sannataa nahi tha !!!

by sarfira on March 07, 2012, 08:38:41 AM

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dard se mera naataa nahi tha
bin uske magar koi apnaataa nahi tha---

thi raushni ki kamee pehle bhi
andheron me magar itna sannataa nahi tha---

tadapp te the pehle bhi tootkar sehra me
palkon pe aansoo magar chhalakk aataa nahi tha---

na-ummeed the meri chahton ke silsiley
chehre pe magar yun hataashaa nahi tha---

aati thi aawaze sabhi dishaon se pehle bhi sarfire
woh bhi kehne lage ab aawaara tha magar deewaana nahi tha---


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Re: sannataa nahi tha !!!

«Reply #1 on: March 07, 2012, 08:49:38 AM »

Quote from: sarfira on March 07, 2012, 08:38:41 AM

Waah Waah Bahut Khooooob S.f Ji..

Bahut Hi Ache Aur gehre Ashaar Kahe Hai Aapne..


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Re: sannataa nahi tha !!!

«Reply #2 on: March 07, 2012, 08:54:21 AM »

Quote from: sarfira on March 07, 2012, 08:38:41 AM

dard se mera naataa nahi tha
bin uske magar koi apnaataa nahi tha---

thi raushni ki kamee pehle bhi
andheron me magar itna sannataa nahi tha---

tadapp te the pehle bhi tootkar sehra me
palkon pe aansoo magar chhalakk aataa nahi tha---

na-ummeed the meri chahton ke silsiley
chehra magar mera rooa.nsa nahi tha---

aati thi aawaze sabhi dishaon se pehle bhi sarfire
woh bhi kehne lage ab aawaara tha magar deewaana nahi tha---

achchcha hai Applause


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Re: sannataa nahi tha !!!

«Reply #3 on: March 07, 2012, 09:00:11 AM »

Bahut khoob magar shabd "HATASHAA" feminine hai aur aapne use masculine use kiyaa hai


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Re: sannataa nahi tha !!!

«Reply #4 on: March 07, 2012, 09:04:42 AM »

Bahut khoob Sarfira ji
Holi pe sab has rahe hai aur..
maje lijiye.. sabko laal peela kar dijiye..


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Re: sannataa nahi tha !!!

«Reply #5 on: March 07, 2012, 09:28:36 AM »

janta hoon Saini sahab
aur wahi line mujhe pasand nhi--
bas mai aise hi toota foota likhta hun--

mere shabdon ko nhi meri Bhaonawon ko smjhiye tongue3

Quote from: sksaini4 on March 07, 2012, 09:00:11 AM

Bahut khoob magar shabd "HATASHAA" feminine hai aur aapne use masculine use kiyaa hai


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Re: sannataa nahi tha !!!

«Reply #6 on: March 07, 2012, 10:02:38 AM »

Aadaab Bro...

Waah WaaH waaH janab... kia kahne badi hi
khoob kalaam kahi hai... Dard ke saagar meiN
gote laagati aapki yeH khoobsurat kalaam behad
achchi lagi hume..

Par Bro yeH Sarfiraa ka shayad sach meiN hi sar-
phir gaya hai.. jo aisi dukhi aatma post ka
aa aghaaz kar diyaa janab...

Kafi umdaa khayaal aur behad achchi bayaani rahi
Humari dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye..

Likhate rahiye... Aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez..