""sharaabee""

by nirala on July 28, 2012, 02:30:59 PM
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na koi kaam na dhaam hai
jawaanee pe meree "jaam-e-nisaar" hai

"amar-jot" ki jyoti ungliyon me aur
hothon pe ujli si dhuen ki dhaar hai

kaisi ye "rut-e-bahaar" hai aayee
jataa rha dushman bhee mujhee se pyaar hai

hosh me raha na ab ke itni "pee" hai
hua nir bhee yaron "sharabeeyon" me ab shumaar hai
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«Reply #1 on: July 28, 2012, 03:09:05 PM »
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na koi kaam na dhaam hai
jawaanee pe meree "jaam-e-nisaar" hai

"amar-jot" ki jyoti ungliyon me aur
hothon pe ujli si dhuen ki dhaar hai

kaisi ye "rut-e-bahaar" hai aayee
jataa rha dushman bhee mujhee se pyaar hai

hosh me raha na ab ke itni "pee" hai
hua nir bhee yaron "sharabeeyon" me ab shumaar hai
nice very nice
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«Reply #2 on: July 28, 2012, 03:09:34 PM »
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waah sahab ji
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«Reply #3 on: July 28, 2012, 04:38:57 PM »
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«Reply #4 on: July 28, 2012, 07:04:09 PM »
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na koi kaam na dhaam hai
jawaanee pe meree "jaam-e-nisaar" hai

"amar-jot" ki jyoti ungliyon me aur
hothon pe ujli si dhuen ki dhaar hai

kaisi ye "rut-e-bahaar" hai aayee
jataa rha dushman bhee mujhee se pyaar hai

hosh me raha na ab ke itni "pee" hai
hua nir bhee yaron "sharabeeyon" me ab shumaar hai


        andaaz-e- nirala buss; kyaa kahna.!
        dekhna ghaur se aur khamosh rahna.!!
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«Reply #5 on: July 28, 2012, 11:56:41 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob.
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«Reply #6 on: July 29, 2012, 12:17:30 AM »
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na koi kaam na dhaam hai
jawaanee pe meree "jaam-e-nisaar" hai

"amar-jot" ki jyoti ungliyon me aur
hothon pe ujli si dhuen ki dhaar hai

kaisi ye "rut-e-bahaar" hai aayee
jataa rha dushman bhee mujhee se pyaar hai

hosh me raha na ab ke itni "pee" hai
hua nir bhee yaron "sharabeeyon" me ab shumaar hai

Waaah waah bahut bahut khoob nirala jee

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«Reply #7 on: July 29, 2012, 02:28:45 AM »
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bahut khoob bahut hi kamaal ka likha hai nirala ji.........dhero daad ... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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