silsila

by kaushikbhawna008 on May 10, 2008, 08:09:26 AM
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wo ruthte rahe ham unhe manate rahe
yu ruthne manane ka silsila chalta raha
wo har bar  dil ko kuch yu choo jaata
hamara dard chupane ka silsila chalte raha
hasratei dil ki kuch yu naakam rahi
kuch kahein ya na kahein unhe is kashmakash ka silsila chalta raha
wo kabhi nazre jhukate aur kabhi muskurate
unka yu dil churane ka silsila chalta raha
wo dost b tha hamdard b  raazdaar b tha mera
par usi se hale dil chupane ka silsila chalta raha
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syednaami
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«Reply #1 on: May 10, 2008, 08:20:16 AM »
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Excellent Kaushik Sahib, wah wah,

Yeh lines wonderful hain.

wo kabhi nazre jhukate aur kabhi muskurate
unka yu dil churane ka silsila chalta raha
wo dost b tha hamdard b  raazdaar b tha mera
par usi se hale dil chupane ka silsila chalta raha


Bravo!!
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«Reply #2 on: May 10, 2008, 08:25:13 AM »
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Excellent... Applause
Really Very Very Nice KaushikBhawna...
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kaushikbhawna008
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«Reply #3 on: May 10, 2008, 09:00:10 AM »
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shukriya saiyed ji and mahiya ji
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«Reply #4 on: May 10, 2008, 09:02:04 AM »
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KYA BAAT HAI KAUSHIK JI 1 DIN MEIN
HI 2-2 SUPERB CREATION....
VERY GOOD Applause
KEEP IT UP....
BY. K.SHAEL
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«Reply #5 on: May 10, 2008, 09:03:49 AM »
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Welcome Janaab. Thanks a lot...
shukriya saiyed ji and mahiya ji
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