seniors are always right

by sunildehgawani on October 17, 2011, 03:03:13 PM
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    abhi tak manzilen sabhi asaan rahi meri

                  

   na bhoola mashvira lena kabhi umradaraz logon ka
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«Reply #1 on: October 17, 2011, 03:06:41 PM »
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    abhi tak manzilen sabhi asaan rahi meri

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   na bhoola mashvira lena kabhi umradaraz logon ka

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«Reply #2 on: October 17, 2011, 03:15:25 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaa usharajesh ji ,,,,muaf kijiyega aapka work j,,,,bahut khas topic se hai ...main na kisi ki dushman na humsafar ,,isse,nahi dekh pa raha hoon mere system par pata nahi kyon open nahi ho raha hai ,i tried many times ,....

    abhi tak manzilen sabhi asaan rahi meri

                  'coz'

   na bhoola mashvira lena kabhi umradaraz logon ka
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«Reply #3 on: October 17, 2011, 05:43:43 PM »
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Aadaab janab Sunil Sahaab!

 Janab Kia kaheN aapki sahib e samajh O akhlaaq ke bare meiN
bahut khoob... behad umdaa sher kaha hai janab daad daad daad..

Likhate rahiye janab khush o aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez........ Usual Smile
  

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«Reply #4 on: October 18, 2011, 02:36:07 AM »
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Good..........
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«Reply #5 on: October 18, 2011, 06:24:25 AM »
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    abhi tak manzilen sabhi asaan rahi meri

                  'coz'

   na bhoola mashvira lena kabhi umradaraz logon ka

Bahut Bahut Khoob..Sachai Ko lafzon Mein Bayaan Kiya Aapne..bahut Ache Bas ek Guzaarish Hai Aapse Sunil ji,Aapne Jo Sher Likha Apne Aap mein Bahut Gehra Hai, Isme se Aap "Coz" Word hata Dijiye..Woh Iss Sher Ka Charm Kam Kar Deta Hai..

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«Reply #6 on: October 18, 2011, 06:27:37 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaa usharajesh ji ,,,,muaf kijiyega aapka work j,,,,bahut khas topic se hai ...main na kisi ki dushman na humsafar ,,isse,nahi dekh pa raha hoon mere system par pata nahi kyon open nahi ho raha hai ,i tried many times ,....

Sunil ji,
Ye lijiye apki pareshani dur kiye deti hoon. Apkeliye pesh hai...



दोस्त, दुश्मन न किसी की हमसफ़र हूँ मैं
ग़मे जिंदगी का एक तनहा सफर हूँ मैं

पास आकर हर कोई मुड जाता है इस तरह
जैसे उजड़ी हुई पुरानी कोई रहगुजर हूँ मैं

कोई कहे नासेह, रहनुमा किसी के लिए
कहता है कोई, एक सजायाफ्ता रहबर हूँ मैं

सर उठाकर देखती हूँ ज्यों उस तरफ
लगता है कोई ढलती हुई सहर हूँ मैं

सुनती हूँ गुफ्तगू के यही चर्चा है हर तरफ
लोग कहते हैं बहुत अच्छी सुखनवर हूँ मैं 


                             -----   उषा राजेश शर्मा
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mkv
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«Reply #7 on: October 18, 2011, 07:28:54 AM »
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Dear Sunil
may be true, it's not a management lesson. manjil/success has so many angles.....
let's not loose our identity. we should stick to what we are.
ur op. pl

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«Reply #8 on: October 18, 2011, 07:40:21 AM »
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hmmmm.... umar-daraaz log....

hamaray dereena dost Sheikh Saadi marhoom farma gayay hen kuch... in say itefaaq karna/na karnaa kuchh zaroori nahi... just for info...

tavangari ba-dil hast, na ba-maal (persian)
(sakhaawat dil say hoti hay, daulat say nahi)
buzurgi ba-aqal hast, na ba, saal (persian)
(buzurgi aqal say hoti hay, years say nahi)

andhi takleed chaahay kisi ki bhe ku na ho... hum karnay ko tayaar nahi...
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«Reply #9 on: October 18, 2011, 09:41:06 AM »
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hmmmm.... umar-daraaz log....

