SUROOR NAHI CHATA

by mamta bajpai on May 24, 2010, 05:02:17 PM
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DO CHAR PHOOLON SE MOUSAM NAHI AATA
BOUCHAREN HALKI HON TO ABRA NAHI BHATA
NAWAZISH HAI MUJH PE TO JAAM BHAR SAQI
QATARON KO SOONGHNE SE SUROOR NAHI CHATA
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«Reply #1 on: May 24, 2010, 05:31:12 PM »
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Quote from: mamta bajpai on May 24, 2010, 05:02:17 PM
DO CHAR PHOOLON SE MOUSAM NAHI AATA
BOUCHAREN HALKI HON TO ABRA NAHI BHATA
NAWAZISH HAI MUJH PE TO JAAM BHAR SAQI
QATARON KO SOONGHNE SE SUROOR NAHI CHATA
Mamta Ji bahut achhe magar...

Ek phool hi bahut hai mausam badalney ke liye,
Ek jaam hi kaafi hai bekhudi me dhalney ke liye..
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«Reply #2 on: May 24, 2010, 06:02:18 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob Mamta ji..!!!
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«Reply #3 on: May 24, 2010, 06:09:35 PM »
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waaaah mamta ji bahut khoob Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: May 24, 2010, 06:31:18 PM »
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NICE

Bebus mera dil manoj khud ko paata hai
chahakar bhi jo tujse bhula na paata hai
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«Reply #5 on: May 24, 2010, 11:27:21 PM »
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DHANYAVAAD DR PANDEYJI ! NICE RESPONCE ! EXELLENT!!!

QATARE ME SAMANDAR TALASH LOON KAISE
EK PHOOL SE MOUSAM KO BULA LOON KAISE
ITANI DIL-FAREB NAHI IS DIL KI FIZA
SIRF JAZBON SE VEERANE SAJA LOON KAISE
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«Reply #6 on: May 24, 2010, 11:29:42 PM »
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THANKS MANOJ JI!!!

BADA BESABRA MERA DIL TUJHE PAATA HAI
THODA BHI NAHI INTAZAR JISE BHATA HAI
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«Reply #7 on: May 25, 2010, 03:10:22 AM »
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nehle per dahla manta g
bahut umda sher likha hai
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«Reply #8 on: May 25, 2010, 05:27:04 AM »
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Great creation Mamta ji,lovely lines by Pandey ji and Manoj ji,bahut khoob icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: May 25, 2010, 09:36:55 AM »
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Quote from: mamta bajpai on May 24, 2010, 05:02:17 PM
DO CHAR PHOOLON SE MOUSAM NAHI AATA
BOUCHAREN HALKI HON TO ABRA NAHI BHATA
NAWAZISH HAI MUJH PE TO JAAM BHAR SAQI
QATARON KO SOONGHNE SE SUROOR NAHI CHATA

Waah Waah...

Bahut bahut Khoob Mamta Ji.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Quote from: drpandey on May 24, 2010, 05:31:12 PM
Mamta Ji bahut achhe magar...

Ek phool hi bahut hai mausam badalney ke liye,
Ek jaam hi kaafi hai bekhudi me dhalney ke liye..


Bahut Khoobsurat Jawaab DrPandeyji.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Quote from: mamta bajpai on May 24, 2010, 11:27:21 PM
DHANYAVAAD DR PANDEYJI ! NICE RESPONCE ! EXELLENT!!!

QATARQ ME SAMANDAR TALASH LOON KAISE
EK PHOOL SE MOUSAM KO BULA LOON KAISE
ITANI DIL-FAREB NAHI IS DIL KI FIZA
SIRF JAZBON SE VEERANE SAJA LOON KAISE


Bahut Khoob mamta Ji.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #10 on: May 25, 2010, 09:42:06 AM »
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Quote from: mamta bajpai on May 24, 2010, 11:27:21 PM
DHANYAVAAD DR PANDEYJI ! NICE RESPONCE ! EXELLENT!!!

QATARQ ME SAMANDAR TALASH LOON KAISE
EK PHOOL SE MOUSAM KO BULA LOON KAISE
ITANI DIL-FAREB NAHI IS DIL KI FIZA
SIRF JAZBON SE VEERANE SAJA LOON KAISE


Jazbo Se Veeraniyan Bhi Saja Leta Hoon
Kisi Jaam Ki Zaroorat Nahi,Uski Aankhon Mein Khud Ko Dooba Leta Hoon

Mehakte Hue Phoolon Ki Aarzoo Rakhta Hoon Main
Par Raah Chalte Kaanton Se Bhi Rishte Nibha Leta Hoon

Qatro Ki Pyaaz Rakh Kar Aakhir Samundar Ko Talaashu Kyon??
Main To Inn Aankhon Se Yuhi Samundar Baha Leta Hoon
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«Reply #11 on: May 25, 2010, 02:41:52 PM »
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OH GOD!AAKHIRI SHER  NE TO MUJHE LOOT HI LIYA.GAZAB KAR DIYA AAPNE KHWAHISH JI.BAHUT HI UMDA OR AALA DARJE KA SHAIR HAI YE.ISE KAHTE HAIN EENT KA JAWAB PATTAR SE .SACH MUCH HUM AAP KE JAWAB SE BAHUT MUTASIR HUE.
 Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you!
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«Reply #12 on: May 25, 2010, 02:42:54 PM »
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THANKS MADHUJI!
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MANOJ JI BAHUT BAHUT SHUKRIYA!
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Bahut khoob Mamta Ji
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