<>*Sunhare khwabon ki tarah*<>

by *KasaK*....Dil Ki on February 12, 2011, 04:18:48 AM
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<>*Sunhare khwabon ki tarah*<>
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Phoolon ki khilti mahekti taazgi ki tarah
Tera kalaam aaya hai fir bahaaron ki tarah

Har lafz saj rahe hain ek naye andaaz se
Tune jiya hai inhe apne hi ehsaason ki tarah

Kahin se kisi mod pe mil hi jayenge ajnabee
Chauraahon pe milti do anjaan raahon ki tarah

Na mil paun kabhi, tab bhi tu sath h mere jaan
Meri palkon me palte in sunhare khwabon ki tarah..!!!
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«Reply #1 on: February 12, 2011, 05:24:48 AM »
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uuuuuuuuuuuffffffffffffffffffffffff........... love4 love4 love4 love4 love4 love4 love4 love4 love4

anamika ji apne to dil ko dahdka hi diya ji.........

itni romantic theme .........hayyyyyyyyyyy........kuch kuch hota he esa padkar...........its mastam mast ji...........dil khush ho gaya ji...........ekdum flying wali halat he..........superb creation  notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy             ji..........marvelous......... Applause Applause Applause Applause hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2

few lines from my side.........

Dil Me Base Ankahe Sawalo Ki Tarah
Tu Mili Muje Dilkash Jawabo Ki Tarah

Yakinan Waqt Uu Hi Gujar Jayega Ab
Tune Jo Thama He Hath Humraho Ki Tarah

Kyu Fikr Kare Hum Ab Ki Kal Kya Hoga
Aaj Hasin He To Kal Bhi Hasin Hoga Gulaboo Ki Tarah

Sabkuch Tuje He De Diya Fir Bhi Ye Wada Raha Sanam
Hum To Lut Jayenge Ke Tujpe Bigde Nawabo Ki Tarah
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«Reply #2 on: February 12, 2011, 05:50:13 AM »
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wah aap dono ki jugalbandi kamaal hai .
bahut diksh post K mam--
Matrix yaara aapka reply jhakashh.
chalo gustakhi muaff mai bhi kuch lines add kar rha hu apne style ka batao kesa hai
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«Reply #3 on: February 12, 2011, 09:40:55 AM »
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Kasak Jee Aadaab!

bade dino baad aapki kisi post se ruberu huye hai..
Kafi umdaa kalaam kahi hai aapne yeH waah jee waah..

Aap behad khoob likhane lagi hai jee.. Usual Smile          


Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on February 12, 2011, 04:18:48 AM
<>*Sunhare khwabon ki tarah*<>
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Phoolon ki khilti mahekti taazgi ki tarah
Tera kalaam aaya hai fir bahaaron ki tarah

achcha kaha hai jee daad Usual Smile          

Har lafz saj rahe hain ek naye andaaz se
Tune jiya hai inhe apne hi ehsaason ki tarah

Very nice... Kisi ke dil ka haal bayaaN kar rahi hai aap bahut khoob Usual Smile          

Kahin se kisi mod pe mil hi jayenge ajnabee
Chauraahon pe milti do anjaan raahon ki tarah

Waah waah waah jee kia kahne Masha Allah!
Bahut umdaa sher kaha hai behad khoob shayari ki hai daad Usual Smile          

Na mil paun kabhi, tab bhi tu sath h mere jaan
Meri palkon me palte in sunhare khwabon ki tarah..!!!

Waah jee bahut khoob yeH sher bhi behad umdaa hai... Daad daad daad Usual Smile          


Kasak jee aapke last do ashaaroN ki tareef karne layk to lafz nahi hai ... waqai behtreen ashaar kahe hai aapne...

Dil se daad kabool kijiye...

MG jee Nice reply ..... bahut khoob janaab Daad daad daad Usual Smile

Likhati rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez.... Usual Smile          

Humne bhi kuch aisi theme meiN likha tha Usual Smile

Woh Hogi baahoN meiN meri, maiN chaahuN agar toH
MaiN dekhuN usko Zindagi, maiN soNchuN agar toH

Kia hogi meri muraad puri maiN maNguN agar toH
Kia tham jayeNga yeH waqt maiN bowluN agar toH
         


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«Reply #4 on: February 12, 2011, 09:52:28 AM »
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happy3 aaj to mera din ban gaya parwaz ji........ icon_flower
  love4 aapki tareef mil gai meri kalam ko aur kya chhaiye..... love4
  hello2 thnx ji atlast aapne meri post ka postmartum to kiya.. Giggle
  Feared. taras jati hun k kisi post ko to aap iss tarah jawab dein........... Feared.
  notworthy thnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnxxxxxxxxxxxxx jiiiiiiiii notworthy
 notworthy ..thnx alotttttt notworthy notworthy
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«Reply #5 on: February 12, 2011, 09:54:03 AM »
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Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on February 12, 2011, 04:18:48 AM
<>*Sunhare khwabon ki tarah*<>
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Phoolon ki khilti mahekti taazgi ki tarah
Tera kalaam aaya hai fir bahaaron ki tarah

Har lafz saj rahe hain ek naye andaaz se
Tune jiya hai inhe apne hi ehsaason ki tarah

Kahin se kisi mod pe mil hi jayenge ajnabee
Chauraahon pe milti do anjaan raahon ki tarah

Na mil paun kabhi, tab bhi tu sath h mere jaan
Meri palkon me palte in sunhare khwabon ki tarah..!!!

