SHAYRI SUNAAYE JATA HOOHN[Asghr]

by Asghr on February 04, 2009, 04:59:02 PM
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HAR MEHFIL MAIN APNI SHAIRYI SUNAAYE JATA HOOHN
SAB ACHE LAUGOOHN KO DOST BNAAYE JATA HOON
AASTEEN MAIN KOI SAANP CHUPAA BAITHA NA HO
HAR PAL PYAR KI BEEN BAJAAYE JAATA HOON
DUNIYA BHAR K GHUM APNI JHOLI MAIN DAAL KAR
GHUM MUJE AUR MAIN GHUMOOHN KO KHAAYE JATA HOON
WO MUJH SE BAAT NAHIN KARTA TAU KYA
MAIN UHS KI BATOOHN MAIN TAANG UDAAYE JATA HOOHN
MERI AWAZ SUNTE HE WO PHONE PATKH DAITA HAI
HIMMAT NA HARTE HUE NUMBER MILAAYE JATA HOOHN
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«Reply #1 on: February 04, 2009, 05:22:54 PM »
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BOhat Achche Bhai, Subhan Allah, Subhan Allah,.

May Allah Bless You, Isi Tarah Likhaa Karein,.

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«Reply #2 on: February 04, 2009, 08:29:19 PM »
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Allah aap ko sdaa slaamat rakhe jo pyari duaain daite hain.asghr
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«Reply #3 on: February 04, 2009, 08:30:51 PM »
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HAR MEHFIL MAIN APNI SHAIRYI SUNAAYE JATA HOOHN
SAB ACHE LAUGOOHN KO DOST BNAAYE JATA HOON
AASTEEN MAIN KOI SAANP CHUPAA BAITHA NA HO
HAR PAL PYAR KI BEEN BAJAAYE JAATA HOON
DUNIYA BHAR K GHUM APNI JHOLI MAIN DAAL KAR
GHUM MUJE AUR MAIN GHUMOOHN KO KHAAYE JATA HOON
WO MUJH SE BAAT NAHIN KARTA TAU KYA
MAIN UHS KI BATOOHN MAIN TAANG UDAAYE JATA HOOHN
MERI AWAZ SUNTE HE WO PHONE PATKH DAITA HAI
HIMMAT NA HARTE HUE NUMBER MILAAYE JATA HOOHN


Bohot achcha likha hai aapne Asghr Ji
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«Reply #4 on: February 04, 2009, 09:09:47 PM »
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HAR MEHFIL MAIN APNI SHAIRYI SUNAAYE JATA HOOHN
SAB ACHE LAUGOOHN KO DOST BNAAYE JATA HOON
AASTEEN MAIN KOI SAANP CHUPAA BAITHA NA HO
HAR PAL PYAR KI BEEN BAJAAYE JAATA HOON
DUNIYA BHAR K GHUM APNI JHOLI MAIN DAAL KAR
GHUM MUJE AUR MAIN GHUMOOHN KO KHAAYE JATA HOON
WO MUJH SE BAAT NAHIN KARTA TAU KYA
MAIN UHS KI BATOOHN MAIN TAANG UDAAYE JATA HOOHN
MERI AWAZ SUNTE HE WO PHONE PATKH DAITA HAI
HIMMAT NA HARTE HUE NUMBER MILAAYE JATA HOOHN


 Applause Applause Applause Applause

Asghar ji, apki kalam ki khoobi yah hai ki wo bahoot suchi hoti hai... ek ek shabd simple magar khud main gahra arth liye hue... apni zindagi main hua sa parteet hota hai....

jahan apki yah line bilkul haqiqat se lagti hai... aor dil ke dard ko bayan karti hai...

