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Sheba

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baad maikashi ke bhi peene ki ijaazat chaahi!
zahr se hum ne zindagi ki riyaayat chaahi!!

kaise naadaan the ki lootne waalo.n se.
apne asmat ki bharsak hifaazat chaahi!

kar ke qata-talluk insaaniyat se hum ne.
zakeera-e-aslaah ki hi rafaaqat chaahi!

dast-e-sangtaraash ko chooom ne ki jagah.
ye kya jo patthero.n se nafaasat chaahi!

bache hue khandharo.n se shahr ke apne.
gawaah ki shakal mein hemaayat chaahi!

khudgarzi mein molawwis apni mohabbat aaj!
rishte mein sheba se sharaayat chaahi!!


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Bhupinder Kaur

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Re: sharaayat..........sheba

«Reply #1 on: May 15, 2013, 02:33:37 AM »

Awesome Sheba ji Clapping Smiley


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Advo.RavinderaRavi

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«Reply #2 on: May 15, 2013, 02:43:15 AM »

Nice 1


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RAJAN KONDAL

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«Reply #3 on: May 15, 2013, 02:44:55 AM »

Quote from: Sheba on May 15, 2013, 02:13:36 AM

Beutiful lines


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laaiba

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Re: sharaayat..........sheba

«Reply #4 on: May 15, 2013, 04:00:03 AM »

Quote from: Sheba on May 15, 2013, 02:13:36 AM

khaalis urdu ke lafzon mein goondh kar yeh ghazal laayi hain ap sheba ,........waah,....sab ki ghalon par aap khushgawar mazahiya coments detti hain ou.r aise gehre jazbat ALLAH ALLAH, kya kehne
doob gaye ji ham to in alfaaz ki fgahrayoion meiN,...yakeen maaniye bohat se logon ke sar ke ooper se aapki yeh nafees ghazal
chali jaayegi ,......bohat sanjeeda kalaam hai ou.r meree taraf se aik rau ke sath bohat c daad aapke iss taghazul ki nazar ,.......


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mkv

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«Reply #5 on: May 15, 2013, 09:47:30 AM »

dast-e-sangtaraash ko chooom ne ki jagah. ye kya jo patthero.n se nafaasat chaahi!

khudgarzi mein molawwis apni mohabbat aaj!
rishte mein sheba se sharaayat chaahi!!

Bahut khoob Sheba jee


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F.H.SIDDIQUI

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«Reply #6 on: May 15, 2013, 11:26:28 AM »

Khubsurat , taghazzul se labrez kalaam hai , sheba ji. Khas taur se matla , maqta aur laal sher bahut khub hain. bahut mubarakbaad aur 1 rau bhi pesh khidmat hai , duaaon ke sath.


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Re: sharaayat..........sheba

«Reply #7 on: May 15, 2013, 11:36:17 AM »

Quote from: Sheba on May 15, 2013, 02:13:36 AM

Wah,Wah,Wah Sheebji,Kya kahne.Aaj to aapne kamaal hi kar diya. Bahut khoobsurat ghazal kahi hai,Khayalaat bahut hi umda aur gahre hai,Really nice and heart touching. Aapki is ghazal me pure Urdu ke words use kiye gaye hai,Achha hota agar aap kuchh urdu words ke hindi me meaning bhi likh detin.Isse Aam logon ko aapki ghazal ko samjhne aur padne me aasaani ho jayegi aur aapki ghazal aam logon ki jubaan tak pahunchege. Ye mera sirf suggestion hai,ise otherwise na lijiyega. After all its a nice and heart touching ghazal.Aapko bahut-bahut badhai.


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Re: sharaayat..........sheba

«Reply #9 on: May 15, 2013, 01:47:12 PM »

Quote from: Sheba on May 15, 2013, 02:13:36 AM

ye shayeri hai ya urdu dictionery.

baad maikashi ke bhi peene ki ijaazat chaahi!
zahr se hum ne zindagi ki riyaayat chaahi!!

bohut achha likha hai..gehre ashaar kahe hai.
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rahul sengar

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Re: sharaayat..........sheba

«Reply #10 on: May 15, 2013, 01:59:56 PM »

bahut khoob


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Shireen Hakani

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«Reply #11 on: May 15, 2013, 03:26:40 PM »

To be honest...Mujhe itni pure urdu aati nahi hai...par jitna bhi samjhi bohat khub rahi..Sudhir jee ki baat sach hai...aam log itni khaalis urdu samajte nahi hai...

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Re: sharaayat..........sheba

«Reply #12 on: May 15, 2013, 04:01:08 PM »

Quote from: Sheba on May 15, 2013, 02:13:36 AM

Bahut Bahut Aur bahut Khoooooob Sheba Ji...

Samundar Ki gehrai hai iss Ghazal mein..

Bahut Hi gehre Aur Khoobsurat Khayaalat...

Meri Nazar Mein Har Ek Ashaar Ek Se badhkar Ek Hai....Just Awesome...


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«Reply #13 on: May 15, 2013, 04:24:57 PM »

Shebaa Sahibaa Aadaab...!

Kyaa baat hai jee waaH bahut khoob aur behad umdaa kalaam kahi hai aapne... Waqai kafi gehraai bhare ashaar bayaaN kiye haiN...

Is umdaa aur khoob kalaam par humari hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez...

Quote from: Sheba on May 15, 2013, 02:13:36 AM

kaise naadaan the ki lootne waalo.n se.
apne asmat ki bharsak hifaazat chaahi!

dast-e-sangtaraash ko chooom ne ki jagah.
ye kya jo patthero.n se nafaasat chaahi!

khudgarzi mein molawwis apni mohabbat aaj!
rishte mein sheba se sharaayat chaahi!!

Shebaa Sahibaa Yeh Ashaar behad laa jawaab huye haiN.... HazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...


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Re: sharaayat..........sheba

«Reply #14 on: May 15, 2013, 07:03:33 PM »

bemisaal beshumaar daad aur ek rau bhee


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