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surindarn

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raho khamosh zuba.n naa hone Do...
chipe raaz phir naa ayaa.n hone Do!

kyu.n dekhte ho mujhe kunakhio.n se...
merii hasrate.n jawa.n naa hone Do!

mai.n jo yaha.n hoo.n raqeeb kis liye...
dekho koi imtaha.n aaj naa hone Do!

raaz-e-dil pinha.n hee rahe to behtar...
usse phir badguma.n naa hone Do!

bikhree zulfei.n naa hate.n chehre se...
khatm nazam-ee-jaha.n naa hone Do!

abb tabiyat kuchh behl rahee hai...
yeh qafas aashya.n naa hone Do!

ishq sharmindah vasl nahi.n dost...
hus.n ko meharbaa.n naa hone Do!

sakoo.n-e-dil gar chahiye MohanN...
kisii ko phir darmiya.n naa hone Do!!

Surindar.N "MohanN"

Pihan = hidden; chipaa Badguman = Suspicious
Nazm-e-jahan = poetic face; Qafas = Cage
Aashyan = Ghar; Residence; Sharmidaa = Hateful
Vasl = Union; Darmayan = In between


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marhoom bahayaat

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Re: SKOON-E-Dil

«Reply #1 on: July 23, 2014, 01:18:52 AM »

Quote from: surindarn on July 22, 2014, 10:06:29 PM

( rahe khamosh zubaa.n naa bayaa.n hone do!
chhipe raaz phir naa ayaa.n hone do!)MATLA COULD BE WRITTEN LIKE THAT
zuban khamosh rahe naa bolne Do...
chipe raaz naa phir ayaaN hone Do!

kyuN dekhte ho mujhe kunakhioN se...
merii hasrateN jawaN naa hone Do!

maiN jo yahaN hooN raqeeb kis liye...
dekho koi mukaablaa naa hone Do!
this kafia is not similar to otherand the sher is not clear what is the conclusion behin this sher
raaz-e-dil pinhaN hee rahe to behtar...
usse phir badgumaN naa hone Do!

bikhree zulfeiN naa hateN chehre se...
khatm nazam-ee-jahaN naa hone Do!

abb tabiyat kuchh behl rahee hai...
yeh qafas aashyaN naa hone Do!

ishq sharmindah vasl nahin dost...
husN ko meharbaaN naa hone Do!

sakooN-e-dil gar chahiye MohanN...
kisii ko phir darmiyaN naa hone Do!!very nice and very pactical

Surindar.N "MohanN"

Pihan = hidden; chipaa Badguman = Suspicious
Nazm-e-jahan = poetic face; Qafas = Cage
Aashyan = Ghar; Residence; Sharmidaa = Hateful
Vasl = Union; Darmayan = In between

good one,sir


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surindarn

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Re: SKOON-E-Dil

«Reply #2 on: July 23, 2014, 02:31:57 AM »

bahut shukria Janaab Marhoom Sahib, I am much obliged to your suggestions and I have incorporated throughout the poem. Thanks again.
Surindar.N

Quote from: marhoom bahayaat on July 23, 2014, 01:18:52 AM

good one,sir


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sksaini4

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Re: SKOON-E-Dil

«Reply #3 on: July 23, 2014, 12:54:38 PM »

waaah waah


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Mohammad Touhid

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Re: SKOON-E-Dil

«Reply #4 on: July 23, 2014, 06:51:35 PM »

Nice Work MB ji...

bahut bahut khoob Surindarn Ji..

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amit_prakash_meet

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Re: SKOON-E-Dil

«Reply #5 on: July 23, 2014, 09:20:41 PM »

वाह....वाह.....


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surindarn

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Re: SKOON-E-Dil

«Reply #6 on: July 24, 2014, 09:59:11 AM »

bahut shukria Saini Sahib.
Surindar.N

Quote from: sksaini4 on July 23, 2014, 12:54:38 PM

waaah waah


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surindarn

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Re: SKOON-E-Dil

«Reply #7 on: July 24, 2014, 10:43:43 PM »

bahut shukria Touhid Sahib.
Surindar.N

Quote from: Mohammad Touhid on July 23, 2014, 06:51:35 PM

Nice Work MB ji...

bahut bahut khoob Surindarn Ji..

Applause


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