SUHAAG ki raat…!!

by ghayal_shayar on October 30, 2012, 12:47:25 AM
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humne tumse pyar kiya,, sangini bana tujhe sweekaar kiya,, tujhe yaad karne ke siwa,, aur kuch na maine, eh yaar kiya,, sochte the ki kitni khoobsurat wo mulakaat hogi,, kehne ko to meri suhaagraat hogi,, na jaane kitne aadhe adhure ehsash honge,, pehli baar hum itne paas honge,, sochte hain kitni khoobsurat wo mulaakat hogi,, kehne ko to meri suhaagraat hogi...!!




os me bhigi sharmati kaliyaaN,
husn ke jhonke me ithlaati pattiyaaN,
andhere me pighalna seher ka,
aur sote sahar ki gumti* battiyaaN...!

*gum hoti,, putting off of lights...!


uff! jaare ka ye mausam,
aur unke kurbat* ki garmi,
meri baahon me unka hona,
aur ungliyon ki besharmi...!

*nikat.ta,, nearness...!


do badanoN ka lipatnaa,
ek choti si razaaai me...
aata hai ek alag hi mazaa,
pyar ki is angdaai me...

angdaai me,
ek choti si razaaai me...!


fir hui wahi praatah* bela,
kisi ka darwaaza khatkhatana,
uthana jaldi baazi me,
aur fir halka sharmana...!

*subah ka samay,, morning time...!


fir ek intezaar,
kaliyon ke sharmane ka...
machalna unhe dekh ke,
afsosh choo v na paane ka...!
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«Reply #1 on: October 30, 2012, 01:05:33 AM »
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ghayal ji bohut khoob, umda nazm hai, aur bohut umda adaegi hai lafzoN ki, mubarakbaad qubool kijiye.... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: October 30, 2012, 01:09:47 AM »
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wah wah Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: October 30, 2012, 02:37:52 AM »
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humne tumse pyar kiya,, sangini bana tujhe sweekaar kiya,, tujhe yaad karne ke siwa,, aur kuch na maine, eh yaar kiya,, sochte the ki kitni khoobsurat wo mulakaat hogi,, kehne ko to meri suhaagraat hogi,, na jaane kitne aadhe adhure ehsash honge,, pehli baar hum itne paas honge,, sochte hain kitni khoobsurat wo mulaakat hogi,, kehne ko to meri suhaagraat hogi...!!




os me bhigi sharmati kaliyaaN,
husn ke jhonke me ithlaati pattiyaaN,
andhere me pighalna seher ka,
aur sote sahar ki gumti* battiyaaN...!

*gum hoti,, putting off of lights...!


uff! jaare ka ye mausam,
aur unke kurbat* ki garmi,
meri baahon me unka hona,
aur ungliyon ki besharmi...!

*nikat.ta,, nearness...!


do badanoN ka lipatnaa,
ek choti si razaaai me...
aata hai ek alag hi mazaa,
pyar ki is angdaai me...

angdaai me,
ek choti si razaaai me...!


fir hui wahi praatah* bela,
kisi ka darwaaza khatkhatana,
uthana jaldi baazi me,
aur fir halka sharmana...!

*subah ka samay,, morning time...!


fir ek intezaar,
kaliyon ke sharmane ka...
machalna unhe dekh ke,
afsosh choo v na paane ka...!

nice
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«Reply #4 on: October 30, 2012, 03:29:24 AM »
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«Reply #5 on: October 30, 2012, 05:13:53 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: October 30, 2012, 11:34:47 AM »
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ghayal ji bohut khoob, umda nazm hai, aur bohut umda adaegi hai lafzoN ki, mubarakbaad qubool kijiye.... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

jahe naseeb, jo aapko ye peshkash pasand aayi, bas yahi duaa rahegi ki aage v aapke dil bhaane laayak kuch likhte raheN... bas yuNhi saath nibhaate rahiye...
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«Reply #8 on: October 30, 2012, 01:41:43 PM »
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wah wah Applause Applause Applause Applause

Bahukhandi ji, bahut bahut shukriya...
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«Reply #9 on: October 30, 2012, 01:42:55 PM »
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nice

Thanks for the appreciation sir...
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«Reply #10 on: October 31, 2012, 12:34:53 AM »
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Applause


Thank you sir...
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«Reply #11 on: October 31, 2012, 02:24:30 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause

hriday ji shukriyaa...
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«Reply #12 on: October 31, 2012, 02:25:57 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

aksh ji bahut bahut shukriya in taaliyon ke liye...
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