great creation.bahut achi lagi. Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Thumbs UP
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«Reply #17 on: March 21, 2010, 09:36:46 AM »
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WAAH RIYAZ JI WAAH BAHUT ACHHA ,SUNDER LAFZON MEIN PIROYA HAI APNI KALPANAAON KO. icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower Applause Applause Applause Applause
DARWAJE PE JAB LAG JAATE HAIN TAALE.
KAMRE KA SAANS LENA KHIDKIYAAN SAMAJHTI HAIN.
MANZIL KE RAASTE JAB THAKAANE LAGEN
JALDI PAHUNCHA DENA PAGDANDIYAN SAMAJHTI HAIN.
FAT JAATA AASMAN KA SEENA JAB BIJLIYAAN KADAKTI HAIN.
DARD KAHAAN  HOTA HAI YE BADLIYAAN SAMAJHTI HAIN.


SAMAJH
Dardo-gham gulon ke sab, titliyan samajhti hain
Zulfein kaise suljhengi, ungliyan samajhti hain

Majhi ka to maqsad hai, bas pahunchna saahil tak
Lahron ke thapedon ko, kashtiyan samajhti hain

Aql wale to hain hum  ghaur kuchh  nahi karte
Pani kisko kahte hain, machhliyan samajhti hain
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Abbu se to kahne mein, unko dar sa lagta hai
Betiyon ki uljhan ko, ammiyan samajhti hain


Riyaz 'Ashna'
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«Reply #18 on: March 21, 2010, 10:24:36 AM »
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SAMAJH

Dardo-gham gulon ke sab, titliyan samajhti hain
Zulfein kaise suljhengi, ungliyan samajhti hain

Majhi ka to maqsad hai, bas pahunchna saahil tak
Lahron ke thapedon ko, kashtiyan samajhti hain

Aql wale to hain hum  ghaur kuchh  nahi karte
Pani kisko kahte hain, machhliyan samajhti hain
-----
Abbu se to kahne mein, unko dar sa lagta hai
Betiyon ki uljhan ko, ammiyan samajhti hain


Riyaz 'Ashna'
Bahut khoob update kiya Riyaz Sahab..
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #19 on: March 21, 2010, 10:29:16 AM »
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Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Riyaaz ji .. Good work Suresh ji !
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riyaz106
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«Reply #20 on: March 21, 2010, 01:58:35 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya Kameeney ji.
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riyaz106
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«Reply #21 on: March 21, 2010, 02:48:12 PM »
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Bahot bahot SHUKRIYA Pandey ji. Main mashkoor hun aapka.Aapne bhi bahot khoobsurat likha hai
Bahut bahut umda Riyaz Sahab, kya andaze-bayaan hai.."Aql wale to hain hum  ghaur kuchh  nahi karte, Pani kisko kahte hain, machhliyan samajhti hain" ye sher bahut hi achchha laga...
 

Har baat kahi baa-hunar, bharpoor karishmaai,
Andaazo-sukhan adab ki baarikiyan samajhti hain..

Bahut khoob update kiya Riyaz Sahab..
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«Reply #22 on: March 21, 2010, 05:28:48 PM »
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Aapko meri ye creation achhi lagi bahut bahut shukriya Madhu didi.
Wah Riyaz bhai aur bhi khoobsurat ho gayi aapke ye kavita,great creation.bahut achi lagi. Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Thumbs UP
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«Reply #23 on: March 21, 2010, 06:13:19 PM »
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[ahut bahut shukriya Suresh ji. Aapne jo hausla afazaai ki hai uske liye bhi main aapka abhaari hun. Aapne bhi jawaban bahut achhi poem likhi hai.
WAAH RIYAZ JI WAAH BAHUT ACHHA ,SUNDER LAFZON MEIN PIROYA HAI APNI KALPANAAON KO. icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower Applause Applause Applause Applause
DARWAJE PE JAB LAG JAATE HAIN TAALE.
KAMRE KA SAANS LENA KHIDKIYAAN SAMAJHTI HAIN.
MANZIL KE RAASTE JAB THAKAANE LAGEN
JALDI PAHUNCHA DENA PAGDANDIYAN SAMAJHTI HAIN.
FAT JAATA AASMAN KA SEENA JAB BIJLIYAAN KADAKTI HAIN.
DARD KAHAAN  HOTA HAI YE BADLIYAAN SAMAJHTI HAIN.


