saugaat!!!!!

by sarfira on May 29, 2013, 07:38:32 PM
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«Reply #15 on: May 30, 2013, 04:34:49 PM »
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Quote from: sarfira on May 30, 2013, 01:13:52 AM
thanx aap sbka dil se..

Adil sahab
mai kuch galtiyan krta hoon hamesha

bro--mai kuch upset mind m ye sb likh betha
ar shayd mai kabhi likhna Sikh nhi paunga
ese hi jheliega mujhe aap sb


Aray Bro...

Aapne bahut khoob likha hai... Maine toH aapki tareef hi kii hai... aur dekhiye sabhi tareef kar rahe haiN... Usual Smile

Bro likhne ke liye techniques ki nahi ahsaas ki zaroorat hoti hai... aur unhe bayaaN kare woH lafz chahiye... aapke paas ahsaas bhi haiN aur woH lafz bhi isliye toH itna khoob likha hai aapne... Usual Smile
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«Reply #16 on: May 30, 2013, 08:44:48 PM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on May 30, 2013, 04:34:49 PM

Aray Bro...

Aapne bahut khoob likha hai... Maine toH aapki tareef hi kii hai... aur dekhiye sabhi tareef kar rahe haiN... Usual Smile

Bro likhne ke liye techniques ki nahi ahsaas ki zaroorat hoti hai... aur unhe bayaaN kare woH lafz chahiye... aapke paas ahsaas bhi haiN aur woH lafz bhi isliye toH itna khoob likha hai aapne... Usual Smile

haha bro
mai janta hoon ki maine acha likha hai tongue3
bas Radiff Kafiya aur Bahr in sab baaton se anjaan
apne subidhanusaar apne alfaaz deta hoon
fir chahe vo grammatical mistake hi q na ho Usual Smile

islie kaha ki mujhe ese hi jheliega aap San tongue3

mai sabhi daad dene wale apne dosto ka bht shukaraguzaar hoon k unhone apna kimti waqt dia
shukriya

khush rahie
muskurate rahie
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