samandar mein samaaya hota!

by Prateek Mardia on March 15, 2010, 08:21:57 PM
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Duniyaadari ne jo is tarah humko na gale lagaaya hota
Kasam se kehta hu mein chehre pe rung kuch aur hi aaya hota!!


Nadi mein doob jaane ka isliye aksar hota hein malaal
Seep ka moti hu mein samandar mein samaaya hota!!


 Aur Kaun se nayaab kaam kar liye is tarah sharton pe jeete –jeete
 Zidon ki zud jo tatoli hoti to kuch sukoon to paaya hota!!


Kosna kismaton ko maana nishaani buzdilon ki hogi magar
 aman ke chahne waalon to tumne ladna to sikhaaya hota!!


tere shehar ki chaka chondh se bus into si shikaayat hein
mere aangan mein jaltey diye ko aise na bujhaaya hota!!

                                     ---Prateek Mardia
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«Reply #1 on: March 15, 2010, 09:45:54 PM »
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Bahut hi khoob Prateek ji,really heart touching lines.great creation. Thumbs UP Applause Applause Applause Applause Hats off to you!
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«Reply #2 on: March 16, 2010, 07:42:45 AM »
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Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you!

Bahut Bahut Khoob Prateekji..Kya Kahoon Iss Lekhni Par,bahut gehre Jazbaat  Liye,Har lafz Gehrai mein Jaisa Dooba Hua.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bahut Ache Prateekji Thumbs UP
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«Reply #3 on: March 16, 2010, 08:26:21 AM »
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Prateekji,Kuch likhne Ki Gusaatki kar raha Hoon..

Duniyadaari Ne Iss Tarah Na Usse Gale lagaya Hota
Aaj Sochta Hoon,Kaash Woh bhi Kabhi Khul Ke Muskuraya Hota...

Aaj Daud Raha Hai Woh Bahut Tez Raftaar mein
Kabhi To usne bhi Araam farmaya hota..

Ab Dil mein malaal paalne se kya Haasil!!!!
Jab Waqt tha,Tab Apne Aapko inn Baaton Se Uljhaya Hota....

Kostha raha Main Apni Hi Taqdeer Ko,
Sochta Hoon, Roothi hui meri Taqdeer Ko aakhir kisi ne to Manaya Hota..

Main Woh Sipahi Hoon Jisne Apni Dhaal Khud Hi Dushmano ke haath de di
Par Phir Bhi Log kehte hai ke
"Khwiash Kabhi To, Apna Sar Bhi Jhuakaya Hota"..

"Khwaish" Nadaan hai, Nahi samaj paayega Duniyadaari Kya Hai??
Be-fikr Ho kar,Kabhi Khud Ko Inn Jhooti Baaton Se Lubhaaya Hota...

Phir Bhi Shukar Hai!! Mujhe Iss Duniya ke rasmo-riwaazo ko Nibhaana Naa Aaya..
Varna Gile-Shikwe,Shikayaton mein
 Apni Tamam Umar Ko Humne Yuhi Bitaya Hota....
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«Reply #4 on: March 16, 2010, 09:56:06 AM »
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Wah Khwaish ji aapne bi kya khoob likha,abi abi main api taqdeer ko kosh kar aayi,aur aapke ye kavita padne ko mila.dil ko chu gayee aapke lines. Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause icon_thumleft great creation
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«Reply #5 on: March 16, 2010, 02:12:35 PM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on March 16, 2010, 09:56:06 AM
Wah Khwaish ji aapne bi kya khoob likha,abi abi main api taqdeer ko kosh kar aayi,aur aapke ye kavita padne ko mila.dil ko chu gayee aapke lines. Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause icon_thumleft great creation

Thankyou Soooooooooooooooo Much Dear madhu..

Thanks For Always Reading And Appreciating!!!! Usual Smile
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«Reply #6 on: March 16, 2010, 02:42:29 PM »
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WAH KHWAISHJI WAAH!
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
KHWAISH JI ,EK GUSTAAKHI HUM BHI KAR HI DETE HAIN.

GHAM HI SIKHAATE HAIN KHUSHIYON KA MATLAB.
NA MILTE GHAM TO KHUSHIYON KA MATLAB SAMAJH NA AAYA HOTA.

SAATH SAATH HAIN TO SHIKWE GILON SE KAT JAATA HAI WAQT.
VERNA YE ZINDAGI KE SAFAR MEIN AKELE HI NIBHAYA HOTA.

