--- shayad uljhi ho ---

by killbill on March 29, 2011, 05:42:10 AM
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dukti rag pe na hath rakh
jara smbhl
haule se tu
de jawab!

kya khub thi
wo waade
wafa ki kasme!

bhul gaye sb
ab krte ho
mujse hi
tum sawal!

kya sochte ho
kya he dil me
dekh,aankhe bhi he ab
ashqo se behaal!

bite dino ki bat thi
kuch pehle jesi
shyd uljhi ho ab b
hokr bekhayal!

krta tha kuch
besbra sa
us waqt
tera intezaar!!

ab kya he bata
dil  me tere
juda juda hokr yun na
muh mod!!

samjh le,tere gham se hi
gamgeen hu aaj bhi
dil khol jara
fir se bole
khud ko na
ab aur taul!!
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«Reply #1 on: March 29, 2011, 05:47:57 AM »
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kya baat hai kbji.... kamal hai aapki kavita... atisundar....

 Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: March 29, 2011, 05:53:55 AM »
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sukriya ji manju ji...
ye katvita hai aapse hi pta chala mujhe.
thanq ji
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«Reply #3 on: March 29, 2011, 06:04:56 AM »
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kbji likhne wala to dil se likhta hai islie uske lie har rachna dil ki baat hoti hai.... baki to baad ki baat hai ki kavita hai ya ghajal ya kuchh aur......
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«Reply #4 on: March 29, 2011, 06:09:47 AM »
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haanji ham apki bhari baato se sahmat hain ji
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«Reply #5 on: March 29, 2011, 12:25:33 PM »
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excellent work kb...
bht bht khoob...
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«Reply #6 on: March 29, 2011, 01:06:59 PM »
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Good try KB ji....ek alag prayog.... Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: March 29, 2011, 04:49:34 PM »
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Bahut Khub Kb JI
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«Reply #8 on: April 09, 2011, 11:30:49 AM »
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sukriya manzil ji…
aapne saraha dil ko acha laga
khus rahie
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«Reply #9 on: April 09, 2011, 11:34:38 AM »
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kukkoo ji…
aapka b bht saara sukriya…
mere kosis ko hausla dene ka bht saara swtkriya
khus rahiye
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«Reply #10 on: April 09, 2011, 11:37:31 AM »
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rishi ji…
apka poore dil se sujriya
aapki daad hausla badhayegi
khus rakiye
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