SHOKHH ADAA JUDAA JUDAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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                    nihaayat  hee shareef hona uska.
                    vajah  ye ke  ghareeb hona uska.

                    lagaa  de  aag  paanee me.N voh.
                    adaa-e-husn   ajeeb  hona  uska.

                    bann kar  dost diye aansoo usne.
                    acha   hai  raqeeb   hona  uska.

                    tabdilee  'sone' ko mittee kare.
                    ke  aisa  hai  naseeb hona uska.

                    hotee rahee door khushee  mujhse.
                    jo zindagee me.N habeeb hona uska.

                    rahe  naraaz maraz-o-davaa sabhee.
                    ke  anjaane me.N tabeeb hona uska.

                    neend  aatee  nahin  qalb aaj-kal ke.
                    khavaab me.N mere qareeb hona uska.

                    
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«Reply #1 on: March 08, 2014, 03:39:27 PM »
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waaah bohu khub likha hai aapne bohut umda
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«Reply #2 on: March 08, 2014, 03:41:38 PM »
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waah waah bahut khoob magar RAU udhaar aaj raat tak
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«Reply #3 on: March 08, 2014, 03:56:55 PM »
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bann kar  dost diye aansoo usne.
                    acha   hai  raqeeb   hona  uska.

                    tabdilee  'sone' ko mittee kare.
                    ke  aisa  hai  naseeb hona uska.

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bahut khoob qalb ji
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«Reply #4 on: March 08, 2014, 04:13:19 PM »
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Quote from: qalb on March 08, 2014, 03:37:03 PM


                    nihaayat  hee shareef hona uska.
                    vajah  ye ke  ghareeb hona uska.

                    lagaa  de  aag  paanee me.N voh.
                    adaa-e-husn   ajeeb  hona  uska.

                    bann kar  dost diye aansoo usne.
                    acha   hai  raqeeb   hona  uska.

                    tabdilee  'sone' ko mittee kare.
                    ke  aisa  hai  naseeb hona uska.

                    hotee rahee door khushee  mujhse.
                    jo zindagee me.N habeeb hona uska.

                    rahe  naraaz maraz-o-davaa sabhee.
                    ke  anjaane me.N tabeeb hona uska.

                    neend  aatee  nahin  qalb aal-kal.
                    khavaab me.N mere qareeb hona uska.

                   


Bahut Bahut Khoooob Qalb jee...

Kya Kehne...

nihaayat  hee shareef hona uska.
                    vajah  ye ke  ghareeb hona uska.


bann kar  dost diye aansoo usne.
                    acha   hai  raqeeb   hona  uska.

                    tabdilee  'sone' ko mittee kare.
                    ke  aisa  hai  naseeb hona uska.

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«Reply #5 on: March 08, 2014, 04:14:17 PM »
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Qalb Sahab Aadaab...!

Bahut khoob janab bahut khoob... bade umdaa khayaaloN ko khoob lafzoN meiN baNdha hai aapne..

Achchi kalaam huyi hai... Hume yeh quoted Ashaar behad khoob lage...
Is khoob kalaam par humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhte rahiye... Bazm ko roshan karte rahiye...
Shaad O Aabaad rahiye...

Khuda HHafez...



Quote from: qalb on March 08, 2014, 03:37:03 PM


                    nihaayat  hee shareef hona uska.
                    vajah  ye ke  ghareeb hona uska.


                    bann kar  dost diye aansoo usne.
                    acha   hai  raqeeb   hona  uska.

                    neend  aatee  nahin  qalb aaj-kal.
                    khavaab me.N mere qareeb hona uska.

                   
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«Reply #6 on: March 08, 2014, 04:37:57 PM »
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bahut khoob , hamesha ki tarah ek alag rang .
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«Reply #7 on: March 08, 2014, 04:43:00 PM »
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Quote from: qalb on March 08, 2014, 03:37:03 PM


                    nihaayat  hee shareef hona uska.
                    vajah  ye ke  ghareeb hona uska.

                    lagaa  de  aag  paanee me.N voh.
                    adaa-e-husn   ajeeb  hona  uska.

                    bann kar  dost diye aansoo usne.
                    acha   hai  raqeeb   hona  uska.

                    tabdilee  'sone' ko mittee kare.
                    ke  aisa  hai  naseeb hona uska.

                    hotee rahee door khushee  mujhse.
                    jo zindagee me.N habeeb hona uska.

                    rahe  naraaz maraz-o-davaa sabhee.
                    ke  anjaane me.N tabeeb hona uska.

                    neend  aatee  nahin  qalb aaj-kal ke.
                    khavaab me.N mere qareeb hona uska.

                   
Bahut khoob Qalb ji.!!
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«Reply #8 on: March 08, 2014, 04:43:41 PM »
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wah wah, dhero daad
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«Reply #9 on: March 08, 2014, 06:21:01 PM »
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वाह....वाह...एक बेहतरीन ग़ज़ल....ढेरों दाद और तहे दिल से मुबारकबाद....

  neend  aatee  nahin  qalb aaj-kal ke.
                    khavaab me.N mere qareeb hona uska.

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qalb boss hamesa ki tarah aapki yeh rachna bhi padhne mein alag hi mazaa aanand derahi hai lajawab peshkash ....hazaron daad o mubarkbaad.. with one rau

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«Reply #12 on: March 09, 2014, 01:33:48 AM »
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nihaayat  hee shareef hona uska.
                    vajah  ye ke  ghareeb hona uska.
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                    lagaa  de  aag  paanee me.N voh.
                    adaa-e-husn   ajeeb  hona  uska.
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                    bann kar  dost diye aansoo usne.
                    acha   hai  raqeeb   hona  uska.
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                    tabdilee  'sone' ko mittee kare.
                    ke  aisa  hai  naseeb hona uska.
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                    hotee rahee door khushee  mujhse.
                    jo zindagee me.N habeeb hona uska.
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                    rahe  naraaz maraz-o-davaa sabhee.
                    ke  anjaane me.N tabeeb hona uska.
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                    neend  aatee  nahin  qalb aal-kal.
                    khavaab me.N mere qareeb hona uska.
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wah wah wah bohut hi umda peshkash qalb sir ji waaaaaaahhhhhhhh
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waaah bohu khub likha hai aapne bohut umda


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waah waah bahut khoob magar RAU udhaar aaj raat tak


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