sazishon ke ghere hain....

by sana Afroz on November 21, 2014, 01:13:46 PM

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Sazishon ke gherey hain,
khauf ke andherey hain.

karwaan na lut jaaye !!
har taraf luterey hain

waqt chahey jaisa ho!!
waqt chahey kaisa ho!!

tumney hi kahaa tha ye,
ham to sang terey hain.


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Re: sazishon ke ghere hain....

«Reply #1 on: November 21, 2014, 02:17:46 PM »


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Re: sazishon ke ghere hain....

«Reply #2 on: November 21, 2014, 09:25:45 PM »

bahut umdah Alfaaz hain, Sana jee, dheron daad. Ek suggestion hai, teesare misre aapne donon lines mein likhaa hai 'waqt chahey jaisa ho' iss mein se kisi bhi ek line mein jaisa ko kaisa ho kar dejiye thorhi saa spicy ho jaaye gaa.

waqt chahey jaisa ho
waqt chahey kaisa ho

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