AASTEEN MAIN KOI SAANP CHUPAA BAITHA NA HO
HAR PAL PYAR KI BEEN BAJAAYE JAATA HOON


wahi yah lines haqiqat batate hue bhi, lubo per ek muskaan le atti hai, dard in lines main bhi bahoot hai... magar itna app beeti hai ki dil kahta hai tu he nahi aor bhi aise deewane bahoot hai... bas yahi soch muskaan le aai

MERI AWAZ SUNTE HE WO PHONE PATKH DAITA HAI
HIMMAT NA HARTE HUE NUMBER MILAAYE JATA HOOHN


 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley bahoot khoob....
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«Reply #5 on: February 05, 2009, 07:35:17 AM »
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HAR MEHFIL MAIN APNI SHAIRYI SUNAAYE JATA HOOHN
SAB ACHE LAUGOOHN KO DOST BNAAYE JATA HOON
AASTEEN MAIN KOI SAANP CHUPAA BAITHA NA HO
HAR PAL PYAR KI BEEN BAJAAYE JAATA HOON
DUNIYA BHAR K GHUM APNI JHOLI MAIN DAAL KAR
GHUM MUJE AUR MAIN GHUMOOHN KO KHAAYE JATA HOON
WO MUJH SE BAAT NAHIN KARTA TAU KYA
MAIN UHS KI BATOOHN MAIN TAANG UDAAYE JATA HOOHN
MERI AWAZ SUNTE HE WO PHONE PATKH DAITA HAI
HIMMAT NA HARTE HUE NUMBER MILAAYE JATA HOOHN


Bahoth bahoth qoob ashgar sahab meri nazar me tum achi shayari ka zaqira ho janab !! bahoth uper jao ge tum eak din janab app!! allah tumhe khush rakhe !! aur tumhare kalamo ko miyari izzath bakshe !! Ameen

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«Reply #6 on: February 05, 2009, 12:52:49 PM »
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aap laug khud baut pyare hain iss liye aap ko har cheez achi nazar aahti hai,sdaa khush rehain.asghr icon_salut icon_salut icon_salut
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«Reply #7 on: February 05, 2009, 12:55:39 PM »
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Bahoth bahoth qoob ashgar sahab meri nazar me tum achi shayari ka zaqira ho janab !! bahoth uper jao ge tum eak din janab app!! allah tumhe khush rakhe !! aur tumhare kalamo ko miyari izzath bakshe !! Ameen

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Qadeer bhai Khuda aap ko khush rakhe bhai jaan yeh aap ka pyar hai verna main kuch nahin.asghr icon_salut icon_salut
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«Reply #8 on: February 05, 2009, 01:09:16 PM »
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AAP SHAIRYI SUNAAYE JATE HAIN....
HUM TAALI BAJAAYE JAATE HAIN.... Applause Applause Applause

Asghrji bahut achha likha hai....
"AASTEEN MAIN KOI SAANP CHUPAA BAITHA NA HO
HAR PAL PYAR KI BEEN BAJAAYE JAATA HOON"...
Aapki rashi tou Azgar se milti hai Saanp se kya darr...
HAR MEHFIL MAIN APNI SHAIRYI SUNAAYE JATA HOOHN
SAB ACHE LAUGOOHN KO DOST BNAAYE JATA HOON
AASTEEN MAIN KOI SAANP CHUPAA BAITHA NA HO
HAR PAL PYAR KI BEEN BAJAAYE JAATA HOON
DUNIYA BHAR K GHUM APNI JHOLI MAIN DAAL KAR
GHUM MUJE AUR MAIN GHUMOOHN KO KHAAYE JATA HOON
WO MUJH SE BAAT NAHIN KARTA TAU KYA
MAIN UHS KI BATOOHN MAIN TAANG UDAAYE JATA HOOHN
MERI AWAZ SUNTE HE WO PHONE PATKH DAITA HAI
HIMMAT NA HARTE HUE NUMBER MILAAYE JATA HOOHN

Applause
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«Reply #9 on: February 05, 2009, 01:34:54 PM »
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asgr ji apne ye kalam likh kuch ies tarah dill ko chuu liya shayad aap samajh sakte ho. aisa hi hota hai.

