Sardi ki aor pehla kadam...

by brokenbyluv on October 22, 2010, 04:50:50 PM
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Pichle baras jab mausam badla tha,
tou ye andaza nhi tha kuch naya azmana hoga,

jise manga tha aksar apni duao mein,
vo mujhse yu beparda merra anjana hoga,

jagne lagegi phir mujhme kisi ki aas,
phir kisi k naam se merra dil diwana hoga,

iss baras mausam phir badal sa gaya hai,
per na malum tha iss baar sab kuch beimana hoga,

sardi ki aor aaj phir pehla kadam badha hai,
iss bar phir merra dil mhbt k ehsas se kuch begana hoga,

phir merre ishq ki dastan adhuri reh jayegi,
aur phir kisiki yado mein mujhe raato ko jalana hoga,

merre yaaro bahut dard diya hai iss mhbt ne mujhe,
ab lagta hai zindgi k raaste pe akele hi chalte jana hoga.........
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«Reply #1 on: October 22, 2010, 06:12:23 PM »
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Shurkiya shihab ji...
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«Reply #2 on: October 23, 2010, 07:56:02 AM »
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Kya kahe Geetji..bahut Hi khoobsurat Jazbaat!!
Har lafz Kuch Kehta Hua..Bahut bahut Aur bahut Khoob Geetji

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Har Kadam Par Tujhe Khud Ko Aazmaana Hoga
Chaahe Kuch Bhi Ho, Tujhe Har Haal mein Muskuraana Hoga..

Kaun Kehta Hai Ke Yaadein Kabhi Mithti Hi Nahi!!!
Nayi Umeed Ki kiran Ko Tujhe Dil Hi Dil mein Jalaana Hoga..

Asaan nahi Hota Tanha Kisi Raah Par Chalna, Eh Mere Dost!!!
Zindagi Ke Kisi Raah Par Ek Naya Dost Tujhe Banana Hoga...

Tu Har Haal mein Khush Rahe Yeh Ardaas Hai Meri!!!
Par Ruthi Hui Kuch Khushiyon Ko Tujhe Khud Se Manana Hoga..

"Khwaish" Mausam To Yahan Pal Do Pal Mein Badalte Hi Rehte hai!!!
Par Eh Dost "Geet" Tujhe Ab Zindagi Ka Ek Naya Geet Guungunana Hoga..
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«Reply #3 on: October 23, 2010, 10:00:45 AM »
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Dil tou shukriya khwaish ji.hor enne change lafza layi bhi bahut bahut shukriya bahut changa likhya hai ji koshish karangi tuadi galla te amal kar saka...take care ji...rab raakha...Usual Smile
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«Reply #4 on: October 23, 2010, 10:28:17 AM »
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Quote from: brokenbyluv on October 23, 2010, 10:00:45 AM
Dil tou shukriya khwaish ji.hor enne change lafza layi bhi bahut bahut shukriya bahut changa likhya hai ji koshish karangi tuadi galla te amal kar saka...take care ji...rab raakha...Usual Smile

Geetji, Issi umeed naal Eh likheya si ke Iss Nu padhkar Tussi Acha feel karo Aur Khush Raho..Baaki Thankyou Naa kaho, bas Sach Vich Eh Galaan Nu Amal Kar sako To Ohi Inaam Hai iss Kavita Da..

Thankyou Sooooooooooooooo Much ji.. icon_flower
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«Reply #5 on: October 23, 2010, 12:55:55 PM »
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its awesome    Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #6 on: October 23, 2010, 12:58:48 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on October 23, 2010, 10:28:17 AM
Geetji, Issi umeed naal Eh likheya si ke Iss Nu padhkar Tussi Acha feel karo Aur Khush Raho..Baaki Thankyou Naa kaho, bas Sach Vich Eh Galaan Nu Amal Kar sako To Ohi Inaam Hai iss Kavita Da..

Thankyou Sooooooooooooooo Much ji.. icon_flower

Ji zarur khwaish ji main poori koshish karangi ji...bahut bahut shurkiya ji...khush raho jii//hor wadiya wadiya likhde raho...
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«Reply #7 on: October 23, 2010, 01:01:00 PM »
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Quote from: ruku on October 23, 2010, 12:55:55 PM
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Thnx ruku...Usual Smile
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«Reply #8 on: October 23, 2010, 09:20:28 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Geet ji... bahut hi pyaara ..!!
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yaad aane lagi hai humein bhi jaade ki wo dhup pichhle saal ki,
haathon me liye kisi ka haath jab kuch kadam chale the hum,

wo kuch lamhe zindagi ke jaate jaate bhi jaa nahi paate hain,
kisi na kisi bahaane se wo yaadein fir se laut ke aate hain,

tha koi aisa jise badi shaan se hum apna kaha karte the,
aaj uske baare me sochte hi aankhon me aansoo aa jaate hain,

kyun kiya tha humne mohabbat usse, kyun maana tha usko apna,
kuch inhi khayalon se aaj humein ye dard raaton ko jagaate hain,

na to bhool paate hain use, na kisi aur ko hi chaah paate hain hum,
aaj bhi uski yaadon ko seene se lagaake hum bas aansoo bahaate hain....
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«Reply #9 on: October 24, 2010, 12:57:44 PM »
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Bahut shukriya kapil ji aur khoob likha hai...


Hota hai yahi haal jab sacha pyar hota hai,
koi kisiki ek jhalak se apna chain sukoon khota hai,
per har lagav ko hum pyar nhi keh sakte..
lagav tou hamein bejaan chizo se bhi hota hai.........
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«Reply #10 on: October 24, 2010, 11:07:40 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne... aur meri kavita pasand karne ke liye shukriya...!!!
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«Reply #11 on: October 25, 2010, 04:04:22 PM »
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Shukriya ji n ur welcome too...
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«Reply #12 on: December 21, 2010, 05:36:40 AM »
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Quote from: brokenbyluv on October 24, 2010, 12:57:44 PM
Bahut shukriya kapil ji aur khoob likha hai...


Hota hai yahi haal jab sacha pyar hota hai,
koi kisiki ek jhalak se apna chain sukoon khota hai,
per har lagav ko hum pyar nhi keh sakte..
lagav tou hamein bejaan chizo se bhi hota hai.........

Quote from: ~Hriday~ on October 23, 2010, 09:20:28 PM
bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Geet ji... bahut hi pyaara ..!!
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

yaad aane lagi hai humein bhi jaade ki wo dhup pichhle saal ki,
haathon me liye kisi ka haath jab kuch kadam chale the hum,

wo kuch lamhe zindagi ke jaate jaate bhi jaa nahi paate hain,
kisi na kisi bahaane se wo yaadein fir se laut ke aate hain,

tha koi aisa jise badi shaan se hum apna kaha karte the,
aaj uske baare me sochte hi aankhon me aansoo aa jaate hain,

kyun kiya tha humne mohabbat usse, kyun maana tha usko apna,
kuch inhi khayalon se aaj humein ye dard raaton ko jagaate hain,

na to bhool paate hain use, na kisi aur ko hi chaah paate hain hum,
aaj bhi uski yaadon ko seene se lagaake hum bas aansoo bahaate hain....
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