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mamta bajpai
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Sham dhalte hee ghar ko jaanaa hai
uske saaye me shab bitaanaa hai
dard yaksaaN hai sabka furqat me
sabko apanoN ka pyaar paanaa hai
koi jaaye kyoN waqt se pahle
sabke jaane kaa waqt aanaa hai
kisko maaloom ye kahaaN jaayeN
hai kahaaN inkaa aab o daanaa hai
yuN to duniyaa bharee hai qissoN se
sabse achchhaa teraa fasaanaa hai
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«Reply #3 on: October 20, 2010, 06:10:42 AM » |
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mamta jiii dheer saari daad ke sath likhte rahiye ....yunhi bahut khoob he~
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«Reply #4 on: October 20, 2010, 06:40:06 AM » |
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bht khubsurat nazm mamta ji...bht hi dilkash likha haia apne.....
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«Reply #5 on: October 20, 2010, 07:31:40 AM » |
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Bahut khoob Mamta Ji
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«Reply #6 on: October 20, 2010, 01:04:55 PM » |
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Bekaraar jee! bahut bahut dhanyawaad! aap ye bataayeN aap kahaaN kho gaye the ......kafi arsaa huaa aap nazar naheeN aaye or naa hee aap kee koi rachna nazar nawaaz hui...khair.achchha lagaa aap ko yahaaN dekh kar...
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«Reply #7 on: October 20, 2010, 01:08:48 PM » |
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Arun jee!aap ki or se milee badhaai paa kar mai bahut khush hooN. aap kee lekhni kee mai kaayal hooN.aap ko kai baar paRhaa.or prabhaavit hue binaa na rah sakee...ek baar phir aap ko gazal ko apnaa qeemati waqt dene or saraahane kaa behad shukriyaa....
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«Reply #8 on: October 20, 2010, 01:15:17 PM » |
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Abhi jab tak tumhaari daad milti rahegi likhne kaa housla kam naheeN hone deNge......bahut bahtu dahanyawaad!
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«Reply #9 on: October 20, 2010, 01:17:52 PM » |
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shukriyaa Kasak jee!kuchh silsila aap kee or se bhee isi zameen par.......
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«Reply #10 on: October 20, 2010, 01:18:36 PM » |
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bahut bahut dahanyawaad Rajesh jee!
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«Reply #11 on: October 21, 2010, 09:36:28 AM » |
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«Reply #12 on: October 21, 2010, 02:32:48 PM » |
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Shukriya Hriday jee!
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«Reply #13 on: October 21, 2010, 08:50:49 PM » |
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bahut hi achhe khayalaat likhe hain aapne mamta ji... !
ek musaafir hai zindagi kahaN iska thikaana hai
de kar kuch bikhri yaadein phir laut jaana hai
kaun kahaaN kisko rok saka hai yahaan ab tak
phir bhi koi na jaane kisko kahaan jaana hai
ab ye zid ho chala gar tumhe ki bhulaa do hume
phir to khushi ke liye tumhaari hume mit jaana hai
ye haunsla ye zazba khud mein banaaye rakh Intezar
tujhe is duniya se hokar abhi bahut door jaana hai... !
Intezar !
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