so jati hai shaam

by samnoj on December 04, 2007, 12:11:38 PM
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«Reply #15 on: December 18, 2007, 12:27:45 PM »
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thanks dipika
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«Reply #16 on: May 06, 2009, 12:08:19 PM »
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yaad me teri duba rehta hai din
intezaar ki ghariyan chor jati hai shaam

dhoonte phirte hai sari raah tere chahre ko
aasman me laali se surat teri bana jaati hai shaam
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«Reply #17 on: July 06, 2009, 08:05:13 AM »
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JAGTA RAHTA HOON MAIN...GOOD COMPOSITION  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #18 on: July 07, 2009, 10:09:38 PM »
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Quote from: samnoj on December 04, 2007, 12:11:38 PM
hijr ke lamhaat me tabdeel ho jati hai shaam
meri aankho me kai, kante chubo jati hai shaam

jate jate her shikashta kashti-e-umeed ko
badnaseebi ke samunder me dubo jati hai shaam

neend ki kaliyan do chaar khilti bhi to kis trah
bistaro per be basi ke beej bo jati hai shaam

aasman me meri kismat ka sitara hai kahan
dhoondti rahti hai nazre aur kho jati hai shaam

phiki ped jati hai jinke aage taaro ki chamak
aankh ke dero me wo moti piro jati hai shaam

rakh raha hu door tak raho me ashko ke chiraagh
shaher se mere, tumhare shaher ko jati hai shaam

yuhi aankho aankho me meri guzer jati hai raat
jagta rahta hu main aur thak ke so jati hai shaam

wow bahoot khoob Sam ji.. pata nahi kaise is per najar nahi gai pajhle!!!
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«Reply #19 on: September 20, 2009, 06:28:54 AM »
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Wah bahut khoob Samnoj ji,Shika ji,Saleem ji ,really touching n mindblowing creation,excellent. Thumbs UP Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #20 on: September 25, 2009, 12:28:29 PM »
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thanx madhu
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«Reply #21 on: February 10, 2010, 10:00:51 AM »
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derd ki fasle kat ta hu, phir ug aati hai ghaas
her subah yaadon ke beej bo jaati hai shaam
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«Reply #22 on: February 10, 2010, 08:40:16 PM »
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THAK KE SO JATI HAI SHAAM.............BEHTREEN COMPOSITION SAMNOJ JI Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #23 on: February 12, 2010, 10:08:02 AM »
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thanx khamosh awaaz

itna pilaya saaqi ne, nasha utarta hi nahi
jab bhi ubharta hu isse, phir dubo jaati hai shaam
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«Reply #24 on: February 13, 2010, 02:36:00 AM »
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thanx khamosh awaaz

itna pilaya saaqi ne, nasha utarta hi nahi
jab bhi ubharta hu isse, phir dubo jaati hai shaam

aha kya baat hai..!!   Usual Smile

Kuch naam the unke bi mayi aaj loota saaqi
Ek shaam ki hasrat mein jo ut gaye dunia se..!!
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«Reply #25 on: February 18, 2010, 08:53:51 AM »
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thanx n bahut ache malli

nikale hai gher se tere der pe aaane ko
bhatakti galiyn se phir le aati hai shaam
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«Reply #26 on: March 10, 2010, 07:17:51 AM »
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derd ki fasle kat ta hu, phir ug aati hai ghaas
her subah yaadon ke beej bo jaati hai shaam
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itna pilaya saaqi ne, nasha utarta hi nahi
jab bhi ubharta hu isse, phir dubo jaati hai shaam

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nikale hai gher se tere der pe aaane ko
bhatakti galiyn se phir le aati hai shaam

Nice one Samnoj Ji
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«Reply #27 on: March 12, 2010, 05:39:26 AM »
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thanx rajesh
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