ISS ROZ ROZ KE FASAADON MEIN KOI ITNAA KAREEB AA JATA HAI.
ROOH SE ROOH KA MILAN KA MAZAA MUJHKO NA AAYA HOTA.

Quote from: khwaish on March 16, 2010, 08:26:21 AM
Prateekji,Kuch likhne Ki Gusaatki kar raha Hoon..

Duniyadaari Ne Iss Tarah Na Usse Gale lagaya Hota
Aaj Sochta Hoon,Kaash Woh bhi Kabhi Khul Ke Muskuraya Hota...

Aaj Daud Raha Hai Woh Bahut Tez Raftaar mein
Kabhi To usne bhi Araam farmaya hota..

Ab Dil mein malaal paalne se kya Haasil!!!!
Jab Waqt tha,Tab Apne Aapko inn Baaton Se Uljhaya Hota....

Kostha raha Main Apni Hi Taqdeer Ko,
Sochta Hoon, Roothi hui meri Taqdeer Ko aakhir kisi ne to Manaya Hota..

Main Woh Sipahi Hoon Jisne Apni Dhaal Khud Hi Dushmano ke haath de di
Par Phir Bhi Log kehte hai ke
"Khwiash Kabhi To, Apna Sar Bhi Jhuakaya Hota"..

"Khwaish" Nadaan hai, Nahi samaj paayega Duniyadaari Kya Hai??
Be-fikr Ho kar,Kabhi Khud Ko Inn Jhooti Baaton Se Lubhaaya Hota...

Phir Bhi Shukar Hai!! Mujhe Iss Duniya ke rasmo-riwaazo ko Nibhaana Naa Aaya..
Varna Gile-Shikwe,Shikayaton mein
 Apni Tamam Umar Ko Humne Yuhi Bitaya Hota....
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«Reply #7 on: March 16, 2010, 06:03:44 PM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on March 15, 2010, 09:45:54 PM
Bahut hi khoob Prateek ji,really heart touching lines.great creation. Thumbs UP Applause Applause Applause Applause Hats off to you!

aapki saraahna ka dil se shukrguzaar hu madhu ji.Aabhar.
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«Reply #8 on: March 16, 2010, 06:07:26 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on March 16, 2010, 07:42:45 AM
Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you!

Bahut Bahut Khoob Prateekji..Kya Kahoon Iss Lekhni Par,bahut gehre Jazbaat  Liye,Har lafz Gehrai mein Jaisa Dooba Hua.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bahut Ache Prateekji Thumbs UP



khwaish bhai, aapki thupthahat mil jaati hain to saadharan panktiyaan bhee khud ko kavita samajhne lagti hein.Aapne unmukt hriday se jo manobal badhaaya hai uskey liye aapka atyant shukrguzaar hu. dhnyawaad.
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«Reply #9 on: March 16, 2010, 06:18:11 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on March 16, 2010, 08:26:21 AM
Prateekji,Kuch likhne Ki Gusaatki kar raha Hoon..

Duniyadaari Ne Iss Tarah Na Usse Gale lagaya Hota
Aaj Sochta Hoon,Kaash Woh bhi Kabhi Khul Ke Muskuraya Hota...

Aaj Daud Raha Hai Woh Bahut Tez Raftaar mein
Kabhi To usne bhi Araam farmaya hota..

Ab Dil mein malaal paalne se kya Haasil!!!!
Jab Waqt tha,Tab Apne Aapko inn Baaton Se Uljhaya Hota....

Kostha raha Main Apni Hi Taqdeer Ko,
Sochta Hoon, Roothi hui meri Taqdeer Ko aakhir kisi ne to Manaya Hota..

Main Woh Sipahi Hoon Jisne Apni Dhaal Khud Hi Dushmano ke haath de di
Par Phir Bhi Log kehte hai ke
"Khwiash Kabhi To, Apna Sar Bhi Jhuakaya Hota"..

"Khwaish" Nadaan hai, Nahi samaj paayega Duniyadaari Kya Hai??
Be-fikr Ho kar,Kabhi Khud Ko Inn Jhooti Baaton Se Lubhaaya Hota...

Phir Bhi Shukar Hai!! Mujhe Iss Duniya ke rasmo-riwaazo ko Nibhaana Naa Aaya..
Varna Gile-Shikwe,Shikayaton mein
 Apni Tamam Umar Ko Humne Yuhi Bitaya Hota....



