~*~ Shaam suhani mangta hoon ~*~ by Rahim

by dead heart on October 24, 2012, 02:44:26 PM
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Zindagi main meri ae Khuda tujse thodi rawaani mangta hoon,
Kahin bhi jaun, bas main teri farmaani mangta hoon..

Kat na jaye yeh ek baar milne wala safar kahin tanha tanha,
Uske lab kare mere labon se guftugu, aisi jawani mangta hoon..

Samander kinare baithe yaad karoun main muskurahat liye,
Beeti kisi haseen kay sang aisi shaam suhani mangta hoon..

Jab nikle dum toh kandhe chaar mager ankhein kayi nam ho,
Zinda rahoun maut kay baad bhi, aisi zindagani mangta hoon..

Uttar deta tha jazbaaton ko lavzon main ‘Khamosh’,
Ae Khuda, tujse meri woh aadat purani mangta hoon..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~
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«Reply #1 on: October 24, 2012, 02:47:22 PM »
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Quote from: -Rahim- on October 24, 2012, 02:44:26 PM
Zindagi main meri ae Khuda tujse thodi rawaani mangta hoon,
Kahin bhi jaun, bas main teri farmaani mangta hoon..

Kat na jaye yeh ek baar milne wala safar kahin tanha tanha,
Uske lab kare mere labon se guftugu, aisi jawani mangta hoon..

Samander kinare baithe yaad karoun main muskurahat liye,
Beeti kisi haseen kay sang aisi shaam suhani mangta hoon..

Jab nikle dum toh kandhe chaar mager ankhein kayi nam ho,
Zinda rahoun maut kay baad bhi, aisi zindagani mangta hoon..

Uttar deta tha jazbaaton ko lavzon main ‘Khamosh’,
Ae Khuda, tujse meri woh aadat purani mangta hoon..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~


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Waah waah waah......

Bahut bahut Khooob Mere Dost Rahim..Har Ek Ashaar Apne Hisse Ki Gehraai Liye Hue Hai..
khaas Taur par Yeh Ashar To Jaan Hai iss Ghazal ki..


Jab nikle dum toh kandhe chaar mager ankhein kayi nam ho,
Zinda rahoun maut kay baad bhi, aisi zindagani mangta hoon..

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«Reply #2 on: October 24, 2012, 02:48:32 PM »
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4th Jumla to Maar Hi Gaya Bhai.. Kya Likha hai Yaar.. Poori Nazm Behad Khubsoorat Hai.. Har Lafz Dil Ko chhoo Gaya..  Khuda Aapki Har Dua Kubool Kare.. Applause Applause Applause

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«Reply #3 on: October 24, 2012, 03:04:57 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Bahut Lajwab Likha Hain Rahim Ji...
Aapki Poem Bahut Dino Baad Padhne Ko Mili..


Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: October 24, 2012, 03:27:31 PM »
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Bahut khoobsurat kalaam.
Mazaa aa gaya.
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«Reply #5 on: October 24, 2012, 03:49:57 PM »
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bahut khoob rahim bhai
behad umda Applause Applause
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bahut badiya rahim jee Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: October 24, 2012, 04:18:38 PM »
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«Reply #8 on: October 24, 2012, 06:27:39 PM »
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Quote from: -Rahim- on October 24, 2012, 02:44:26 PM
Zindagi main meri ae Khuda tujse thodi rawaani mangta hoon,
Kahin bhi jaun, bas main teri farmaani mangta hoon..

Kat na jaye yeh ek baar milne wala safar kahin tanha tanha,
Uske lab kare mere labon se guftugu, aisi jawani mangta hoon..

Samander kinare baithe yaad karoun main muskurahat liye,
Beeti kisi haseen kay sang aisi shaam suhani mangta hoon..

Jab nikle dum toh kandhe chaar mager ankhein kayi nam ho,
Zinda rahoun maut kay baad bhi, aisi zindagani mangta hoon..

Uttar deta tha jazbaat ko lavzon main ‘Khamosh’,
Ae Khuda, tujse meri woh aadat purani mangta hoon..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~

well said sir
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«Reply #9 on: October 24, 2012, 07:34:36 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on October 24, 2012, 02:47:22 PM

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Waah waah waah......

Bahut bahut Khooob Mere Dost Rahim..Har Ek Ashaar Apne Hisse Ki Gehraai Liye Hue Hai..
khaas Taur par Yeh Ashar To Jaan Hai iss Ghazal ki..


Jab nikle dum toh kandhe chaar mager ankhein kayi nam ho,
Zinda rahoun maut kay baad bhi, aisi zindagani mangta hoon..

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Apka tahe tahe dil se shukriya dost..
Bas apka saath kafi mayne rakhta hai..
Khush rahiye..!
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Quote from: Mann on October 24, 2012, 02:48:32 PM
4th Jumla to Maar Hi Gaya Bhai.. Kya Likha hai Yaar.. Poori Nazm Behad Khubsoorat Hai.. Har Lafz Dil Ko chhoo Gaya..  Khuda Aapki Har Dua Kubool Kare.. Applause Applause Applause

Daad Kubool karen Bhai is Lajawab Qalaam Ke Liye..  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley



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Mohobat par likhna apki maharat hai aur meri ek line mohobat par likhi apko pasand ayi, toh wakei achi hi hogi..
Bahaut bahaut dil se shukriya bhai..
Dhero duaein..
Khush rahiye..!
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Quote from: Rishi Agarwal on October 24, 2012, 03:04:57 PM
Bahut Bahut Bahut Lajwab Likha Hain Rahim Ji...
Aapki Poem Bahut Dino Baad Padhne Ko Mili..


Applause Applause Applause
Tahe tahe dil se shukriya Rishi jee..
Haan ik arsa sa hogaya hai likhe hue..
Khush rahiye..!
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Quote from: Masoom Shahzada on October 24, 2012, 03:27:31 PM
Bahut khoobsurat kalaam.
Mazaa aa gaya.
Bahaut bahaut shukriya dost..
Khush rahiye..!
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bahut khoob rahim bhai
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Bahaut bahaut shukriya MKV jee..
Khush rahiye..!
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Quote from: suman59 on October 24, 2012, 03:59:04 PM
bahut badiya rahim jee Applause Applause
Shukriya Suman jee..
Khush rahiye..!
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