hamaray dereena dost Sheikh Saadi marhoom farma gayay hen kuch... in say itefaaq karna/na karnaa kuchh zaroori nahi... just for info...

tavangari ba-dil hast, na ba-maal (persian)
(sakhaawat dil say hoti hay, daulat say nahi)
buzurgi ba-aqal hast, na ba, saal (persian)
(buzurgi aqal say hoti hay, years say nahi)

andhi takleed chaahay kisi ki bhe ku na ho... hum karnay ko tayaar nahi...
Vaah Vaah Vb sahab
kitne masoom shabdo me apne apni baat rakh di hai. Bahut khoob.
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sunildehgawani
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«Reply #10 on: October 19, 2011, 06:21:40 AM »
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,,,tah-e-dil aadab parwaj sahib .....hausla afaji ke liye bahut babut shukriyaa,,,nachiz ko kya se kya bana diya apnke hausl;on ne ,,,
Aadaab janab Sunil Sahaab!

 Janab Kia kaheN aapki sahib e samajh O akhlaaq ke bare meiN
bahut khoob... behad umdaa sher kaha hai janab daad daad daad..

Likhate rahiye janab khush o aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez........ Usual Smile
   


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«Reply #11 on: October 19, 2011, 06:22:52 AM »
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kash ji shukriyaa ,,,,
Good..........
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sunildehgawani
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«Reply #12 on: October 19, 2011, 06:29:57 AM »
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shukriya khuwais sahiba ,,,hata diya hamne coz,,,lakin hausle ke liye sat sat shukriyaa aapka ,,,itna hi to fark hai,,,,jane aur anjane main ..khuda hafiz,
Bahut Bahut Khoob..Sachai Ko lafzon Mein Bayaan Kiya Aapne..bahut Ache Bas ek Guzaarish Hai Aapse Sunil ji,Aapne Jo Sher Likha Apne Aap mein Bahut Gehra Hai, Isme se Aap "Coz" Word hata Dijiye..Woh Iss Sher Ka Charm Kam Kar Deta Hai..

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sunildehgawani
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«Reply #13 on: October 19, 2011, 06:51:32 AM »
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bahut hi nayab likha hai usha saiba,,,,tah-e-dil mubarkbaad kabul kijiye ...ek ek lafz jazbati hai ,,,,koi saani nahi hai in lafzon ka,,,, aisa lagta hai ki ,,,aapke iss work ki tarif lafzon main karna bemani hogi,,,apne aap ko ek adna sa mankar ..apni nazm ko kitna sunahara rup diya hai aapne ...keep writing 4ever usha sahiba ....khuda hafiz
Sunil ji,
Ye lijiye apki pareshani dur kiye deti hoon. Apkeliye pesh hai...



दोस्त, दुश्मन न किसी की हमसफ़र हूँ मैं
ग़मे जिंदगी का एक तनहा सफर हूँ मैं

पास आकर हर कोई मुड जाता है इस तरह
जैसे उजड़ी हुई पुरानी कोई रहगुजर हूँ मैं

कोई कहे नासेह, रहनुमा किसी के लिए
कहता है कोई, एक सजायाफ्ता रहबर हूँ मैं

सर उठाकर देखती हूँ ज्यों उस तरफ
लगता है कोई ढलती हुई सहर हूँ मैं

सुनती हूँ गुफ्तगू के यही चर्चा है हर तरफ
लोग कहते हैं बहुत अच्छी सुखनवर हूँ मैं 


                             -----   उषा राजेश शर्मा
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«Reply #14 on: October 19, 2011, 07:56:24 AM »
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shukriyaaa ,,,,,vb ji ,,,,,bahut khub likha aapne ...aaapka bhi daad ka haq banta hai ,,,,
hmmmm.... umar-daraaz log....

hamaray dereena dost Sheikh Saadi marhoom farma gayay hen kuch... in say itefaaq karna/na karnaa kuchh zaroori nahi... just for info...

tavangari ba-dil hast, na ba-maal (persian)
(sakhaawat dil say hoti hay, daulat say nahi)
buzurgi ba-aqal hast, na ba, saal (persian)
(buzurgi aqal say hoti hay, years say nahi)

andhi takleed chaahay kisi ki bhe ku na ho... hum karnay ko tayaar nahi...
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