 Applause Applause Applause

Khwaish bhai, aapki rachna se is panne ka aakarshan budh gaya hai. aapki aashawaadi soch aur sakaratmak ravayya sada hi aapki kavitaayon mein jhalakta hai. aap nirantar accha likhtey rahe aur sub ko aanandit karte rahe yahi kaamna hai.
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«Reply #10 on: March 16, 2010, 06:19:02 PM »
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Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on March 16, 2010, 02:42:29 PM
WAH KHWAISHJI WAAH!
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
KHWAISH JI ,EK GUSTAAKHI HUM BHI KAR HI DETE HAIN.

GHAM HI SIKHAATE HAIN KHUSHIYON KA MATLAB.
NA MILTE GHAM TO KHUSHIYON KA MATLAB SAMAJH NA AAYA HOTA.

SAATH SAATH HAIN TO SHIKWE GILON SE KAT JAATA HAI WAQT.
VERNA YE ZINDAGI KE SAFAR MEIN AKELE HI NIBHAYA HOTA.

ISS ROZ ROZ KE FASAADON MEIN KOI ITNAA KAREEB AA JATA HAI.
ROOH SE ROOH KA MILAN KA MAZAA MUJHKO NA AAYA HOTA.


bahut khoob suresh jee.
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«Reply #11 on: March 16, 2010, 07:28:18 PM »
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Quote from: Prateek Mardia on March 15, 2010, 08:21:57 PM
Duniyaadari ne jo is tarah humko na gale lagaaya hota
Kasam se kehta hu mein chehre pe rung kuch aur hi aaya hota!!


Nadi mein doob jaane ka isliye aksar hota hein malaal
Seep ka moti hu mein samandar mein samaaya hota!!


 Aur Kaun se nayaab kaam kar liye is tarah sharton pe jeete –jeete
 Zidon ki zud jo tatoli hoti to kuch sukoon to paaya hota!!


Kosna kismaton ko maana nishaani buzdilon ki hogi magar
 aman ke chahne waalon to tumne ladna to sikhaaya hota!!


tere shehar ki chaka chondh se bus into si shikaayat hein
mere aangan mein jaltey diye ko aise na bujhaaya hota!!

                                     ---Prateek Mardia

Achchhi rachna hai Prateek bhai..keep on writing....

                  Kar di tamam umr jab bejaan tumhare saath,
                  Ab khaar si lage hai tumko meri har baat,
                  Kismat badi azeeb hai insaan ki 'Adab'
                  Aaye to mutthi band thi jayenge khali haath..
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«Reply #12 on: March 16, 2010, 07:30:53 PM »
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Quote from: Prateek Mardia on March 15, 2010, 08:21:57 PM
Duniyaadari ne jo is tarah humko na gale lagaaya hota
Kasam se kehta hu mein chehre pe rung kuch aur hi aaya hota!!


Nadi mein doob jaane ka isliye aksar hota hein malaal
Seep ka moti hu mein samandar mein samaaya hota!!


 Aur Kaun se nayaab kaam kar liye is tarah sharton pe jeete –jeete
 Zidon ki zud jo tatoli hoti to kuch sukoon to paaya hota!!


Kosna kismaton ko maana nishaani buzdilon ki hogi magar
 aman ke chahne waalon to tumne ladna to sikhaaya hota!!


tere shehar ki chaka chondh se bus into si shikaayat hein
mere aangan mein jaltey diye ko aise na bujhaaya hota!!

                                     ---Prateek Mardia





Bahub Prateek Ji.... Applause
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«Reply #13 on: March 17, 2010, 02:35:33 PM »
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Prateek Ji kya hi shandaar aur khoobsurat poem likhi hai aapne. Jab ek bar padhi to phir kain baar padhi. Naye khayal nai soch, bahut purkashish. Bas itna hi kahta hun - Wah Kya Baat Hai.
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«Reply #14 on: March 18, 2010, 01:39:51 PM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on March 16, 2010, 09:56:06 AM
Wah Khwaish ji aapne bi kya khoob likha,abi abi main api taqdeer ko kosh kar aayi,aur aapke ye kavita padne ko mila.dil ko chu gayee aapke lines. Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause icon_thumleft great creation

Thankyou Soooooooo Much Dear Madhu.. Usual Smile
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