~*~ Samjhate dekha hai ~*~ by Rahim:Miscellaneous Shayri

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1st Jan aur 2nd Jan, main ek trip par gaya tha village main..
Chote chote bachon ko bicycle chalate dekha jinn main woh litres pani le jaa rahe the aur kuch toh haathon main utha kar..
Issi soch par yeh nazm likh raha hoon..

Tv aur computer toh dhoor unke paas ghar bhi nahin hai,
Aisi zindagi jeete maine kuch masoom bachon ko dekha hai..

Hum table par se plate tak nahin rakhte kitchen main,
Milon tak litres pani uthate maine8-saalan haathon ko dekha hai..

Hume koi cheez na mile toh shikayat karne lagte hai Khuda se,
Bhuke-pet sote waqt logon ko maine shukr karte dekha hai..

Lakh misalein saja sakta hoon apni iss nazm main mager,
Ek sach aj dil kehgaya ‘Khamosh’ kay jo amal nahin kar pate,
Tere jaise wohi bewakufon ko dusron ko samjhate dekha hai..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~


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Re: ~*~ Samjhate dekha hai ~*~ by Rahim

«Reply #1 on: January 03, 2011, 10:48:05 AM »

Bahut khoob rahiim bahut acha likhaa hai khaasa mujhe tumhari last teen lines pasand aayi...


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Re: ~*~ Samjhate dekha hai ~*~ by Rahim

«Reply #2 on: January 03, 2011, 12:07:56 PM »

Very touching...Rahim-bhai.... Applause

Quote from: -Rahim- on January 03, 2011, 08:56:54 AM

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~


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dead heart

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Re: ~*~ Samjhate dekha hai ~*~ by Rahim

«Reply #3 on: January 03, 2011, 12:19:16 PM »

Shukriya Geet di aur Koyal di..
Khush rahiye.!


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Re: ~*~ Samjhate dekha hai ~*~ by Rahim

«Reply #4 on: January 03, 2011, 12:27:11 PM »

nice rahim ji dil ko chhu liya aapne...sach hai ye baate jo aapne likhi hai...


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Re: ~*~ Samjhate dekha hai ~*~ by Rahim

«Reply #5 on: January 03, 2011, 01:03:59 PM »

Shukriya Yash jee..!
Khush rahiye


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Re: ~*~ Samjhate dekha hai ~*~ by Rahim

«Reply #6 on: January 03, 2011, 03:28:34 PM »

hey dost---saddy sa feel ho gaya mujhe .
ye baate mere khud ki dekhi hui aur guzari hui hai issliye mai kuch alg sa feel kr gaya.
wo cycle me paani laaana or bhuke pet sona.
aankhon ke saamne se ek sach ko fir se taaza kar gaye bhai.
***
unki zindagi bhi aye dost
kguda ki hi nayamat hai
gar honge wo sachhe karmath
ugte suraj sa wo bhi chamak jayenge ek din
***
behad touchy peshkash Rahim miya.
khus rahiye


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Re: ~*~ Samjhate dekha hai ~*~ by Rahim

«Reply #7 on: January 03, 2011, 07:19:55 PM »

Ohhh killbill jee apka shukriya..!
Khush rahiye..
Nice lines Applause


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Rishi Agarwal

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Re: ~*~ Samjhate dekha hai ~*~ by Rahim

«Reply #8 on: January 04, 2011, 08:20:37 AM »

Bahut Sahi Kaha Aapne Rahim JI
Aapki Her Ek Post Mein Kuch Na Kuch Sikhne Ko Milta Hai Ji
U Hi Likhte Rahiye Applause


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Re: ~*~ Samjhate dekha hai ~*~ by Rahim

«Reply #9 on: January 04, 2011, 10:25:26 AM »

Shukriya Rishi jee..
Apka shukriya kay ap waqt nikalte hai meri
nazmon kay liye..
Khush rahiye..!


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Re: ~*~ Samjhate dekha hai ~*~ by Rahim

«Reply #10 on: January 04, 2011, 10:37:14 AM »

Shukriya Kaash jee..!
Khush rahiye..!


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