Shaam Dhali............................saru.............

by SURESH SANGWAN on February 15, 2016, 07:09:54 AM
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शाम ढली  हम घर चले
दिन भर मस्ती कर चले

रातें  लाई   घर हमें
सुबह हुई के फिर चले

इक दूजे के साथ में
छोड़ अपना डर चले

नंगे  पाँव  मोटर  बिना
हम खुशियों की डगर चले

चाहिए जवानियां किसे
हम बचपन पे मर चले

बहार हो या हो खिजां
अच्छा है मिलकर चले

हिंदू मुस्लिम कौन हैं
इनसे हम उठकर चले

--सुरेश सांगवान'सरु'


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«Reply #1 on: February 15, 2016, 09:29:41 AM »
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Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on February 15, 2016, 07:09:54 AM

शाम ढली  हम घर चले
दिन भर मस्ती कर चले

रातें  लाई   घर हमें
सुबह हुई के फिर चले

इक दूजे के साथ में
छोड़ अपना डर चले

नंगे  पाँव  मोटर  बिना
हम खुशियों की डगर चले

चाहिए जवानियां किसे
हम बचपन पे मर चले

बहार हो या हो खिजां
अच्छा है मिलकर चले

हिंदू मुस्लिम कौन हैं
इनसे हम उठकर चले

--सुरेश सांगवान'सरु'


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«Reply #2 on: February 15, 2016, 09:03:39 PM »
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«Reply #3 on: February 16, 2016, 05:43:53 AM »
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kyaa baat hai Suresh Jee bahut bahut khoobsurat waah. +RAU (pending)
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«Reply #4 on: February 16, 2016, 03:37:39 PM »
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