**Sambhal jaa nadan** by Rahim

by dead heart on March 18, 2010, 12:30:08 PM
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Hum main se kayi aise hai jinhe bahaut guroor hai khud par ke woh yeh hai aur woh hai...Ek baar kabrastan jake dekho...Kya amir kya gareeb, kya gora kya kala, kya sehadmand kya bimar...pehchan nahin sakoge...khali naam banke rehjaoge aur kahin kahin toh sirf miti...

Sirf chand lines likh raha hoon mager ehsaas main doobi aur ek sandesh ponchati...

Na guroor kar apne mukam par itna ae nadan,
Kayi aye hai aur kayi chale gaye,
Aj yaad bankar ya naam bankar rehgaye,
Kya amir kya gareeb; sab miti banke rehgaye,
Abhi bhi waqt hai; zameen pe jeena seekhle,
Asmaan se girne main dard bahaut hota hai,
Khuda ne per diye hai; par nahin; socha hai kyuun??
Take tu chal sake; urrne ke liye nahin banaya gaya,
Ab bhi waqt hai; sambhal jaa,
Zindagi ki kadr karna seekhle,
Waqt rehte shukar man na seekhle,
Logon ki izzat karna seekhle,
Kahin aisa na ho ke kal teri mayyat main bhi tu tanha pae khud ko,
Ae nadan; ibadat karne ke liye tu banaya gaya,
Wohi kar; paisa sab kuch nahin hai,
Sambhal jaa,
Kal tujhe bhi miti bankar lautna hai,
Sambhal jaa nadan; sambhal jaa...

~Rahim~

Shayad kuch zyada likh gaya..Lavz behte chale gaye...Koshish karunga aur likhoun iss par...Koi technical poem nahin likhi maine...Bas lavzon ko baha dia hai...Kuch bura laga ho toh bada dil rakh, Rahim ko maaf kijiyega...Narazgi ka boj, main nahin utha paunga!!!





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«Reply #1 on: March 18, 2010, 01:37:53 PM »
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Bahut bahut Khoob Rahim!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Aur kuch Galat nahi kaha Apane Rahim,Yeh Hi Sach hai Aur Sach Ko lafzon mein Utaarna Kabhi Galat Nhai Hota..
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«Reply #2 on: March 18, 2010, 05:26:24 PM »
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Shukriya Khwahish jee...Aj kal dunia ke halat aise hai aur logon ko mizaj aisa hai ke sach hi nahin sun pate...
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«Reply #3 on: March 18, 2010, 05:37:18 PM »
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rahim ji aaj to aapne ek bahut hi achha farmaan apni kavita se diya hai.
bahut khoob  Applause Applause Applause Applause
kya kahen kehne ko bahut kuch hai.
sawal uthate hain mann mein lakhon kisliye.
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«Reply #4 on: March 19, 2010, 12:17:17 PM »
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Shukriya jee..
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«Reply #5 on: March 19, 2010, 01:39:44 PM »
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Bohot Khoob Rahim, achcha likha hai.....
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«Reply #6 on: March 19, 2010, 06:50:38 PM »
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good rahim ji Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: March 20, 2010, 11:49:06 AM »
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Shukriya Talat di aur Kameeney jee
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«Reply #8 on: March 21, 2010, 08:23:49 AM »
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 :icon_salut:Wah Rahim bhai aapne toh mere dil ke baat likh diya.bahut khoob ,duniya mein paisa sab kuch nahi hai.excellent work. Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Thumbs UP
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«Reply #9 on: March 22, 2010, 07:37:59 PM »
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Shukriya Shukriya Madhu di!!!
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«Reply #10 on: March 23, 2010, 10:12:08 AM »
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Shukriya Shihab bhaijan...Bahaut khoob share kiya hai apne bhi...
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