Soye hue haiN kab se.................Mamta Bajpai

by mamta bajpai on February 13, 2011, 05:05:12 PM
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soye hue haiN kab se koi khwaab nahee hai
beraNg see duniyaa hai koi taab nahee hai

bechain har nigaah use dhooNdhtee fire
apne liye hee koi bhee betaab nahee hai

aaNkheN haiN ashqbaar meree pochhiye sahee
paanee hai inme sirf ye tejaab nahee hai

dil jaaNfishaaN hai koi ise roktaa nahee
uspe jawaal e husn pe naqaab nahee hai

ek hum haiN ta'aaruf bhee khud hee diye jaate haiN
unkee taraf se koi bhee aadaab nahee hai

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«Reply #1 on: February 13, 2011, 05:14:24 PM »
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Bahut umda mamta ji..
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«Reply #2 on: February 13, 2011, 05:18:31 PM »
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Maate Namaskaar--
subh aasirwad ka talabgaar hun Usual Smile
hmm aapki ek aur behtareen peshkash --
iss kalaam me aapne shabdo ko gahre ehsaaso se nawaaz dia.
jada to mujhe nhi pata lekin dil se kahta hu mujhe bahut bahut achha laga.
aapko hum daad nhi sirf duayen denge--
aap hame aasirwaad dijiye bas.Usual Smile
god bless u
khus rahiye
sukriya
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«Reply #3 on: February 13, 2011, 05:36:09 PM »
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Mamtaa Jee Aadaab!

Achchi kalaam se nawaaza hai aapne..
Khayaal bhi chunindaa rahe aur ashaar
bhi khoob kahe hai...

YeH qouted ashaar hume achche lage...
Daad kabool farmaiye....

Likhate rahiye...
Khush O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile          


Quote from: mamta bajpai on February 13, 2011, 05:05:12 PM


bechain har nigaah use dhooNdhtee fire
apne liye hee koi bhee betaab nahee hai

aaNkheN haiN ashqbaar meree pochhiye sahee
paanee hai inme sirf ye tejaab nahee hai

ek hum haiN ta'aaruf bhee khud hee diye jaate haiN
unkee taraf se koi bhee aadaab nahee hai

Mamta Bajpai
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«Reply #4 on: February 14, 2011, 03:03:08 AM »
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bechain har nigaah use dhooNdhtee fire
apne liye hee koi bhee betaab nahee hai

Bahut khoob khayaal Kaha hai aapne ... Mamtaa Ji !

Very Impressive Creation ... dil se daad hazir hai ... aise hi likhti rahen ...!

khush rahen ... !
duaaoN ke saath ... !
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«Reply #5 on: February 14, 2011, 04:47:28 AM »
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Bahut bahtu shukriyaa Geet jee!
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«Reply #6 on: February 14, 2011, 04:53:18 AM »
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Subhash jee!
khush raheN...
humaaraa shubh- aasheerwaad hameshaa tumhaare saath hai....
tumhaaree duaa kee bhee hume utani hee zaroorat hai jitani daad kee..
it works like a remedy.....
tumhaare bhaav hee kaafi haiN.......
aur uske aage shabd nirarthak ho jaate hai...
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«Reply #7 on: February 14, 2011, 06:20:12 AM »
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bahut khub mamtaji... bahut khub....

 Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: February 14, 2011, 06:47:20 AM »
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Shukriyaa Manju jee!
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«Reply #9 on: February 14, 2011, 06:49:34 AM »
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Shukriyaa Naresh jee!
achchha lagtaa hai jab vaap kisee vishesh sher par apnee pasand zaahir karte haiN......
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«Reply #10 on: February 14, 2011, 06:54:12 AM »
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Shukriyaa shukriyaa Shihab jee!
aap kaa andaaz e taareef dili masarrat ko dobaalaa kar jaataa hai...
ek baat or kahooN woh ye keh aap kaa signature bahut meaningful hai...
hume behad pasand aayaa....
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«Reply #11 on: February 14, 2011, 01:41:06 PM »
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Parwaaz jee!
waalaikum Aadaab!
behad se bhee zyaadaa shukriyaa....
apne kalaam par aap kee nazar hume achchhee lagtee hai....
yuN hee nazr e karam banaaye rakheN....
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«Reply #12 on: February 14, 2011, 01:49:56 PM »
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Quote from: mamta bajpai on February 13, 2011, 05:05:12 PM
soye hue haiN kab se koi khwaab nahee hai
beraNg see duniyaa hai koi taab nahee hai

bechain har nigaah use dhooNdhtee fire
apne liye hee koi bhee betaab nahee hai

aaNkheN haiN ashqbaar meree pochhiye sahee
paanee hai inme sirf ye tejaab nahee hai

dil jaaNfishaaN hai koi ise roktaa nahee
uspe jawaal e husn pe naqaab nahee hai

ek hum haiN ta'aaruf bhee khud hee diye jaate haiN
unkee taraf se koi bhee aadaab nahee hai

Mamta Bajpai

Bahut Bahut Khoob Mamtaji..

Lajawaab peshkash!!! har ek ashaar Anmol.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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Bahut bahut dhanywaad Khwaish jee! aap kaa Monday lagtaa hai humaare hee naam hai.......
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«Reply #14 on: February 14, 2011, 02:12:02 PM »
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Quote from: mamta bajpai on February 14, 2011, 01:52:12 PM
Bahut bahut dhanywaad Khwaish jee! aap kaa Monday lagtaa hai humaare hee naam hai.......


Hahaha..Ji Bilkul Mamta Ji..Aap Likhte Hi itna Acha ho Ke Hum To kehte Hai Baaki Ke Din Bhi Aapki Likhi kalaamo Ke Ne Naam Hona Chahiye.. icon_flower
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