Shhhhh.....khamoshi

by ambalika sharma on January 29, 2013, 06:16:19 AM
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Kaise bayan karu hal-e-dil,kuch baatein najaro se hoti hai.                                                                                                            Har waqt lab bole jaruri nhi,kabhi kabhi palko mein juban hoti hai.                                                                        Khamosh rehkar bhi baatein ho jati hai,kabhi kabhi aawaz dhadkano me hoti hai.                                                                       Har pal dard dikhaya nhi jata,kabhi kabhi aansuo se dard ki pehchan hoti hai.                                                                           Kuch baatein kahi nhi jati,kabhi kabhi ehsas juban hoti hai.
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«Reply #1 on: January 29, 2013, 07:19:53 AM »
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nice g
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«Reply #2 on: January 29, 2013, 07:57:30 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause

Presentation agar thoda clear ho ho padne mein aasani rahegi. Aap line wise post kariye na?

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«Reply #3 on: January 29, 2013, 08:36:32 AM »
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ambika aapne bohut achcha likha hai but thoda clear aur line wise likhne ki koshish karen to padhne me zyada maza aayega .


Kaise bayan karu hal-e-dil,kuch baatein najaro se hoti hai,

Har waqt lab bole jaruri nhi,kabhi kabhi palko mein juban hoti hai,

Khamosh rehkar bhi baatein ho jati hai,

kabhi kabhi aawaz dhadkano me hoti hai.

is tarha likheNgi to achcha rahega....

and welcome to yoindia.......





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«Reply #4 on: January 29, 2013, 08:58:27 AM »
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very nice
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«Reply #5 on: January 29, 2013, 09:06:49 AM »
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good
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«Reply #6 on: January 30, 2013, 05:55:38 PM »
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Very nice Applause
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«Reply #7 on: January 30, 2013, 06:46:46 PM »
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good 1,..................
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«Reply #8 on: January 31, 2013, 05:02:51 AM »
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Kaise bayan karu hal-e-dil,kuch baatein najaro se hoti hai.                                                                                                            Har waqt lab bole jaruri nhi,kabhi kabhi palko mein juban hoti hai.                                                                        Khamosh rehkar bhi baatein ho jati hai,kabhi kabhi aawaz dhadkano me hoti hai.                                                                       Har pal dard dikhaya nhi jata,kabhi kabhi aansuo se dard ki pehchan hoti hai.                                                                           Kuch baatein kahi nhi jati,kabhi kabhi ehsas juban hoti hai.
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