shakhsiyat.....A.B

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                  kisi ko khush rakhna,
                  meri aadat to nahin...!
                  mujhey dekh koi muskura dey.,
                  to main kya karoan............!!!
         sleepy4
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«Reply #1 on: April 11, 2010, 07:24:44 PM »
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Bahut khoob Adil ji...!!!

kasoor to ye aapki aankhon ka hai,
jo is tarah asar kar jaati hai...
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«Reply #2 on: April 11, 2010, 09:52:26 PM »
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 Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard tongue3 Wah kya baat hai Adil ji.lovely creation,beatiful lines by Kapil ji. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: April 12, 2010, 03:20:46 AM »
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                 kisi ko khush rakhna,
                  meri aadat to nahin...!
                  mujhey dekh koi muskura dey.,
                  to main kya karoan............!!!          sleepy4
Bahut khoob bechain ji..

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Vo hamse jo karne lage es dillagi ki baat,
Maine bhi apna dil usike naam kar diya.

Ab kaun sochta hai yahan haar aur jeet,
Do pal ki zindgi mein aik kaam kar diya.
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«Reply #4 on: April 12, 2010, 06:41:17 AM »
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Wah wah kya khoob likha hai Adil Sb.
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«Reply #5 on: April 12, 2010, 06:54:40 AM »
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Wah kya baat hai           Adil Bechain ji......


Kisiko patana hamari aadat nahi
meri shakhsiyat dekh patjaaye
toh meh kya karun...

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«Reply #6 on: April 12, 2010, 07:09:03 AM »
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Very beautiful lines Pandey ji and Cara ji.bahut acha likha. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: April 12, 2010, 07:53:26 AM »
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Bahut Khoob Adil Ji
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«Reply #8 on: April 12, 2010, 07:54:57 AM »
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Bahut khoob bechain ji..

Usne nazar jhukake mera naam kya liya,
LogoN ne yahi baat shahr-e-aam kar diya.

Vo hamse jo karne lage es dillagi ki baat,
Maine bhi apna dil usike naam kar diya.

Ab kaun sochta hai yahan haar aur jeet,
Do pal ki zindgi mein aik kaam kar diya.


Good one Dr Pandey Ji
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«Reply #9 on: April 12, 2010, 08:59:22 AM »
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                  kisi ko khush rakhna,
                  meri aadat to nahin...!
                  mujhey dekh koi muskura dey.,
                  to main kya karoan............!!!          sleepy4

Bahut Khoob Adil Bechainji Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #10 on: April 12, 2010, 09:00:08 AM »
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Bahut khoob bechain ji..

Usne nazar jhukake mera naam kya liya,
LogoN ne yahi baat shahr-e-aam kar diya.

Vo hamse jo karne lage es dillagi ki baat,
Maine bhi apna dil usike naam kar diya.

Ab kaun sochta hai yahan haar aur jeet,
Do pal ki zindgi mein aik kaam kar diya.


Bahut Bahut Khoob DrPandeyji Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #11 on: April 12, 2010, 09:09:03 AM »
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Very beautiful lines Pandey ji and Cara ji.bahut acha likha. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
Good one Dr Pandey Ji
Bahut Bahut Khoob Dr Pandey ji Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Bahut bahut Shukriya Khwaish ji, Rajesh Harish ji aur Madhu ji...ki aapko meri reply ke alfaaz pasand aaye..
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«Reply #12 on: April 13, 2010, 05:19:12 AM »
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Bahut khoob Adil ji...!!!

kasoor to ye aapki aankhon ka hai,
jo is tarah asar kar jaati hai...

bahut khoob klaskar ji
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«Reply #13 on: April 13, 2010, 05:19:44 AM »
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Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard tongue3 Wah kya baat hai Adil ji.lovely creation,beatiful lines by Kapil ji. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause

thank u madhuwesh ji
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«Reply #14 on: April 13, 2010, 05:20:19 AM »
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Bahut khoob bechain ji..

Usne nazar jhukake mera naam kya liya,
LogoN ne yahi baat shahr-e-aam kar diya.

Vo hamse jo karne lage es dillagi ki baat,
Maine bhi apna dil usike naam kar diya.

Ab kaun sochta hai yahan haar aur jeet,
Do pal ki zindgi mein aik kaam kar diya.


BEHTREEN KALAAM PANDEY JI
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