Socha Mein Bhee Kavita Likhu….....Anaamika Jain:Miscellaneous Shayri

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Socha Mein Bhee Kavita Likhu…..

Shabd-kosh ko mein saath lekar baithee
Meine Bhavon ko nijj mann mai tatola

Shabd mile kuchh saral kuchh katheen
Kafiya milana bhee ho raha tha katheen

Vaakya kabhi lambe kabhi chhote ban rahe they
Swar k anusaar Akshar saare aane ko aatur they

Maatrayen sab khadi thee,Chinh bhi sab aagaye
Kisko kahaan fit hona hai,ye abhi tay hoga aage

Kahin alp-viram ada tou kahin purn-viram khada
Bindi (.) khush ho rahi,Deish(-) muska raha

Chandra Bindu Chilla raha bolo kahaan lag jaaun
Maa k saath lagaogi ya Chand k sar chadh jaaun

Inverted ‘comaa” puchh rahi bolo kahaan mera sthan
Koshtak ( ) bole mujh mai tum kiss ko beethaogi

Question mark (?) kahe batlaao kya puchhna hai
Ya tumhe bas vishmay ( ! ) he mai rehna hai

Sab kuchh hai par, mujh-se samishran nahi ho raha
Bhaav aate hain tou shabd kahin par kho jaate hain

Vaakayon ko bar-bar likha,Maatraon ko idhar-udhar kiya
Par Phir bhee mein ek achhee kavita nahi likh payee……….


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Re: Socha Mein Bhee Kavita Likhu….....Anaamika Jain

«Reply #1 on: November 17, 2010, 01:12:01 PM »

bhuttttttttttttttt hi umdaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

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Re: Socha Mein Bhee Kavita Likhu….....Anaamika Jain

«Reply #2 on: November 17, 2010, 01:32:20 PM »

Thanks....shukriya Rahi2001 ji....aapne samay nikaal kar padha aur saraha.... icon_flower


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Re: Socha Mein Bhee Kavita Likhu….....Anaamika Jain

«Reply #3 on: November 18, 2010, 06:41:07 AM »

bahut bahut khoob ANAMIKA Ji..dher saari daad~

kuchh kafi pehle likha tha maine..

Ek din maine dil se puchha
kavita kaise likhte hain.......uttar mila

ghol kalam ki syaahi me
sugandh arth-poorna shabdo ki
or piro ke bhavnaon ko
unmukta hriday ke vicharon me
shudhdha hriday ke panne par
kavita aise likhte hain.....Ek din maine...


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Re: Socha Mein Bhee Kavita Likhu….....Anaamika Jain

«Reply #4 on: November 18, 2010, 06:51:49 AM »

Aap jo bhi hain.....BreeriNee-ji aapka likha mein padh nahi pa rahi....ye lipi ajnabee hai hamaare liye.....phir bhi shukriya ess thread per aa k mere kalaam ko padhne k liye..... icon_flower

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Re: Socha Mein Bhee Kavita Likhu….....Anaamika Jain

«Reply #5 on: November 18, 2010, 07:55:41 AM »

Abhi ji aapki daad ka bahut bahut shukriya.....Aapki lines bhi bahut arthpurn hain....

Quote from: AbhiTamrakar on November 18, 2010, 06:41:07 AM


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Re: Socha Mein Bhee Kavita Likhu….....Anaamika Jain

«Reply #6 on: November 18, 2010, 09:01:19 AM »

waah ek alag andaaz me...bahoot behtreen likha aapne


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Re: Socha Mein Bhee Kavita Likhu….....Anaamika Jain

«Reply #7 on: November 19, 2010, 05:53:19 AM »

bahut khoob Anamika ji..hindi matraon ka aisa anutha prayog wah wah:)
..***..
maine bhi socha tha ek kavita likhu..
par kya karta mai.,
na hi shabd-kosh tha or na hi thi bhawnayen!!!


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Re: Socha Mein Bhee Kavita Likhu….....Anaamika Jain

«Reply #8 on: November 23, 2010, 02:41:24 PM »

Anamika Jiiiiii.. Aapko Shayad Aaj Maine Pahali Baar Padha hai.. Aur Such Me Baar baar Padhna Chaahenge.. Kyunki Aapki Yeh Kavita.. Aapka Yeh Andaaz-e-Bayan Waqai Alag Hatt Ke Hai Aur Bahut Khubsoorat Hai..!!!

Hindi Aur Urdu Ke Lafzon Se Saji Aapki Yeh Poem Bahut Umda Rahi.. Jo Seedhe Dil pe Asar Chod gai.. Daad Kubool karen.. aur Yuhi Likhte Rahiye..

**~** Mann **~**


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Re: Socha Mein Bhee Kavita Likhu….....Anaamika Jain

«Reply #9 on: November 23, 2010, 03:07:06 PM »

ek anokhi kavita anaamika.........bht hi dilchasp raha ise padhna aur iske sath sath behna.....
iss tarah k aur prayog dekhne ko aatur hai man mera....
tumhari lekhni me sare manobhaav aagaye sari maatraon aur swaron k sath.....
superbbbbbb creation dear.....


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Re: Socha Mein Bhee Kavita Likhu….....Anaamika Jain

«Reply #10 on: December 23, 2010, 11:09:03 AM »

Bahut Khub Anamika Ji Bahut Hi Sunder Likha Hai Aapne


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Re: Socha Mein Bhee Kavita Likhu….....Anaamika Jain

«Reply #11 on: February 06, 2011, 11:45:03 AM »

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Re: Socha Mein Bhee Kavita Likhu….....Anaamika Jain

«Reply #12 on: May 01, 2012, 05:43:57 PM »

Aap bahut acha likhti he
to char panktio ke sath apse judne ka prayatn kar raha hu

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Likhna kewal sabd kosh ka kam nahe he

priyetame sirf vyakran se he banta nam nahe he

jiwan ka safar bada anmol yaha he

chand purnviram se mil jata aaram nahe he

ye jiwan he kuch bikhra bikhra par saam nahe he

har kavi he anmol jagat me
e maan ki bela
ye kalyug he yaha milta koi ram nahe he


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