so jati hai shaam

by samnoj on December 04, 2007, 12:11:38 PM
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hijr ke lamhaat me tabdeel ho jati hai shaam
meri aankho me kai, kante chubo jati hai shaam

jate jate her shikashta kashti-e-umeed ko
badnaseebi ke samunder me dubo jati hai shaam

neend ki kaliyan do chaar khilti bhi to kis trah
bistaro per be basi ke beej bo jati hai shaam

aasman me meri kismat ka sitara hai kahan
dhoondti rahti hai nazre aur kho jati hai shaam

phiki ped jati hai jinke aage taaro ki chamak
aankh ke dero me wo moti piro jati hai shaam

rakh raha hu door tak raho me ashko ke chiraagh
shaher se mere, tumhare shaher ko jati hai shaam

yuhi aankho aankho me meri guzer jati hai raat
jagta rahta hu main aur thak ke so jati hai shaam
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«Reply #1 on: December 04, 2007, 12:24:12 PM »
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Its sooooo good... so touching...
Very Very Nice Samnoj...

Let me try too.. tongue3

Humari bebasi par ab muskuraati hai shaam,
Roz humpar hans kar chali jaati hai shaam...

Yaadon mein muskuraaye pehchaana sa chehra,
Jaane Kyon is kadar humko sataati hai shaam...

Thak kar girte hai jab bistar par ondhe muh,
Ek Naye savere ki umeed jagaati hai shaam...

Dhoondhte hai chaand ko saanvle aasmaan mein,
Taaro ke beech humko chhodh jaati hai shaam...
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«Reply #2 on: December 04, 2007, 12:57:28 PM »
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Sam, Shikha

Superb ! Marvellous !

Bahut khoob !
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«Reply #3 on: December 04, 2007, 01:08:30 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Shukriya Rajbir ji... Usual Smile
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«Reply #4 on: December 04, 2007, 02:23:23 PM »
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Bohot achcha likha hai Sam...Very good....and very good Shikha...Beautiful, both of you !
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«Reply #5 on: December 07, 2007, 12:21:37 PM »
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thanx shikha, rajbir ji n Talat..

wah shikha tumhara to jawab nahi
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«Reply #6 on: December 07, 2007, 01:17:50 PM »
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Quote from: Talat on December 04, 2007, 02:23:23 PM
Bohot achcha likha hai Sam...Very good....and very good Shikha...Beautiful, both of you !

Thanks a lot Talat... Usual Smile

Quote from: samnoj on December 07, 2007, 12:21:37 PM
thanx shikha, rajbir ji n Talat..

wah shikha tumhara to jawab nahi

Thanks Samnoj... But actually That was just a thought which was being inspired by your Poem...  Usual Smile So... Thanks to you in-fact..  glasses2
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«Reply #7 on: December 07, 2007, 04:59:33 PM »
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tum ne dekha hai kabhi aik nazar shaam ke baad
kitne chupchaap se lagte hain shajar shaam ke baad

shaam say pehlay vo mast apni oodaanon mein raha
jin k haathon mein the toote huwe par shaam ke baad

tu hai sooraj tujhe maloom kahan raat ka dookh
tu kisi roz mere ghar mein utar shaam ke baad

loat aaye na kisi roz vo awaara mezaaj
khol rakhte hain issi aas pe dar shaam ke baad
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«Reply #8 on: December 08, 2007, 01:36:51 AM »
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Quote from: mirzasaleem on December 07, 2007, 04:59:33 PM
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tum ne dekha hai kabhi aik nazar shaam ke baad
kitne chupchaap se lagte hain shajar shaam ke baad

shaam say pehlay vo mast apni oodaanon mein raha
jin k haathon mein the toote huwe par shaam ke baad

tu hai sooraj tujhe maloom kahan raat ka dookh
tu kisi roz mere ghar mein utar shaam ke baad

loat aaye na kisi roz vo awaara mezaaj
khol rakhte hain issi aas pe dar shaam ke baad

accha likha hai sabne...
and bahut khoob Saleem ji.

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«Reply #9 on: December 10, 2007, 11:27:38 AM »
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thnku Roja

bahut ache saleem ji
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«Reply #10 on: December 10, 2007, 04:49:37 PM »
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BAHUT KHOOB SAMNOJ,SHIKHA,MIRZASALEEM...
AAP SAB NE BAHUT KHOOB LIKHA
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«Reply #11 on: December 14, 2007, 11:10:59 AM »
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thanks khwahish
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«Reply #12 on: December 14, 2007, 11:16:23 AM »
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very very very nice and beautiful composition..
I really like the lines..
rakh raha hu door tak raho me ashko ke chiraagh
shaher se mere, tumhare shaher ko jati hai shaam

Quote from: samnoj on December 04, 2007, 12:11:38 PM
hijr ke lamhaat me tabdeel ho jati hai shaam
meri aankho me kai, kante chubo jati hai shaam

jate jate her shikashta kashti-e-umeed ko
badnaseebi ke samunder me dubo jati hai shaam

neend ki kaliyan do chaar khilti bhi to kis trah
bistaro per be basi ke beej bo jati hai shaam

aasman me meri kismat ka sitara hai kahan
dhoondti rahti hai nazre aur kho jati hai shaam

phiki ped jati hai jinke aage taaro ki chamak
aankh ke dero me wo moti piro jati hai shaam

rakh raha hu door tak raho me ashko ke chiraagh
shaher se mere, tumhare shaher ko jati hai shaam

yuhi aankho aankho me meri guzer jati hai raat
jagta rahta hu main aur thak ke so jati hai shaam
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«Reply #13 on: December 14, 2007, 11:19:55 AM »
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thanx mask saheb
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«Reply #14 on: December 17, 2007, 12:06:22 PM »
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wow.. realy very good lines Sam.. bhaoot hi touching lines hai.. keep writing ....

shikha di n saleem ji aap dono ne bahoot khoob likha hai
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