Sar rakhkar so jana chahta hu maa.............masoom......

by masoom shahjada on March 28, 2012, 05:11:12 PM
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Kuch lamhe teri gaud me
bitana chahta hu maa.
Aaj apni sari pareshani
tumhe btana chahta hu maa.
Bed pe mujhe neend nhi
aa pati h.
Aaj tere kandhe pe sar
rakhkar so jana chahta hu maa.
Mehnat karke thak rha hu
fir bhi mahnat kar rha hu.
Tere kadmo pe duniya
m rakh dena chahta hu maa.
Srarat es umar me achchi nhi lagti.
Magar khawahish bhi meri
es trah puri nhi hogi.
Tang esliye kar rha hu.
Kyoki tera ak mamta bhara
thappad khana chahta hu maa.
Majburiya h ki maa m tumse
door hota hu.
Mgar ye bhi sach h ki
pardesh m sab se jyada.
Tumhe yaad karta hu m maa.
Hotlo ke khane se pet
nhi bharta h.
Bhut dino se bhuka hu.
Aaj tere hath se
pait bharkar khana khana chahta hu maa.
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«Reply #1 on: March 28, 2012, 05:16:03 PM »
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bahut khoobsurat kavita likhi hai aapne Masoom ji... maa pe kuch bhi likhiye hamesha khoobsurat hota hai aur aapke is post ke baare me kya kahun... dil se nikli hui pukaar maa se milne ki... bade khoobsurat shabdon me aapne apne dil ke ehsaason ko vyakt kiya hai.. bahut khoob....!!!
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«Reply #2 on: March 28, 2012, 06:01:01 PM »
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Bahut masoom sa likha hai aapne bilkul apne naam ki tarah..
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«Reply #4 on: March 29, 2012, 03:36:25 AM »
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bahut sunder masoom beta god bless you
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«Reply #5 on: March 29, 2012, 04:29:48 AM »
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maasoom ji ghar se door mai bhi rehta hu.. mujhe pata hai maa se door rehna kaisa lagta hai... bahut sundar ehsas... aankhon me aansoo la diye aapne... bahut bahut mubarak ho... god bless u... khush rahe .. likhte rahe...


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«Reply #6 on: March 30, 2012, 10:43:04 PM »
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bhut khub masoom bhaii....

ek maa ko aap ne jitna dia hai wo suficient to nahi hai par kam bhi nahi


nice feeling for a mother
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«Reply #7 on: March 30, 2012, 11:58:32 PM »
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Quote from: Rahi2001 on March 30, 2012, 10:43:04 PM
bhut khub masoom bhaii....

ek maa ko aap ne jitna dia hai wo suficient to nahi hai par kam bhi nahi


nice feeling for a mother
brother m apni maa se door hu. Mujhe apni maa ki bhut yaad aati h h. Bas un feeling ko gazal me utarna chahta tha. Jo achche se kar nhi paya.
Aapne pasand ki eska bhut bhut sukriya.
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