na toh haan hoti hai unse na toh mana kar paye mujhe
jab bhi milti hai kahin rahon ek jhalk muskura kar tarhpati hai mujhe.
karta hun phone toh kahti hai baad main karna phone yun hi bas har waqt kaate jaati hai mujhe.
uljhan main hun aaj tak ki kya dil main uske kabhi salike ki baat batati mujhe. 
HAR MEHFIL MAIN APNI SHAIRYI SUNAAYE JATA HOOHN
SAB ACHE LAUGOOHN KO DOST BNAAYE JATA HOON
AASTEEN MAIN KOI SAANP CHUPAA BAITHA NA HO
HAR PAL PYAR KI BEEN BAJAAYE JAATA HOON
DUNIYA BHAR K GHUM APNI JHOLI MAIN DAAL KAR
GHUM MUJE AUR MAIN GHUMOOHN KO KHAAYE JATA HOON
WO MUJH SE BAAT NAHIN KARTA TAU KYA
MAIN UHS KI BATOOHN MAIN TAANG UDAAYE JATA HOOHN
MERI AWAZ SUNTE HE WO PHONE PATKH DAITA HAI
HIMMAT NA HARTE HUE NUMBER MILAAYE JATA HOOHN

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«Reply #10 on: February 05, 2009, 02:08:37 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause

Asghar ji, apki kalam ki khoobi yah hai ki wo bahoot suchi hoti hai... ek ek shabd simple magar khud main gahra arth liye hue... apni zindagi main hua sa parteet hota hai....

jahan apki yah line bilkul haqiqat se lagti hai... aor dil ke dard ko bayan karti hai...

AASTEEN MAIN KOI SAANP CHUPAA BAITHA NA HO
HAR PAL PYAR KI BEEN BAJAAYE JAATA HOON


wahi yah lines haqiqat batate hue bhi, lubo per ek muskaan le atti hai, dard in lines main bhi bahoot hai... magar itna app beeti hai ki dil kahta hai tu he nahi aor bhi aise deewane bahoot hai... bas yahi soch muskaan le aai

MERI AWAZ SUNTE HE WO PHONE PATKH DAITA HAI
HIMMAT NA HARTE HUE NUMBER MILAAYE JATA HOOHN


 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley bahoot khoob....

Pooja ji welcome aap ko baut miss kiya aak liye duaain hain, aur hosla afzai ka shukriya.asghr icon_salut icon_salut icon_salut
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«Reply #11 on: February 05, 2009, 02:13:28 PM »
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Bohot achcha likha hai aapne Asghr Ji
thanks!sdaa khush rehain.asghr icon_salut icon_salut icon_salut
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«Reply #12 on: February 05, 2009, 02:15:32 PM »
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asgr ji apne ye kalam likh kuch ies tarah dill ko chuu liya shayad aap samajh sakte ho. aisa hi hota hai.

na toh haan hoti hai unse na toh mana kar paye mujhe
jab bhi milti hai kahin rahon ek jhalk muskura kar tarhpati hai mujhe.
karta hun phone toh kahti hai baad main karna phone yun hi bas har waqt kaate jaati hai mujhe.
uljhan main hun aaj tak ki kya dil main uske kabhi salike ki baat batati mujhe. 
thanks God bless u.asghr
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«Reply #13 on: February 05, 2009, 02:17:12 PM »
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asgr ji apne ye kalam likh kuch ies tarah dill ko chuu liya shayad aap samajh sakte ho. aisa hi hota hai.

na toh haan hoti hai unse na toh mana kar paye mujhe
jab bhi milti hai kahin rahon ek jhalk muskura kar tarhpati hai mujhe.
karta hun phone toh kahti hai baad main karna phone yun hi bas har waqt kaate jaati hai mujhe.
uljhan main hun aaj tak ki kya dil main uske kabhi salike ki baat batati mujhe. 
thanks,sdaa khush rehain.asghr
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«Reply #14 on: February 05, 2009, 02:18:46 PM »
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thanks! sdaa khush rehain.asghr
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