Shamaa Jalne Ke lLiye Hia Ya Jalne Ke Liye.....bansi

by BANSI DHAMEJA on August 08, 2012, 05:29:47 AM

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Lakhon Pravane Jale Yeh Jaan Ne Ke Liye
Shamaa Jalne Ke Liye Hia Ya Jalaane Ke Liye

Koi Bhed Iska AAj Tak Na Paa Sakaa Phir Bhee
Parvane Betaab Hote Hain Shamaa Men Jalne Ke Liye

----------------bansi dhameja(madhur)


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Re: Shamaa Jalne Ke lLiye Hia Ya Jalne Ke Liye.....bansi

«Reply #1 on: August 08, 2012, 08:57:54 AM »

wah bahut sundar bansiji


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Re: Shamaa Jalne Ke lLiye Hia Ya Jalne Ke Liye.....bansi

«Reply #2 on: August 08, 2012, 10:02:27 AM »

nandbandhu ji shukriay


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Re: Shamaa Jalne Ke lLiye Hia Ya Jalne Ke Liye.....bansi

«Reply #3 on: August 08, 2012, 10:20:40 AM »

Quote from: BANSI DHAMEJA on August 08, 2012, 05:29:47 AM

Lakhon Pravane Jale Yeh Jaan Ne Ke Liye
Shamaa Jalne Ke Liye Hai Ya Jalaane Ke Liye( SPELLING CORRECT KAR [/color]LEIN)

Koi Bhed Iska AAj Tak Na Paa Sakaa Phir Bhee
Parvane Betaab Hote Hain Shamaa Men Jalne Ke Liye

----------------bansi dhameja(madhur)

bahut acha sawaal hai.gud


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Re: Shamaa Jalne Ke lLiye Hia Ya Jalne Ke Liye.....bansi

«Reply #4 on: August 08, 2012, 11:34:15 AM »

good


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Re: Shamaa Jalne Ke lLiye Hia Ya Jalne Ke Liye.....bansi

«Reply #5 on: August 08, 2012, 01:56:16 PM »

bahut khoob Bansi ji....!!!


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Re: Shamaa Jalne Ke lLiye Hia Ya Jalne Ke Liye.....bansi

«Reply #6 on: August 08, 2012, 04:23:20 PM »

khamosh aawaaz ji shukriya.
spelling mistakes mere se ho hi jaatee hain point out karne ke liye bhi shukriya.


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Re: Shamaa Jalne Ke lLiye Hia Ya Jalne Ke Liye.....bansi

«Reply #7 on: August 08, 2012, 04:23:56 PM »

sankjeev kash ji thanks


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Re: Shamaa Jalne Ke lLiye Hia Ya Jalne Ke Liye.....bansi

«Reply #8 on: August 08, 2012, 04:24:48 PM »

baht badhiya bansi ji....


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Re: Shamaa Jalne Ke lLiye Hia Ya Jalne Ke Liye.....bansi

«Reply #9 on: August 08, 2012, 05:09:34 PM »

saudagar ji shukriya


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Re: Shamaa Jalne Ke lLiye Hia Ya Jalne Ke Liye.....bansi

«Reply #10 on: August 11, 2012, 03:18:05 PM »

nice


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«Reply #11 on: August 11, 2012, 03:34:31 PM »

saini ji shukriay


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