SAR JHUKA LIYA HOTA..........

by khwaish on October 20, 2007, 06:09:05 PM
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HAR INAAM ZINDAGI MEIN PAA LIYA HOTA
GAR THODA SA SAR JHUKA LIYA HOTA..

YEH ANDHERE KAHAN BAS PAATE MERE AASHIYANE MEIN
 AGAR GHAR MERE BHI  DIYA HOTA..

MAIN JAANTA HOON,JO SAB KO ACHI LAGE
WOHI BAAT KEHNA  ZAROORI  HAI
KAASH MAN KI BAAT MAN MEIN HI RAKHAR
SAB SE SACH CHUPA LIYA HOTA..

LOG CHAAHTE THE MUJHSE,KE  MAIN YEH KAHOON...
"YEH MEHFIL BAHUT HI SUHAANI HAI"
"KHWAISH" KYA JAATA GAR JHOOTI MUSKAAN
HI CHEHRE PE LA LIYA HOTA..

SUNA HAI  MAUT KE BAAD FARISHTE BI LENE AATE HAI
SHART SIRF ITNI HAI,INSAAN BAN KAR AGAR JIYA HOTA..

WAQT,HALAAT AUR KISMAT APNE HAATH NAHI "KHWAISH"
PAR SUNA HAI KHUDA KI IBAADAT MEIN BAHUT  DUM HAI,
KAASH KHUDA KO SAHI MAAYNE MEIN APNA BANA LIYA HOTA..

HAR INAAM  ZINDAGI MEIN PAA LIYA HOTA
GAR THODA SA SAR JHUKA LIYA HOTA..
 
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«Reply #1 on: October 20, 2007, 08:12:02 PM »
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BOhat acha likha ap ny....waqai ager sir ko thora jhuka liya jay to zindagi sy bohat kuch milta ha..
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«Reply #2 on: October 22, 2007, 11:57:37 AM »
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Kya baat hai!!!bahut khoob likha hai...zindagi ki sachai se bhari hui kavita hai..yeh line to bahut hi khoob likhi hai
"suna hai maut ke baad farishte bhi lene aate hai
 shart sirf itni hai,insaan ban kar jiya hota". =D>  =D>  =D>  =D>  =D>

sirf insaan ban kar jina hi to muskil hai khwaish sad5
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«Reply #3 on: October 22, 2007, 04:46:12 PM »
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BAHUT BAHUT SHUKRIYA AANKHAIN & ISHPREET..
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«Reply #4 on: October 23, 2007, 02:03:22 PM »
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wah khwaish ji kaya baat hai... bahoot khoob!!! bahoot hi simple words main bahoot gahari suchai likhi hai apne!!! Good Creation!!
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«Reply #5 on: October 23, 2007, 02:07:19 PM »
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kya bat hai!! tusi to chha gaye khwaishji...
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«Reply #6 on: October 23, 2007, 07:22:39 PM »
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BAHUT BAHUT SHUKRIYA POOJA..KHUSHI HUI  YEH PADHKAR,  KE AAPKO HAMARA LIKHA PASAND AAYA  Usual Smile
  THANX A LOT NIRAJ.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #7 on: October 24, 2007, 12:09:31 AM »
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Bahut khoob Khwaish ji... Usual Smile
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«Reply #8 on: October 24, 2007, 05:50:07 AM »
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Khwaish

very good creation by you =D>

baar baar padhi jaati hai =D>

Keep going :arrow:
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«Reply #9 on: October 26, 2007, 03:16:50 PM »
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Beautiful one khwaish.you really feel it like reading it again & again..
 =D>  =D>  =D> too good
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«Reply #10 on: October 26, 2007, 06:35:12 PM »
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BAHUT BAHUT SHUKRIYA ROJA...RAJBIR...SHONA
THANX A LOT FOR APPRECIATING Usual Smile
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«Reply #11 on: October 27, 2007, 11:41:52 AM »
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dil ko chooti he aapki poem...


@zindagi aur halaat se haarkr marne ki fariyaad kr bete hai....
  na chaha kisi ne par hum sb par yeh saanse nisaar kr bete hai
  hui kubool wo fariyaad,..
  aur maut k safar mai ab farishte ..sath lene aaye hai...
  par fir khuda se rehm ki beekh chahiye
  jeene de is pataal me....hum maut k farishto se bhi pyaar kr bete hai
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«Reply #12 on: October 29, 2007, 03:13:53 PM »
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good one Yoindia Shayariadabhiki
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«Reply #13 on: October 29, 2007, 06:34:07 PM »
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BAHUT KHOOB Yoindia ShayariadabHIKHI...
THANX A LOT FOR APPRECIATING..
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«Reply #14 on: November 08, 2007, 07:33:04 AM »
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itz always a pleasure hearig gud frm u frnd....thnx
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