wah wah bahut khoob kasak ji
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«Reply #6 on: February 12, 2011, 10:01:06 AM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on February 12, 2011, 09:40:55 AM

Humne bhi kuch aisi theme meiN likha tha Usual Smile

Woh Hogi baahoN meiN meri, maiN chaahuN agar toH
MaiN dekhuN usko Zindagi, maiN soNchuN agar toH

Kia hogi meri muraad puri maiN maNguN agar toH
Kia tham jayeNga yeH waqt maiN bowluN agar toH
         




ek baar kaho har khwaaish puri hogi
dil se nikli har ek dua kubuul hogi

humne mana hai tumhe apna humsafar
safar me padi har jarurat puri hogi

tanha jo paoge tum khudko kabhi jaan
apne hathon me kasi meri ungliyan hogi
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«Reply #7 on: February 12, 2011, 10:24:02 AM »
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wah bahut khoob
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«Reply #8 on: February 12, 2011, 10:52:07 AM »
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rajaji...... love4 love4 love4 love4
mastam mast reply ji...... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
and after long time u replied this way on my post...... happy3 icon_flower happy3
thnxxxxxxxx ji....... love4
mehkegi raat fir se raat rani ki tarah
jab milenge hum tum diya aur baati ki tarah

lahoo se bhi laal hoga uss sindurr ka rang
jo sajega meri maang me tere naam ki tarah

tharthara rahe hain lub mere soch kar bhi ye
kya hoga jab chumega tu apne armanon ki tarah

aaja k ab to main thak gai hun raah dekhte hue
chanda ka rasta dekhte bebas chakor ki tarah...!!!

Quote from: Matrix Guy on February 12, 2011, 05:24:48 AM
uuuuuuuuuuuffffffffffffffffffffffff........... love4 love4 love4 love4 love4 love4 love4 love4 love4

anamika ji apne to dil ko dahdka hi diya ji.........

itni romantic theme .........hayyyyyyyyyyy........kuch kuch hota he esa padkar...........its mastam mast ji...........dil khush ho gaya ji...........ekdum flying wali halat he..........superb creation  notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy             ji..........marvelous......... Applause Applause Applause Applause hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2

few lines from my side.........

Dil Me Base Ankahe Sawalo Ki Tarah
Tu Mili Muje Dilkash Jawabo Ki Tarah

Yakinan Waqt Uu Hi Gujar Jayega Ab
Tune Jo Thama He Hath Humraho Ki Tarah

Kyu Fikr Kare Hum Ab Ki Kal Kya Hoga
Aaj Hasin He To Kal Bhi Hasin Hoga Gulaboo Ki Tarah

Sabkuch Tuje He De Diya Fir Bhi Ye Wada Raha Sanam
Hum To Lut Jayenge Ke Tujpe Bigde Nawabo Ki Tarah
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«Reply #9 on: February 13, 2011, 06:21:14 PM »
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Bahut Khub Kasak JI
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«Reply #10 on: February 16, 2011, 05:05:45 PM »
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Good One ..... Kasak Ji !

Very Impressive ... Very Touching ... !
Good Expression ... Very Nice Creation ... dil se daad  Applause Applause Applause

yunhi likhti rahen ... khush rahen ... !

duaaoN ke saath ... !
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«Reply #11 on: February 20, 2013, 08:56:45 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

tumse dur tumhaari yaadon mein din guzaar letaa hoon
main tumhaari baaton ko kaagaz pe utaar letaa hoon

baatein kartaa hoon tumhaari tasveer se aksar tanhaa
main band kamre mein tumhaaraa naam pukaar letaa hoon

samajhtaa hoon tum mujhme basi ho mere ruh ki tarhaa
isliye saamne aaine ke main chehraa sanwaar letaa hoon
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«Reply #12 on: February 26, 2013, 05:34:21 PM »
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kahan se dhundh dhundhkar reply kiye ho kp.... Winking Winking
ye unhidino ki baat hai jab tum gayab hue the  sad11 sad11,,,, isisliye in sab par tumhare replies nahin hai......
but sachchiiii mujhe tumhara ye gift bahot acha laga  love4 love4...... thnx sw2

har waqt main tumhe hi to sochti hun
sach kehti hun bahot miss karti hun

padhti hun kai baar tere likhe khat main
chuke se ashkon se chehra apna dhoti hun

majbur hun jo tere sath yahan hun nahin
par dur hokar bhi tere ehsaason me jeeti hun
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«Reply #13 on: February 26, 2013, 05:37:47 PM »
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bohut khub kasak ji very impresive
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«Reply #14 on: February 26, 2013, 11:46:25 PM »
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bas yunhi ghumte firte yahaan aapke posts tak pahuch gayaa.. sochaa jo miss huwaa hai unpe kuch likh liyaa jaaye aur unko padh liyaa jaaye ek baad dil se... bas likh diyaa... aur aapne bhi khoob jawaab diyaa hai... aajaao fir ek baar milkar dhoom machaate hain...!!!


subah se shaam tumhi ho meri yaadon mein
tumhaare siwaa koi nahi meri baaton mein

tum se duur hoon, magar tumse judaa nahi
tum mere din me ho, tum meri raaton mein

dekh naa le koi aansu, wajah yahi hai ki
bheegtaa hoon main bheegi barsaaton mein

jaantaa hoon majboor ho, mil nahi sakti
fir bhi, dhundtaa hoon tumhe raahon mein

duur ho meri pahuch se tum, jaantaa hoon
par, chaahtaa hoon aajaao meri baahon mein
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