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divyam
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sher ka jawaab sher se.......
naam se hi aap samjh gaye honge ki kyaa karna hai......
aise threads say hame kaafi kuchh seekhne ko milta hai.. Sher kisii ka bhii ho sakta may be your own or borrowed..
bas she'r likhte vaqt is baat ka khayaal rakha jaaye ke javaaban jo she'r likha jaa rahaa hai, us ka koi na koi rabt pichle she'r se hona chaahiye..Shukryah!
to chaliye meiN hi Shuruaat karta huuN:
ibtidaa-e-ishq hai rotaa hai kyaa
aage aage dekhiye hotaa hai kyaa
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«Reply #1 on: April 07, 2009, 06:39:43 AM » |
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Hota hai kya zindagi me apni marzi se,
Raza-e-khuda se hi har banda jee raha hai.
Shally.
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«Reply #2 on: April 07, 2009, 06:59:44 AM » |
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Hota hai kya zindagi me apni marzi se,
Raza-e-khuda se hi har banda jee raha hai.
Shally.
Khudaa ke vaaste ab beruKhii se kaam na le ta.Dap ke phir koii daaman ko tere thaam na le [nm] |
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«Reply #3 on: April 07, 2009, 07:11:43 AM » |
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Khudaa ke vaaste ab beruKhii se kaam na le
ta.Dap ke phir koii daaman ko tere thaam na le
[nm]
Daman me Shally ke aab bacha hi kya hai, Aankhon me aansoo ke siwa raha hi kya hai. Shally. |
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«Reply #4 on: April 07, 2009, 07:21:49 AM » |
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Daman me Shally ke aab bacha hi kya hai,
Aankhon me aansoo ke siwa raha hi kya hai.
Shally.
Daman me Shally ke aab bacha hi kya hai,
Aankhon me aansoo ke siwa raha hi kya hai.
Shally.
Khataavaar samajhegii duniyaa tujhe ab itanii bhii zyaadaa safaa_ii na de [nm] |
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«Reply #5 on: April 07, 2009, 08:37:17 AM » |
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Khataavaar samajhegii duniyaa tujhe
ab itanii bhii zyaadaa safaa_ii na de
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Khatawar to hoon mein tujhse mohabbat ki hai, Teri marzi ke bina Shally ne teri ibadatt ki hai. Shally. |
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«Reply #6 on: April 07, 2009, 08:48:11 AM » |
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MOHABBAT KOH HUM BHI DIL SEY LAGAYE RAKHTEY HAI
AAKHOH KEY RASTEY HUM TUMHEY DIL MEH BASAYE RAKHTEY HAI
JASBIR SINGH
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«Reply #7 on: April 07, 2009, 08:54:07 AM » |
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MOHABBAT KOH HUM BHI DIL SEY LAGAYE RAKHTEY HAI
AAKHOH KEY RASTEY HUM TUMHEY DIL MEH BASAYE RAKHTEY HAI
JASBIR SINGH
Rakhtey hai aaj bhi unhe dil ke bahut kareeb, Jinhone Shally ko khawabo tak me jagah na di. Shally. |
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«Reply #8 on: April 07, 2009, 09:03:48 AM » |
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Rakhtey hai aaj bhi unhe dil ke bahut kareeb,
Jinhone Shally ko khawabo tak me jagah na di.
Shally.
har roz mujh se taazaah shikaayat hai aap ko mai.n kyaa huu.N ek baar bataa diijiye mujhe (NM) |
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«Reply #9 on: April 07, 2009, 09:19:45 AM » |
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har roz mujh se taazaah shikaayat hai aap ko
mai.n kyaa huu.N ek baar bataa diijiye mujhe
(NM)
bata dijiye mujhe ye aapko hua kya hai, Saath rehke bhi khush nahi door jaane se bhi gila hai. Shally. |
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«Reply #10 on: April 07, 2009, 09:31:24 AM » |
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AFSANA JINDAGI KA ABB YEH BAN GAYA HAI
SAYA BHI HUMSEY NA JANEY KU ROOTH GAYA HAI
JASBIR SINGH
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«Reply #11 on: April 07, 2009, 09:45:12 AM » |
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AFSANA JINDAGI KA ABB YEH BAN GAYA HAI
SAYA BHI HUMSEY NA JANEY KU ROOTH GAYA HAI
JASBIR SINGH
Koi rootha iss kadar hamse ki, Jaan dekar bhi ham use mana na paaye. Shally. |
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«Reply #12 on: April 07, 2009, 09:50:08 AM » |
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JAAN DENEY KI BAAT HAR KOI KAR JATA HAI
HAMEY MANAKAR WOH FIR SEY ROOTH JATA HAI
JASBIR SINGH
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«Reply #13 on: April 07, 2009, 09:51:30 AM » |
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Koi rootha iss kadar hamse ki,
Jaan dekar bhi ham use mana na paaye.
Shally.
Chod gaya woh tanha kuch aise ki
chah kar bhi use paas bula na paaye
Mohabbat to use bhi thi mujhe lekin
dil ke jazbaat zubaan par na aa paaye |
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«Reply #14 on: April 07, 2009, 09:54:03 AM » |
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JAAN DENEY KI BAAT HAR KOI KAR JATA HAI
HAMEY MANAKAR WOH FIR SEY ROOTH JATA HAI
JASBIR SINGH
Mundi hui palkon mein deedar de jaata hai aur
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