shyari aap kamal ki kijiye...........

by pawan16 on June 27, 2012, 10:43:01 PM
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chahe janab thoda waqt lijiye,
par kuch shyari  aap  kamal ki kijiye,

chura kar likhna chod dijiye,
aaj khud ke  lafzoo se humko jod dijiye,

is hawa ko apni taraf mod lijiye,
apna hai jo gualab befikra use tod lijiye,

har asar ko kavita me sich lijiye,
is mehfil me ab to khud ko bij lijiye,

hamare sath milkar aj ek koshish kijiye,
har ek comment shayari me badlkar kijiye ,
chahe janab aap thoda waqt lijiye...................................

             pawan gupta









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«Reply #1 on: June 28, 2012, 12:52:01 AM »
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bood bahut achhaa tanz kiyaa hai pawan ji is besaakhtaa peshkash par dheron daad mujhe bahut pasand aayaa
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«Reply #2 on: June 28, 2012, 06:05:39 AM »
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bahut achha aur bahut sahi likha hai,pawan ji.dheron daad .
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«Reply #3 on: June 28, 2012, 04:22:32 PM »
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BHUT BHUT SUKRIYA SAINI SIR............APKA YU HI SAATH CHAYIE....
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«Reply #4 on: June 28, 2012, 04:24:30 PM »
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SIDHIKI JI BHUT ACHA LAGA KI AAP KA SAATH MILA.......BAS YU HI SAATH DETE RAHIYE,,,,
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«Reply #5 on: June 28, 2012, 04:50:51 PM »
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PAWAN JI NE JO HAM SAB SE KAHA HAI
US PE ZARA SAB GAUR KIJIYE
MAIN TO THORHE SEI KOSHISH KAR RAHA HOON
AAP SAB BHI THORHI SI KOSHISH KAR DIJIYE
MAHIFIL MEN KUCHH RANG AISE BHAREN KI
PAWAN JI KO MILKAR KHUSH KAR DIJIYE
PAWAN JI NE JO HAM SAB SE KAHA HAI
US PE ZARA SAB GAUR KIJIYE 

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