shradhaanjali

by thycreator on September 16, 2009, 08:40:26 PM
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Man hua toh likh diya.....har uss shakhs ke liye, jisne shabdon se aaina dikhane ki kala ko saakar kiya hai



‘Ghalib’ ke shabdon pe hum toh marte hain,
‘Mir’ ke ghazalon mein jeewan ye basar karte hain.

Dhoond lete hai khushiyan ‘Gulzar’ ke dum pe,
Apne raaton ko roshini e ‘Badar’ karte hain.

Kabhi har jaate hai dil apna ‘Amir Khusro’ par,
Phir bhi sabke liye rukhsar e ‘Zafar’ karte hain,

Dekh li kabhi dunia ‘Jigar’ ke chashme se,
Kabhi ‘Firaaq’ ko samajh ye nazar karte hain.

Hue hain aur sukhanwar bahut se dunia mein,
Jinke sajde mein hum apna sar karte hain.

Mere maula shukra hai tera tahe dil se,
Humne jana hai shabd kitna asar karte hain.
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Pooja
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«Reply #1 on: September 16, 2009, 09:12:06 PM »
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Quote from: thycreator on September 16, 2009, 08:40:26 PM
Man hua toh likh diya.....har uss shakhs ke liye, jisne shabdon se aaina dikhane ki kala ko saakar kiya hai



‘Ghalib’ ke shabdon pe hum toh marte hain,
‘Mir’ ke ghazalon mein jeewan ye basar karte hain.

Dhoond lete hai khushiyan ‘Gulzar’ ke dum pe,
Apne raaton ko roshini e ‘Badar’ karte hain.

Kabhi har jaate hai dil apna ‘Amir Khusro’ par,
Phir bhi sabke liye rukhsar e ‘Zafar’ karte hain,

Dekh li kabhi dunia ‘Jigar’ ke chashme se,
Kabhi ‘Firaaq’ ko samajh ye nazar karte hain.

Hue hain aur sukhanwar bahut se dunia mein,
Jinke sajde mein hum apna sar karte hain.

Mere maula shukra hai tera tahe dil se,
Humne jana hai shabd kitna asar karte hain.




 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Hum to wah wah wah bas apki najar karte hai
Likhi kaya kamaal ki kavita, such kaha shabd kitna asar karte hai!!!
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«Reply #2 on: September 17, 2009, 02:12:23 AM »
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Wah wah bahut khoob Creator ji wonderful creation.excellent Thumbs UP Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #3 on: September 17, 2009, 02:14:28 AM »
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Wow.. Kya baat hai Amit ji.. Bahoot bahoot Khoob .. Kya kahiye !!
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Roja
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«Reply #4 on: September 17, 2009, 02:47:23 AM »
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Quote from: thycreator on September 16, 2009, 08:40:26 PM
Man hua toh likh diya.....har uss shakhs ke liye, jisne shabdon se aaina dikhane ki kala ko saakar kiya hai



‘Ghalib’ ke shabdon pe hum toh marte hain,
‘Mir’ ke ghazalon mein jeewan ye basar karte hain.

Dhoond lete hai khushiyan ‘Gulzar’ ke dum pe,
Apne raaton ko roshini e ‘Badar’ karte hain.

Kabhi har jaate hai dil apna ‘Amir Khusro’ par,
Phir bhi sabke liye rukhsar e ‘Zafar’ karte hain,

Dekh li kabhi dunia ‘Jigar’ ke chashme se,
Kabhi ‘Firaaq’ ko samajh ye nazar karte hain.

Hue hain aur sukhanwar bahut se dunia mein,
Jinke sajde mein hum apna sar karte hain.

Mere maula shukra hai tera tahe dil se,
Humne jana hai shabd kitna asar karte hain.




 Applause Applause

bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Amit ...
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Anupama Sha'kya
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«Reply #5 on: September 17, 2009, 08:00:50 AM »
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Quote from: thycreator on September 16, 2009, 08:40:26 PM
Man hua toh likh diya.....har uss shakhs ke liye, jisne shabdon se aaina dikhane ki kala ko saakar kiya hai



‘Ghalib’ ke shabdon pe hum toh marte hain,
‘Mir’ ke ghazalon mein jeewan ye basar karte hain.

Dhoond lete hai khushiyan ‘Gulzar’ ke dum pe,
Apne raaton ko roshini e ‘Badar’ karte hain.

Kabhi har jaate hai dil apna ‘Amir Khusro’ par,
Phir bhi sabke liye rukhsar e ‘Zafar’ karte hain,

Dekh li kabhi dunia ‘Jigar’ ke chashme se,
Kabhi ‘Firaaq’ ko samajh ye nazar karte hain.

Hue hain aur sukhanwar bahut se dunia mein,
Jinke sajde mein hum apna sar karte hain.

Mere maula shukra hai tera tahe dil se,
Humne jana hai shabd kitna asar karte hain.



must say "bahut dam hai"  
realese your poetry book. Applause
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thycreator
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«Reply #6 on: September 17, 2009, 09:05:25 PM »
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Thanks a lot Pooja, Madhuwesh, Sophi, Roja aur Anupama ji.....Usual Smile

Anupama ji, meri poetry book...:D.....haan, bahut dino se logon ko maze lene ka koi jariya nahi mila.....tongue3 kyun mazak udate ho aap yaar....Usual Smile
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