sharaayat..........sheba -Panna 2:Miscellaneous Shayri

Iftakhar Ahmad

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«Reply #15 on: May 15, 2013, 08:35:32 PM »

Sheba jee, matla kaa

Quote from: Sheba on May 15, 2013, 02:13:36 AM

baad maikashi ke bhi peene ki ijaazat chaahi!
zahr se hum ne zindagi ki riyaayat chaahi!!
Waah waah bahut khoob

kaise naadaan the ki lootne waalo.n se.
apne asmat ki bharsak hifaazat chaahi!

kar ke qata-talluk insaaniyat se hum ne.
zakeera-e-aslaah ki hi rafaaqat chaahi!
Mushkil alfaaz ki wajah se ye she'r samajh nahiN aaya
dast-e-sangtaraash ko chooom ne ki jagah.
ye kya jo patthero.n se nafaasat chaahi!
Iss she'r ka matlab samajh nahiN aaya, what do you want to say.

bache hue khandharo.n se shahr ke apne.
gawaah ki shakal mein hemaayat chaahi!
Same problem as above

khudgarzi mein molawwis apni mohabbat aaj!
rishte mein sheba se sharaayat chaahi!!

Same Problem

Sheba jee, agar aap mushkil alfaaz ke maane likh deiN to kaafi achha rahega, sabhi ke samajh meiN aaega.


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aqsh

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Re: sharaayat..........sheba

«Reply #16 on: May 15, 2013, 10:05:24 PM »

Bahut khoob sheba ji. dilse mubarakbad qubool kare.


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Intezar

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Re: sharaayat..........sheba

«Reply #17 on: May 16, 2013, 09:29:46 AM »

awesome peshkash Sheba ji... bahut khoob bahut khoobsurat,,

Intezar


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Re: sharaayat..........sheba

«Reply #18 on: May 19, 2013, 03:29:08 AM »

Quote from: Bhupinder Kaur on May 15, 2013, 02:33:37 AM

Awesome Sheba ji Clapping Smiley

shukria.......!


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Re: sharaayat..........sheba

«Reply #19 on: May 20, 2013, 02:36:04 AM »

Quote from: Advo.RavinderaRavi on May 15, 2013, 02:43:15 AM

Nice 1

shukria..........!


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ghayal_shayar

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Re: sharaayat..........sheba

«Reply #20 on: May 20, 2013, 02:43:58 AM »

in one word... brilliant.... daad aur ek rau qubool farmaaiye muhtarma.... :)har sher umda raha, par mujhe bache hue qandhaaron wala sher bahut umda laga, aur matla to haseen hai hi....!! likhti raheN, umeed karta hun aane wale waqt meN aapko aur padhne ka mauka yuNhi milta rahegaa...


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@Kaash

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Re: sharaayat..........sheba

«Reply #21 on: May 27, 2013, 01:10:51 PM »

waah,waah kya kahne mam!
ashaar bahut hi umda hain!
doosra sher bahut achha laga.
dheron daad!


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Re: sharaayat..........sheba

«Reply #22 on: May 31, 2013, 10:13:03 PM »

Quote from: RAJAN KONDAL on May 15, 2013, 02:44:55 AM

Beutiful lines

shukria.....!


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Re: sharaayat..........sheba

«Reply #23 on: June 03, 2013, 08:19:26 PM »

Quote from: laaiba on May 15, 2013, 04:00:03 AM

khaalis urdu ke lafzon mein goondh kar yeh ghazal laayi hain ap sheba ,........waah,....sab ki ghalon par aap khushgawar mazahiya coments detti hain ou.r aise gehre jazbat ALLAH ALLAH, kya kehne
doob gaye ji ham to in alfaaz ki fgahrayoion meiN,...yakeen maaniye bohat se logon ke sar ke ooper se aapki yeh nafees ghazal
chali jaayegi ,......bohat sanjeeda kalaam hai ou.r meree taraf se aik rau ke sath bohat c daad aapke iss taghazul ki nazar ,.......

thank you laaiba.......!


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Re: sharaayat..........sheba

«Reply #24 on: June 03, 2013, 08:47:54 PM »

Already every one praised it already, still I in one word..

Beautiful


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«Reply #25 on: June 08, 2013, 02:47:42 AM »

Quote from: mkv on May 15, 2013, 09:47:30 AM

dast-e-sangtaraash ko chooom ne ki jagah. ye kya jo patthero.n se nafaasat chaahi!

khudgarzi mein molawwis apni mohabbat aaj!
rishte mein sheba se sharaayat chaahi!!

Bahut khoob Sheba jee

shukria.....!


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«Reply #26 on: June 19, 2013, 08:54:53 PM »

Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on May 15, 2013, 11:26:28 AM

Khubsurat , taghazzul se labrez kalaam hai , sheba ji. Khas taur se matla , maqta aur laal sher bahut khub hain. bahut mubarakbaad aur 1 rau bhi pesh khidmat hai , duaaon ke sath.

shukria fazal sahab....!


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«Reply #27 on: July 05, 2013, 03:40:28 AM »

Quote from: Sudhir Ashq on May 15, 2013, 11:36:17 AM

Wah,Wah,Wah Sheebji,Kya kahne.Aaj to aapne kamaal hi kar diya. Bahut khoobsurat ghazal kahi hai,Khayalaat bahut hi umda aur gahre hai,Really nice and heart touching. Aapki is ghazal me pure Urdu ke words use kiye gaye hai,Achha hota agar aap kuchh urdu words ke hindi me meaning bhi likh detin.Isse Aam logon ko aapki ghazal ko samjhne aur padne me aasaani ho jayegi aur aapki ghazal aam logon ki jubaan tak pahunchege. Ye mera sirf suggestion hai,ise otherwise na lijiyega. After all its a nice and heart touching ghazal.Aapko bahut-bahut badhai.

shukria.....!


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«Reply #28 on: July 08, 2013, 03:28:26 AM »

Quote from: soudagar on May 15, 2013, 11:54:47 AM

shukria..............!


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Re: sharaayat..........sheba

«Reply #29 on: June 12, 2014, 08:22:32 PM »

Quote from: sahal on May 15, 2013, 01:47:12 PM

ye shayeri hai ya urdu dictionery.

baad maikashi ke bhi peene ki ijaazat chaahi!
zahr se hum ne zindagi ki riyaayat chaahi!!

bohut achha likha hai..gehre ashaar kahe hai.
Clapping Smiley

shukria !


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