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«Reply #24 on: March 21, 2010, 06:24:36 PM »
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SAMAJH

Dardo-gham gulon ke sab, titliyan samajhti hain
Zulfein kaise suljhengi, ungliyan samajhti hain

Majhi ka to maqsad hai, bas pahunchna saahil tak
Lahron ke thapedon ko, kashtiyan samajhti hain

Aql wale to hain hum  ghaur kuchh  nahi karte
Pani kisko kahte hain, machhliyan samajhti hain
-----
Abbu se to kahne mein, unko dar sa lagta hai
Betiyon ki uljhan ko, ammiyan samajhti hain


Riyaz 'Ashna'


Hur Sher aapne aap mein ek sampoorn kahaani,ek lajawaab ehsaas.Aap ne jin baarikiyon ka zikr kiya hai woh dil tuk pahuchti hai.Shaandaar likha hai aapne janaab. Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #25 on: March 21, 2010, 09:58:34 PM »
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SAMAJH
Dardo-gham gulon ke sab, titliyan samajhti hain
Zulfein kaise suljhengi, ungliyan samajhti hain

Majhi ka to maqsad hai, bas pahunchna saahil tak
Lahron ke thapedon ko, kashtiyan samajhti hain

Aql wale to hain hum  ghaur kuchh  nahi karte
Pani kisko kahte hain, machhliyan samajhti hain
-----
Abbu se to kahne mein, unko dar sa lagta hai
Betiyon ki uljhan ko, ammiyan samajhti hain


Riyaz 'Ashna'

Wah Wah Riyaz Bhai Kya Kehne
Badi Hi Sadgi Aur Khoobsurti Se
Aapne Bahut Hi Badi Badi Baaten Likhin Hain
Har Ashaar Ek Apne Men Ek Soch Liye Hue Hai
Ek Behatreen Kalaam Aapne Nazar Kiya Hai
Bahut Bahut Hi Badiya Janaab... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Dil Se Nikli Da'd Kabul Farmaaye...!

ALLAH Pak Aapko Khush Rahe...Aeem

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«Reply #26 on: March 22, 2010, 04:39:18 AM »
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Aapka bahut bahut shukria Sophi ji. Karam nawazish
Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Riyaaz ji .. Good work Suresh ji !
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«Reply #27 on: March 22, 2010, 11:05:08 AM »
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Prateek sahab aapka tahe-dil se shukriya ke aapko mere ye ashaar achhe lage aur aapne badi tawajjo se padha. Karam, nawazish, shukriya.

Hur Sher aapne aap mein ek sampoorn kahaani,ek lajawaab ehsaas.Aap ne jin baarikiyon ka zikr kiya hai woh dil tuk pahuchti hai.Shaandaar likha hai aapne janaab. Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #28 on: March 22, 2010, 12:23:53 PM »
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HUM_DUM ji main tahe-dil se aapka shukriya adaa karta hun ke aapne mere ye ashaar padhe pasand kiye aur hausla afazaai ki. Allah aapko bhi bahut khush rakhe.
Wah Wah Riyaz Bhai Kya Kehne
Badi Hi Sadgi Aur Khoobsurti Se
Aapne Bahut Hi Badi Badi Baaten Likhin Hain
Har Ashaar Ek Apne Men Ek Soch Liye Hue Hai
Ek Behatreen Kalaam Aapne Nazar Kiya Hai
Bahut Bahut Hi Badiya Janaab... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Dil Se Nikli Da'd Kabul Farmaaye...!

ALLAH Pak Aapko Khush Rahe...Aeem


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«Reply #29 on: March 22, 2010, 01:48:19 PM »
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SAMAJH

Dardo-gham gulon ke sab, titliyan samajhti hain
Zulfein kaise suljhengi, ungliyan samajhti hain

Majhi ka to maqsad hai, bas pahunchna saahil tak
Lahron ke thapedon ko, kashtiyan samajhti hain

Aql wale to hain hum  ghaur kuchh  nahi karte
Pani kisko kahte hain, machhliyan samajhti hain
-----
Abbu se to kahne mein, unko dar sa lagta hai
Betiyon ki uljhan ko, ammiyan samajhti hain


Riyaz 'Ashna'

Bohot khoobsurat ghazal, Riyaz Ji
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