Socha hai...

by brokenbyluv on January 01, 2010, 05:37:22 PM
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Socha hai ki bekhudi ki zindgi ka toofan dekhte hai,
kisi ki nigaho main phir se doob jane ka nuksan dekhte hai..

uski gair maujudgi se tou merra aks adhura hai hi,
uski maujudgi se poora hone ka gumaan dekhte hai..

vo kehta hai har baat dil se,
ab uski dillagi ka asman dekhte hai..

merre lafzo mein tou vo sama gya hai diwangi ki hadh tak..
AB USKI NAZDIKIYO AUR FASLO KA NISHAAN DEKHTE HAI......
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«Reply #1 on: January 01, 2010, 07:16:37 PM »
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Geet-di achha likha hai....... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Hum tou tere kalaam ka jadoo dekhte hain
Naffa ya nuksaan hum kabhi nahi dekhte hain

Quote from: brokenbyluv on January 01, 2010, 05:37:22 PM
Socha hai ki bekhudi ki zindgi ka toofan dekhte hai,
kisi ki nigaho main phir se doob jane ka nuksan dekhte hai..

uski gair maujudgi se tou merra aks adhura hai hi,
uski maujudgi se poora hone ka gumaan dekhte hai..

vo kehta hai har baat dil se,
ab uski dillagi ka asman dekhte hai..

merre lafzo mein tou vo sama gya hai diwangi ki hadh tak..
AB USKI NAZDIKIYO AUR FASLO KA NISHAAN DEKHTE HAI......
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brokenbyluv
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«Reply #2 on: January 01, 2010, 07:20:13 PM »
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thnx koyal...
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«Reply #3 on: January 01, 2010, 08:08:07 PM »
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Wow too good Geet ji,great creation.excellent.hmm sach mein deewani ban gayi meri Geet. Thumbs UP Applause Applause Applause :clap:all the best. icon_thumleft tongue3 love9 love4 hello
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«Reply #4 on: January 01, 2010, 09:22:43 PM »
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Simply Great work Geet Ji
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lovable_guy006
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«Reply #5 on: January 02, 2010, 05:36:11 AM »
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wah wah kya khubh likha hain !!!
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«Reply #6 on: January 02, 2010, 06:47:54 AM »
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Geet-di last line mai agar "NISHAAN" ki jagah "ANJAAM" Word use karo tou kaisa lagega....my sugestion

Hum Talwaar nahi Talwaar ki Dhaar dekhte hain
Shabdon ka aakaar nahi unki maar dekhte hain


Quote from: brokenbyluv on January 01, 2010, 05:37:22 PM
Socha hai ki bekhudi ki zindgi ka toofan dekhte hai,
kisi ki nigaho main phir se doob jane ka nuksan dekhte hai..

uski gair maujudgi se tou merra aks adhura hai hi,
uski maujudgi se poora hone ka gumaan dekhte hai..

vo kehta hai har baat dil se,
ab uski dillagi ka asman dekhte hai..

merre lafzo mein tou vo sama gya hai diwangi ki hadh tak..
AB USKI NAZDIKIYO AUR FASLO KA NISHAAN DEKHTE HAI......
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«Reply #7 on: January 02, 2010, 07:26:47 AM »
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bahot bahot sundar likha he B.B.L. ji........
really its to good....... Thumbs UP
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«Reply #8 on: January 03, 2010, 05:07:31 AM »
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Waah Kya baat Hai Bahoot Khoob Geet !

Nice addition Koyal !
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«Reply #9 on: January 03, 2010, 06:57:02 PM »
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Thanks Divya-di.......

Quote from: Sophi on January 03, 2010, 05:07:31 AM
Waah Kya baat Hai Bahoot Khoob Geet !

Nice addition Koyal !
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«Reply #10 on: January 08, 2010, 02:13:13 PM »
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thnx alot sophi ji,rajesh ji,think ji n lovable ji...
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«Reply #11 on: January 08, 2010, 02:14:06 PM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on January 01, 2010, 08:08:07 PM
Wow too good Geet ji,great creation.excellent.hmm sach mein deewani ban gayi meri Geet. Thumbs UP Applause Applause Applause :clap:all the best. icon_thumleft tongue3 love9 love4 hello

thnx alot madhu ji,madhu ji main apki diwani tou hu hi..luv u naa..love6 love7
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«Reply #12 on: January 08, 2010, 02:17:02 PM »
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Quote from: KOYAL46 on January 02, 2010, 06:47:54 AM
Geet-di last line mai agar "NISHAAN" ki jagah "ANJAAM" Word use karo tou kaisa lagega....my sugestion

Hum Talwaar nahi Talwaar ki Dhaar dekhte hain
Shabdon ka aakaar nahi unki maar dekhte hain




koyal shayad u r right but main NISHAAN isliye likha kyunki kisi k zindgi mein aane jane se unki yado k nishaan hamre dil pe reh jate hai...ANJAAM tou malum nhi isliye nishaan likha...ok sweetu..n verry nice lines by u also thnx alot...luv u.. love4 love4
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