seene se dil nikal kar mera apne pairo may rondha usne

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i m back my yoindia home i m happytanha zindagi tanha safer mare humdum ne acha bana ke diya kaber jaisa ghar,
dilo jaan se pyaar kiya usko mane,fir bhi usko kami lagi,,,





din nikal gya sochte huye,raat nikal gayi rote huye,
acha sila liya tumne ab chen kaha se payenge,

seene se dil nikal kar mera apne pairo may rondha usne,
faisla kar liya hamne bhi,ab kabhi muskura na payenge,

kiya katta ho gyi thi hamse woh bole bina hi chali gayi,
tare bager tanhai e alam may zaher judai ka pite jayenge,

woh bite pal mare dil o dimag may chore gyi ab wohi mare sathi hai,
woh khush rahe jaha bhi rahe sab dukh hum sehte jayenge,

zindagi berang ho gayi apni saanso se nafrat ho gayi,
mare pyaar ko jo tumne zaleel kiya usko na bhool payenge,

bhatak rahi hai rooh mari uske didaar ki umeed main,
woh aakar hamari kabar par ek pal to aansu bahayenge,,,


             jj saini[/b
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«Reply #1 on: February 20, 2014, 08:56:12 PM »
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i m back my yoindia home i m happytanha zindagi tanha safer mare humdum ne acha bana ke diya kaber jaisa ghar,
dilo jaan se pyaar kiya usko mane,fir bhi usko kami lagi,,,





din nikal gya sochte huye,raat nikal gayi rote huye,
acha sila liya tumne ab chen kaha se payenge,

seene se dil nikal kar mera apne pairo may rondha usne,
faisla kar liya hamne bhi,ab kabhi muskura na payenge,

kiya katta ho gyi thi hamse woh bole bina hi chali gayi,
tare bager tanhai e alam may zaher judai ka pite jayenge,

woh bite pal mare dil o dimag may chore gyi ab wohi mare sathi hai,
woh khush rahe jaha bhi rahe sab dukh hum sehte jayenge,

zindagi berang ho gayi apni saanso se nafrat ho gayi,
mare pyaar ko jo tumne zaleel kiya usko na bhool payenge,

bhatak rahi hai rooh mari uske didaar ki umeed main,
woh aakar hamari kabar par ek pal to aansu bahayenge,,,


            jj saini[/b



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