samandar mein samaaya hota!

by Prateek Mardia on March 15, 2010, 08:21:57 PM
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«Reply #15 on: March 18, 2010, 01:42:12 PM »
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Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on March 16, 2010, 02:42:29 PM
WAH KHWAISHJI WAAH!
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KHWAISH JI ,EK GUSTAAKHI HUM BHI KAR HI DETE HAIN.

GHAM HI SIKHAATE HAIN KHUSHIYON KA MATLAB.
NA MILTE GHAM TO KHUSHIYON KA MATLAB SAMAJH NA AAYA HOTA.

SAATH SAATH HAIN TO SHIKWE GILON SE KAT JAATA HAI WAQT.
VERNA YE ZINDAGI KE SAFAR MEIN AKELE HI NIBHAYA HOTA.

ISS ROZ ROZ KE FASAADON MEIN KOI ITNAA KAREEB AA JATA HAI.
ROOH SE ROOH KA MILAN KA MAZAA MUJHKO NA AAYA HOTA.


Bahut bahut Khoob Sureshji..

Aapne Bhi Bahut ACha Likha Hai Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Aur Teh Dil Se Shukriya Aapne Jo humara Likha Bhu Pasand Kiya.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #16 on: March 18, 2010, 01:45:56 PM »
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Quote from: Prateek Mardia on March 16, 2010, 06:18:11 PM
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Khwaish bhai, aapki rachna se is panne ka aakarshan budh gaya hai. aapki aashawaadi soch aur sakaratmak ravayya sada hi aapki kavitaayon mein jhalakta hai. aap nirantar accha likhtey rahe aur sub ko aanandit karte rahe yahi kaamna hai.

Prateekji, Aapne Likha Hi Itna Acha Hai ke Yahan Par Bina Kuch likhe,Raha Na Gaya..Aapne Humesha Meri Lekhni Ki Prashanta Ki Hai..Aapka Bahut bahut Dhanyawaad..Umeed Karta Hoon Aap Yuhi Humesha Saath dete rahenge.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #17 on: March 18, 2010, 01:48:05 PM »
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Quote from: drpandey on March 16, 2010, 07:28:18 PM
Achchhi rachna hai Prateek bhai..keep on writing....

                  Kar di tamam umr jab bejaan tumhare saath,
                  Ab khaar si lage hai tumko meri har baat,
                  Kismat badi azeeb hai insaan ki 'Adab'
                  Aaye to mutthi band thi jayenge khali haath..



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«Reply #18 on: March 18, 2010, 01:51:25 PM »
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"Duniyadari Asli To Duniyavi Nahi Hone Par Chipi Hai
Duniya Ke Baad To Duniyadari ko koi Nahi jaanta"

Bahut Bahut Khoob Kaashji..Khaas Kar Yeh Sher Bahut Hi Khoobsurat Hai Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #19 on: March 18, 2010, 02:23:06 PM »
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Bahut acha likha hai Prateek ji .Keep it up
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«Reply #20 on: March 18, 2010, 05:33:16 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on March 18, 2010, 01:48:05 PM
Bahut bahut Khoob Dr pandey ji Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Shukriya Khwaish ji........ Thankyou !
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«Reply #21 on: March 20, 2010, 07:55:47 PM »
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Quote from: Prateek Mardia on March 15, 2010, 08:21:57 PM
Duniyaadari ne jo is tarah humko na gale lagaaya hota
Kasam se kehta hu mein chehre pe rung kuch aur hi aaya hota!!


Nadi mein doob jaane ka isliye aksar hota hein malaal
Seep ka moti hu mein samandar mein samaaya hota!!


 Aur Kaun se nayaab kaam kar liye is tarah sharton pe jeete –jeete
 Zidon ki zud jo tatoli hoti to kuch sukoon to paaya hota!!


Kosna kismaton ko maana nishaani buzdilon ki hogi magar
 aman ke chahne waalon to tumne ladna to sikhaaya hota!!


tere shehar ki chaka chondh se bus into si shikaayat hein
mere aangan mein jaltey diye ko aise na bujhaaya hota!!

                                     ---Prateek Mardia





Bahut Khoob Prateek Ji
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«Reply #22 on: April 06, 2010, 04:20:46 PM »
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Quote from: Prateek Mardia on March 15, 2010, 08:21:57 PM
Duniyaadari ne jo is tarah humko na gale lagaaya hota
Kasam se kehta hu mein chehre pe rung kuch aur hi aaya hota!!


Nadi mein doob jaane ka isliye aksar hota hein malaal
Seep ka moti hu mein samandar mein samaaya hota!!


 Aur Kaun se nayaab kaam kar liye is tarah sharton pe jeete –jeete
 Zidon ki zud jo tatoli hoti to kuch sukoon to paaya hota!!


Kosna kismaton ko maana nishaani buzdilon ki hogi magar
 aman ke chahne waalon to tumne ladna to sikhaaya hota!!


tere shehar ki chaka chondh se bus into si shikaayat hein
mere aangan mein jaltey diye ko aise na bujhaaya hota!!

                                     ---Prateek Mardia





prateek ji,
apne-aap par ye gussa, ye kasmasaht, aur teekhe tane bhi (third sher).bhai wah, is vishay par itni sunder kavita.....ye na jaane kitne dilon ki kahani hai....
dheron daad aapko is nayab krti ke liye
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