Soch tu kabhi

by Khurmi on November 29, 2011, 04:30:43 PM
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Kyun vohi puraani batain hain
kyun vohi daastani khate hain
kash ke vo kabhi kuch aur sochain
kyun vaisa hi utha laate hain

Tu kuch samajh nahi paye ga
tumhain,samajh nahi aye ga
Jo log mantak(logic) nahi hain janay
vo bus dil ko hi behlaate hain

ye choda arab saal ki hai baat
aur char din ki humari hayat
saza aur jaza vala kalima
budastoor phir bhi dohratey hain
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«Reply #1 on: November 30, 2011, 09:34:37 AM »
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Kyun vohi puraani batain hain
kyun vohi daastani khate hain
kash ke vo kabhi kuch aur sochain
kyun vaisa hi utha laate hain

Tu kuch samajh nahi paye ga
tumhain,samajh nahi aye ga
Jo log mantak(logic) nahi hain janay
vo bus dil ko hi behlaate hain

ye choda arab saal ki hai baat
aur char din ki humari hayat
saza aur jaza vala kalima
budastoor phir bhi dohratey hain


khurmi ji welcome to yoindia. per aap ka ye kalaam samajh nahin aaya . kis tallik se likha hai. meharbaani kar ke explain karein to kalaam samjh ne mein aasaani hogi. shukriya
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«Reply #2 on: December 01, 2011, 03:18:40 PM »
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Maybe the title should be 'such ki talaash'. Actually this is a critic on the way people try to find the truth other then rational thought. Our brain is the most powerful tool in the known universe, and we can find or try to understand truth only through rational approach. 'Soch tu kabhi' is encouraging you to think rationaly. 'Daastani khaate' is legendry stories or myths that find its way in our literature and more importantly in relegion. Many people take them to be literal, and yet most of them are so outlandish that it beggars belief. What I call as the 'tales of a by gone age'. Since the age of enlightenment, the world started to think more and more rationaly and the results are here for everybody to see. Poem is still unfinished, its very crude, my thoughts not properly arranged in words, I intend to add and also revise what I've composed so far. The germ of it is actually in the last part. 'Ye choda arab (14 Billion) saal ki hai baat'. And we still think that the creator of this unthinkably large universe, 'hum se humari choti si zindagi ka hissab maange ga'
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«Reply #3 on: December 06, 2011, 12:40:44 PM »
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Maybe the title should be 'such ki talaash'. Actually this is a critic on the way people try to find the truth other then rational thought. Our brain is the most powerful tool in the known universe, and we can find or try to understand truth only through rational approach. 'Soch tu kabhi' is encouraging you to think rationaly. 'Daastani khaate' is legendry stories or myths that find its way in our literature and more importantly in relegion. Many people take them to be literal, and yet most of them are so outlandish that it beggars belief. What I call as the 'tales of a by gone age'. Since the age of enlightenment, the world started to think more and more rationaly and the results are here for everybody to see. Poem is still unfinished, its very crude, my thoughts not properly arranged in words, I intend to add and also revise what I've composed so far. The germ of it is actually in the last part. 'Ye choda arab (14 Billion) saal ki hai baat'. And we still think that the creator of this unthinkably large universe, 'hum se humari choti si zindagi ka hissab maange ga'

KHURMI JI,
 I DO RESPECT OF YOUR THOUGHT. BUT YES AS I AM HAILING FROM A MUSLIM FAMILY AND I BELIEVE IN QORAAN SO WITH REFERENCE TO THE HOLY QORAAN AND THERE RESPECTIVE HOLY COUPLETS  YES WE ARE ACCOUNTABLE TO THE ALMIGHTY AFTER DEATH THIS IS FIRST THING AND SEVERAL OTHER ISSUES ASSOCIATED WITH THIS ARE TRUE. THIS ALL STATEMENTS ARE TRUE AND ACCEPTABLE BY THE BELIEVER ONLY. SO IN THIS REFERENCE YOU MIGHT BE CARRYING YOUR OWN IDEA BUT  SORRY I DONT AGREE.

  THANK YOU
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