@shohrat#sheba

by Sheba on November 20, 2013, 06:44:42 AM
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                  baat  zaroorat ki chali  phir  izzat  kaun dekhe hai!
                  ghareeb  maa  ke  chehre  ki  zahmat kaun dekhe hai!!


                  hai  emaarat  ke  baashindo.n   ko  pyaar    oochaai se.
                  sakht  dopahri   ,mazdoor  ki  mehnat   kaun dekhe hai!


                      anaadi     hi   sahi , hai   shahr   qaazi   ka   betaa.
                 rahi  pahchaan  shakhsiyat ki, zehaanat kaun dekhe hai.


                      main  ghalib,    tu   faraaz,  wo   mir  samjhe   hai .
                 ab   kis   ke   ghazal  ki  shohrat   kaun  dekhe  hai!  


                machi  chaar-su   haay-haay  uski   khaali  sandook  pe.
                 bhalaa   apne   paas   ki    nemat  kaun   dekhe    hai!  


                 hona   qatl   bhi   manzoor ab  uske  haantho.n  hamein!
                 andhi   mohabbat mein  sheba  adaawat  kaun  dekhe hai!!
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«Reply #1 on: November 20, 2013, 09:41:17 AM »
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waah waah bahut khoob
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«Reply #2 on: November 20, 2013, 10:54:27 AM »
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main  ghalib,    tu   faraaz,  wo   mir  samjhe   hai .
ab   kis   ke   ghazal  ki  shohrat   kaun  dekhe  hai!  


machi  chaar-su   haay-haay  uski   khaali  sandook  pe.
bhalaa   apne   paas   ki    nemat  kaun   dekhe    hai!  


hona   qatl   bhi   manzoor ab  uske  haantho.n  hamein!
andhi   mohabbat mein  sheba  adaawat  kaun  dekhe hai!!

Bahut umdah khayalaat lekar aayee hai aap Sheba jee.
shayad aaj aisi hi ghazlon ki zaroorat hai..
aapki kalaam me shokhi, nazakat, sannzeedgi muhabbat sab kuch rahta hai par sab ekdam balanced..
daad deni hogi aapko..

jab aapki zeb khali hoti hai..ya bhari bhi ho aur aap kuch kharch na karna chaahe to ek laalchi ki nazar badal jaati hai..
 
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«Reply #3 on: November 20, 2013, 11:01:06 AM »
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Aap ka andaaz kafi alag ar kitna achha hai gaane shayari baki sab main jaadu sa hi karte honge  aap......


mere ko bhi kuchh tips dijiye na......
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«Reply #4 on: November 20, 2013, 01:27:54 PM »
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waah waah , bahut bahut khoob ... Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: November 20, 2013, 01:34:52 PM »
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Quote from: Sheba on November 20, 2013, 06:44:42 AM


                  baat  zaroorat ki chali  phir  izzat  kaun dekhe hai!
                  ghareeb  maa  ke  chehre  ki  zahmat kaun dekhe hai!!


                  hai  emaarat  ke  baadindo.n   ko  pyaar    oochaai se.
                  sakht  dopahri   ,mazdoor  ki  mehnat   kaun dekhe hai!


                      anaadi     hi   sahi , hai   shahr   qaazi   ka   betaa.
                 rahi  pahchaan  shakhsiyat ki, zehaanat kaun dekhe hai.


                      main  ghalib,    tu   faraaz,  wo   mir  samjhe   hai .
                 ab   kis   ke   ghazal  ki  shohrat   kaun  dekhe  hai! 


                 machi  chaar-su   haay-haay  uski   khaali  sandook  pe.
                 bhalaa   apne   paas   ki    nemat  kaun   dekhe    hai!   


                 hona   qatl   bhi   manzoor ab  uske  haantho.n  hamein!
                 andhi   mohabbat mein  sheba  adaawat  kaun  dekhe hai!!
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Waaaaaaaaaaaah sheba ji har sher lajawab raha.. is kalaam par waaaaaaaaaaaah aur sirf waaaaaaaaaaaaaah hi nikal rahi...ek rau ke saath dheron dheron daaaaaaad.....
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«Reply #6 on: November 20, 2013, 01:43:53 PM »
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Is Baar Aapki Kheenchaai Nahi Karunga Sheba Jee
Kyon Ki Badi Sazeenda Aur Sochne Par Majboor Kar
Dene Waali Baaten Likhin Hai Aapne...so Seedhi Baat
No Bakwaash ...Mujhey Yeh Ashaar Behad Hi Pasand
Aaye.Waise To Rau Ka Len Den Main Nahi Karta Tha
Na Hi Mujhey Pasand Tha. Par Aajse Lagta Hai Shuru
Karna Parhega Aapko Ek Rau Deke...Aapke In Khubsoorat
Ashaar Pe Dil Se Rau Aur Dad Kabul Karen Jee...
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Baat zaroorat ki chali phir izzat kaun dekhe hai!
ghareeb maa ke chehre ki zahmat kaun dekhe hai!!

hai emaarat ke baadindo.n ko pyaar oochaai se.
sakht dopahri ,mazdoor ki mehnat kaun dekhe hai!

main ghalib, tu faraaz, wo mir samjhe hai .
ab kis ke ghazal ki shohrat kaun dekhe hai!

machi chaar-su haay-haay uski khaali sandook pe.
bhalaa apne paas ki nemat kaun dekhe hai


Shad o Aabaad Rahiye


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«Reply #7 on: November 20, 2013, 02:52:27 PM »
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Wah,Wah,Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah Sheebaji,
Bahut khoobsurat ghazal kahi hai aapne.Really nice.Mujhe Bahut pasand aayee.
Meri dili mubarakbaad qabool kijiye.
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«Reply #8 on: November 20, 2013, 03:04:55 PM »
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waah waah bohut khoob sheba ji ,,

lekin ye Qaazi ka beta hai kaun akhir  Shocked Even More

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«Reply #9 on: November 20, 2013, 06:40:11 PM »
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 machi  chaar-su   haay-haay  uski   khaali  sandook  pe.
                 bhalaa   apne   paas   ki    nemat  kaun   dekhe    hai!   


                 hona   qatl   bhi   manzoor ab  uske  haantho.n  hamein!
                 andhi   mohabbat mein  sheba  adaawat  kaun  dekhe hai!!
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excellent sheba ji keep it up..
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«Reply #10 on: November 20, 2013, 07:30:28 PM »
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wah wah
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«Reply #11 on: November 20, 2013, 08:11:28 PM »
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«Reply #12 on: November 21, 2013, 10:54:54 AM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on November 20, 2013, 09:41:17 AM
waah waah bahut khoob


shukria dr ji icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!
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«Reply #13 on: November 21, 2013, 08:20:29 PM »
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waah waah......

 bahut bahut aur bahut khooooooooob sheba ji.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #14 on: November 22, 2013, 02:19:03 AM »
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                  hai  emaarat  ke  baashindo.n   ko  pyaar    oochaai se.
                  sakht  dopahri   ,mazdoor  ki  mehnat   kaun dekhe hai!

                 anaadi     hi   sahi , hai   shahr   qaazi   ka   betaa.
                 rahi  pahchaan  shakhsiyat ki, zehaanat kaun dekhe hai

                 machi  chaar-su   haay-haay  uski   khaali  sandook  pe.
                 bhalaa   apne   paas   ki    nemat  kaun   dekhe    hai!   

Waah ... Bahaut achchhee ghazal rahi Sheba ji .... Ye waale aashaar khaas taur se achchhe lage ...
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