samjhho.............A.B

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                                  banaa  pal   mein   ek  afsanaa   buss youn   samjhho...,
                                  mili  nazrein  aur  huaa  fasaanaa buss  youn samjhho...,

                                  hudd-e-junoon  paar  ho   jaaye  to  yehi  hotaa  hai...,
                                  saraab -e-sehraa mein  huaa diwanaa buss youn samjhho...,

                                  hai  paisaa   per  kaam   naa   aaye  kisi  ke  hisse...,
                                  majboori  ye  ghurbati kaa  kamanaa bus  youn samjhho...,

                                  tujh  si  chaahat  tujh  si  adaawat ab naseeb kahaan...,
                                  hai  khaali-khaali  saa  zamanaa  bus  younn  samjhho...,

                                  raaste  bhi  manzil  bhi  saath   chhorr  chale  hain...,
                                  ek  teri  yaad  hi  rahi  thhikanaa  bus youn samjhho...,

                                  huaa  be-dakhal  bechain tere shahr se aur hai zindaa...,
                                  hawaa  kaa  tere ghar se anaa -janaa bus youn samjhho...,
                                 
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«Reply #1 on: April 18, 2016, 01:42:31 AM »
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bahut hee khoobsurat qalaam hai Adil Sahib, dheron dherooonnnnn daaaaaaaaaddddddddddddddd!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #2 on: April 18, 2016, 04:52:03 AM »
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  banaa  pal   mein   ek  afsanaa   buss youn   samjhho...,
   mili  nazrein  aur  huaa  fasaanaa buss  youn samjhho...,

waah kyaa baat hai ek rau ke saath daad
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«Reply #3 on: April 18, 2016, 05:35:48 AM »
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«Reply #4 on: April 18, 2016, 07:00:53 AM »
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«Reply #5 on: April 18, 2016, 02:05:14 PM »
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Very very nice adilji......khubsurat
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«Reply #6 on: April 19, 2016, 11:21:11 AM »
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waaah wwaaaaah dheron daad adil sir....kya likha hai apne




                                  banaa  pal   mein   ek  afsanaa   buss youn   samjhho...,
                                  mili  nazrein  aur  huaa  fasaanaa buss  youn samjhho...,

                                  hudd-e-junoon  paar  ho   jaaye  to  yehi  hotaa  hai...,
                                  saraab -e-sehraa mein  huaa diwanaa buss youn samjhho...,

                                  hai  paisaa   per  kaam   naa   aaye  kisi  ke  hisse...,
                                  majboori  ye  ghurbati kaa  kamanaa bus  youn samjhho...,

                                  tujh  si  chaahat  tujh  si  adaawat ab naseeb kahaan...,
                                  hai  khaali-khaali  saa  zamanaa  bus  younn  samjhho...,

                                  raaste  bhi  manzil  bhi  saath   chhorr  chale  hain...,
                                  ek  teri  yaad  hi  rahi  thhikanaa  bus youn samjhho...,

                                  huaa  be-dakhal  bechain tere shahr se aur hai zindaa...,
                                  hawaa  kaa  tere ghar se anaa -janaa bus youn samjhho...,
                                 

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«Reply #7 on: April 26, 2016, 10:11:37 AM »
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bahut hee khoobsurat qalaam hai Adil Sahib, dheron dherooonnnnn daaaaaaaaaddddddddddddddd!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #8 on: April 26, 2016, 11:51:53 AM »
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bahut khob Rau kubool karein Adil ji
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«Reply #9 on: April 30, 2016, 09:33:29 AM »
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  banaa  pal   mein   ek  afsanaa   buss youn   samjhho...,
   mili  nazrein  aur  huaa  fasaanaa buss  youn samjhho...,

waah kyaa baat hai ek rau ke saath daad



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«Reply #10 on: April 30, 2016, 10:13:10 AM »
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                                  banaa  pal   mein   ek  afsanaa   buss youn   samjhho...,
                                  mili  nazrein  aur  huaa  fasaanaa buss  youn samjhho...,

                                  hudd-e-junoon  paar  ho   jaaye  to  yehi  hotaa  hai...,
                                  saraab -e-sehraa mein  huaa diwanaa buss youn samjhho...,

                                  hai  paisaa   per  kaam   naa   aaye  kisi  ke  hisse...,
                                  majboori  ye  ghurbati kaa  kamanaa bus  youn samjhho...,

                                  tujh  si  chaahat  tujh  si  adaawat ab naseeb kahaan...,
                                  hai  khaali-khaali  saa  zamanaa  bus  younn  samjhho...,

                                  raaste  bhi  manzil  bhi  saath   chhorr  chale  hain...,
                                  ek  teri  yaad  hi  rahi  thhikanaa  bus youn samjhho...,

                                  huaa  be-dakhal  bechain tere shahr se aur hai zindaa...,
                                  hawaa  kaa  tere ghar se anaa -janaa bus youn samjhho...,
                                  


Adil sahib..
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kya kamaal ki post hai ustaad waah waah waah

dili mubarakbad ar dheron daad kubul Karen.
yun hi apni poetry se bazm ko gulzaar krte rahen
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