SHAYAD (PART-2) !

by drpandey on March 23, 2010, 04:10:45 AM
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                 GHAZAL
Dil mein uthne lagi lahar shayad !
Usne phir rukh kiya idhar shayad !

Us taraf phir giri koi bijli,
Kar liya aashiya.n jidhar shayad !

Sabne puchha mera amal mujhse,
Jab kiya hamne rukh udhar shayad !

Aaj kaisa dhuvan sa faila hai,
Jal gaya phir koi shahar shayad !

Log kahtey hai bemisaal usey,
Aaina rakh diya idhar shayad !

Jab kiya vasl ka tere charcha,
Dil mera phir gaya sihar shayad !

Uski nazron ke har sukhan aise,
Teer aaya koi idhar shayad !

Ab 'Adab' ki bachi kahan khwahish,
Uski nazron ka hai asar shayad !

Dr HP Pandey
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«Reply #1 on: March 23, 2010, 04:25:18 AM »
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Yeh doosra bhaag bhi bahut umda hai Dr. Pandey Ji
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«Reply #2 on: March 23, 2010, 04:28:29 AM »
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Wah wah Pandey ji,bahut hi khoob.very beautiful gazal.mindblowing creation,aise hi likhte rahiyega.excellent Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Thumbs UP
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«Reply #3 on: March 23, 2010, 05:40:54 AM »
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Wah wah Pandey ji Part-I ki tarah ye bhi behtreen ghazal likhi hai aapne. Bahut asardaar, purkashish aur mehzooz karne wali creation hai ye. I congrat you.
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«Reply #4 on: March 23, 2010, 07:58:51 AM »
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Quote from: Rajesh Harish on March 23, 2010, 04:25:18 AM
Yeh doosra bhaag bhi bahut umda hai Dr. Pandey Ji
Dhanybaad Rajesh Harish ji, aapko ye ghazal pasand aai aur aapne meri himmat badhai..
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«Reply #5 on: March 23, 2010, 08:03:49 AM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on March 23, 2010, 04:28:29 AM
Wah wah Pandey ji,bahut hi khoob.very beautiful gazal.mindblowing creation,aise hi likhte rahiyega.excellent Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Thumbs UP
Madhu Ji aapka dher sara shukriya, aapki hausla afzai se mujhe himmat milti hai jo kuch likhwa dalti hai..
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«Reply #6 on: March 23, 2010, 08:10:35 AM »
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Quote from: riyaz106 on March 23, 2010, 05:40:54 AM
Wah wah Pandey ji Part-I ki tarah ye bhi behtreen ghazal likhi hai aapne. Bahut asardaar, purkashish aur mehzooz karne wali creation hai ye. I congrats you.
Riyaz Sahab many many thanks for congrats!!! Aapko mera salam...aapne part - 1 ki tarah ise bhi apni duvaon se nawaza..aapka behad shukrgujar hun..inayat bani rahey yahi khwahish hai..Bahut bahut shukriya.. 
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«Reply #7 on: March 23, 2010, 10:27:32 AM »
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«Reply #8 on: March 23, 2010, 10:36:00 AM »
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Quote from: thinkhattk on March 23, 2010, 10:27:32 AM
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Hausla afzai ka bahut bahut shukriya Thinkhattk Ji...
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«Reply #9 on: March 23, 2010, 12:51:02 PM »
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bahut acha likha hai Pandey ji
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«Reply #10 on: March 23, 2010, 12:56:41 PM »
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Quote from: spandana on March 23, 2010, 12:51:02 PM
bahut acha likha hai Pandey ji
Ghazal pasand farmaney ke liye shukriya aapka Spandana Ji....
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«Reply #11 on: March 23, 2010, 01:22:29 PM »
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Waah Waah Waah.. jitni tareef ki jaaye kam hogi.. Bahoot Bahoot Jordaar peshkash ki hai .. Part 2 bhi Bahoot Umda hai Dr. pandey  ji !
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«Reply #12 on: March 23, 2010, 01:44:01 PM »
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BAHUT KHOOB DRPANDEYJI. icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
JAB BADHAYA TERI GALI MEIN KADAM.
LIPAT GAI YHI KADAMON SE NAAGINE,BAN KE BEDIAN SHAYAD,

CHALA THA DO KADAM BAMUSHKIL .
AISA GIRA FATI ZAMEEN UTH NA AB KABHI SHAYAD.
Quote from: drpandey on March 23, 2010, 04:10:45 AM
                 GHAZAL
Dil mein uthne lagi lahar shayad !
Usne phir rukh kiya idhar shayad !

Us taraf phir giri koi bijli,
Kar liya aashiya.n jidhar shayad !

Sabne puchha mera amal mujhse,
Jab kiya hamne rukh udhar shayad !

Aaj kaisa dhuvan sa faila hai,
Jal gaya phir koi shahar shayad !

Log kahtey hai bemisaal usey,
Aaina rakh diya idhar shayad !

Jab kiya vasl ka tere charcha,
Dil mera phir gaya sihar shayad !

Uski nazron ke har sukhan aise,
Teer aaya koi idhar shayad !

Ab 'Adab' ki bachi kahan khwahish,
Uski nazron ka hai asar shayad !

Dr HP Pandey
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«Reply #13 on: March 23, 2010, 04:39:05 PM »
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Quote from: Sophi on March 23, 2010, 01:22:29 PM
Waah Waah Waah.. jitni tareef ki jaaye kam hogi.. Bahoot Bahoot Jordaar peshkash ki hai .. Part 2 bhi Bahoot Umda hai Dr. pandey  ji !
Sophi Ji, bahut bahut shukriya ki aapne ghazal ko samjha aur apne khubsoorat alfazon se meri himmat afzai ki..aapka behad shukrgujar hun.
 
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«Reply #14 on: March 23, 2010, 04:54:22 PM »
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Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on March 23, 2010, 01:44:01 PM
BAHUT KHOOB DRPANDEYJI. icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
JAB BADHAYA TERI GALI MEIN KADAM.
LIPAT GAI YHI KADAMON SE NAAGINE,BAN KE BEDIAN SHAYAD,

CHALA THA DO KADAM BAMUSHKIL .
AISA GIRA FATI ZAMEEN UTH NA AB KABHI SHAYAD.

Ghazal pasand farmaney ke liye shukriya aapka SURESH Ji..bahut khoob likha hai..

Ye raah hai 'Adab' ki chalna hai samhal kar,
Har baat bayaa.n kardo duniya ke amal par..!
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